Douluo: the Legend of the Spider King

There are some unpleasant things about this book: In the early stage, the protagonist and Tang San were arranged to be in the same college, but they failed to gain any benefit. In the mid-term, it was clear that Dugu Bo's poison had been dealt with in advance and Liang Yiyan's good things had been collected, but it was not done completely. Even Dugu Bo captured Tang San, but he was clearly present at the scene, but did not cut off the cause and effect of the two things. He simply left himself with unstable factors and turned what could be friendly combat power into neutral or even hostile. In the later stage, I couldn't endure it and didn't finish watching it.

He keeps bickering with Tang San. He has an invincible three-headed hell dog and three hundred thousand year spirit beasts by his side, but he doesn't kill Tang San and just keeps bickering with him. It's boring.

If you are dawdling in the early stage, you can have a golden mountain without using it. The character portrayal in the middle period was stiff. Just like the author, Dugu Bo did everything halfway. He wanted to kill Tang first. He didn't kill him on the spot. He took him back to his lair. He ran away without giving up the poison. He said he wanted to kill the three people who came with him, but he just slapped him and let him go. Tang San said that you had a way of finding a way out, but he still wanted to accept a disciple, but he stayed there for half a year. If the author couldn't copy the original work word for word, it would be smoother than this, and if he didn't write it clearly, what would happen if the readers take it for granted like you do? In the later stage, you should be invincible anyway. You can force him to outwit you and slap him in the face.

The male protagonist is a pure and wise child. I originally thought that Tang San was hypocritical enough. Who knew that the male protagonist of this book is the real double standard? The plot is like this and it still has a score of more than 9 points. I suggest changing the title of the book and the names of the characters, and just publish another book. Let's compare it with the original book to see which one is better! Hahahahahahaha

It's too bad and messy, always adding drama randomly. Let's not talk about the protagonist's own problem. He knows the martial arts given by the Sims, but how can he be sure that the face is similar to Bibi Dong? He has never seen Bibi Dong before. This kind of random plot adds too much to the reading experience. The system runs away at the beginning, and you keep adding drama to the system. If you want to make it more funny, you can add it through other plots, so why hang a tree. Since it's not a systematic article, don't always add a narration to it. How did the protagonist start? I felt sorry for Bibi Dong. He wanted to go to the Wuhun Hall after awakening his martial soul. As a result, he went wild everywhere and never thought about the Wuhun Palace. The protagonist has never grown up from the beginning to the end, and his mind will always be that of a child. He is still in his twenties after time travel, and is not as good as the original Tang San. The summary is poor. I don't know where the 9.0 Rating came from? A 7.0 Is already considered a face-saving factor.

I haven't read many Douluo fanfics on Qimao, but this one is almost the best I've ever read on Qimao.

I've finished reading. The single heroine Qian Renxue was having an affair with Ye Lingling in the first few chapters. In the end, Ye Lingling seemed to have disappeared. I couldn't figure it out. The ambiguity still persisted. It was quite uncomfortable to watch. Besides, later on, she had to make some kind of bet between the God of Death and the God of Poseidon. It took a long time before she killed Tang San. It felt like ink stains! Another point is that there is no description at all when doing things.

No way, no way, no one really doesn't know the plot of this book, right? You can go into this book and have a look. The writing is very good, Douluo Continent does not have Peerless Tang Sect, and it is much better to fall in love with Rabbit.

To be honest, the character of the protagonist is not even as good as Tang San. Yu Tianhen and Ning Rongrong have a good relationship with each other. The protagonist destroys his family without even a word of speculation, without discussing it in advance. Several people who had a good relationship with each other at the beginning turned against each other later. I watched it for such a long time, and I was still panicking.

At the beginning of the time travel, Bibi Dong was given the template, and the top-level twin martial souls were added to Bibi Dong's appearance, and then the system ran away. With this condition and familiarity with the plot, it has almost taken off. Later, the author may feel that the protagonist is not strong enough, and forcibly adds a sacred beast to a death god's inheritance. . . . The combat power was completely shattered. Afterwards, various hundred-thousand-year-old soul beasts were conquered, and the power of Wuhun Palace was added. The plot was immediately messed up. The progress was too fast. The most speechless thing was that even though he was invincible, he still had to go undercover in the Haotian Sect. . . .