Drawing Manga in the Hokage World

Forget it, the author can't tell the difference between shadow clones and multiple shadow clones. The teleportation technique is also D-level. There are other details. The protagonist always has the idea that I am the smartest in the world and everyone else is retarded. He casually reveals the secrets of Nine Tails and other secrets in the form of comics, which is very demoralizing.

A novel about a female supporting role. It's like I've never seen a woman before. She slipped away.

Tsunade's role is really small, and being together with Tsunade is really sudden and forced. Alas, I have read two books by the author, and the themes are very good. In the later stage, I basically skipped them. If there is a female protagonist in the fanfic, the emotional line will be more attractive.

A crappy book, not worth reading, a waste of time

I think it's very good. Whether it's the logic or the promotion inside, the early writing is very good. The characters in it are very normal. The portrayal itself is also very daily, and there is no intrigue in the writing. Although some characters are written too simply, it does not affect it. However, when I wrote it, I was thinking that this comic would be noticed, especially the later it gets easier. I guessed that it might not be updated or that I couldn't write too much. Then the plot will speed up later.

The ending is a bit abrupt

It's okay, but there's just no heroine, so maybe I can't write it.

After drawing more than ten chapters of Naruto, I suddenly went to draw One Piece. I was more or less seriously ill.

Flaws in the underlying logic, cumbersome narrative, and a waste of time imitating cats and tigers.

The protagonist Wen Chao Gong also started to tremble.