Douluo's Heavenly Master

It looks good, but the male lead is really bad. First he touched Hu Liena all over and then ignored her, and then he ended up with Huo Wu. I didn't like Huo Wu at first. If you don't like it, why don't you just say you have a girlfriend?

Wherever he goes, he is targeted, and his life is in danger again and again, and the reasons are weird enough. It is very annoying to watch, and it is a negative review. The male protagonist is a time traveler, and Dugu Bo is also terrible. He has not yet obtained the Ice and Fire Eyes and the fairy grass there. What is even more disgusting is that after uniting with the protagonist to take revenge, he was also obtained by the protagonist's group. It is disgusting to watch, and a negative review.

I've almost finished it. To be honest, this novel is not for the Three Torment Masters. Many of the settings in it are okay. However, it is written as a fan. Compared with the Holy Mother, all kinds of things are targeted at the protagonist, not to mention the protagonist. They are all enemies of the protagonist group and pretend not to care. Since they are time travelers and they know the plot well, they are all enemies and do not fight against the protagonist group. The development history of Xiao Zha San is terrible. As a time traveler, you don't know that the fairy grass has also been harvested by the protagonist group, and you will see more about soul bones and the like later. It's speechless. His head is 16,000 years old and his left leg is 30,000 years old. Look at Xiao Zha San. Except for his head, which is over 50,000 years old, the others are all over 100,000 years old. He also has twin martial arts souls. How can you play with him as a single martial soul? Even if you can upgrade various runes, After reaching the god level, the divine clothing and artifacts are not on the same level, and others are still dual gods. Even if you still prove the divine throne, you still won't be beaten. The divine clothing and artifacts are not on the same level. The more you look at it, the more annoying it becomes. I suggest you not fall into the trap.

The previous chapter was okay, but what the hell was written about the part where the protagonist joins the Advanced Soul Master Academy? The protagonist is a time traveler. I don't believe that he doesn't know the virtues of those aristocratic colleges. Even if he doesn't know, he still wants to after hitting the wall so many times in the past. Is it interesting to lick your face? Did Wuhundian be eaten by you or something? With the money from Wuhundian, you look down on Wuhundian. Instead, you licked your face and went to those aristocratic academies. You want benefits but don't want to do things for others. How can there be such a good thing in the world?

The protagonist was almost beaten to death by Tang San and Xiao Wu, and Dugu Bo was also dead. He didn't want to give Tang San the fairy grass. In the soul master competition, Xiao Wu revealed that he had a hundred thousand year soul bone. He really made it the worst for himself. He was about to become the public enemy of Douluo Continent😓😓😓I just feel aggrieved. I don't recommend it.

In fact, you can write your own book like this. Those who want to eat the original work but also want to destroy the original work. I don't know if you are tired. Anyway, I am tired of looking at it. People who have not read the original work can't read it because they can't understand it. Those who have read the original work will think it is rubbish. What do you think of Tang San? It's embarrassing, but the original work has been finalized, and no matter how unpalatable it is, it's already set. You're trying to over-analyze the original work, which is not good, and that's wrong. At the beginning of the book, a family that wasn't in the original work was added, and I think it's okay. Since it's been added, why should you follow the original work? Isn't it good for everyone to go his own way? Can't we suppress him again during the key plot? Feel like vomiting after eating? If you leave the main line of the original work, you won't be able to continue writing, right? Both time and place.

A very high-quality fan novel, more exciting than the original version of Douluo Dalu! And it incorporates more Chinese culture, which is very immersive and more suitable for Chinese babies to read (๑ゝω╹๑)

I changed some settings, but the writing is not good and it's quite uncomfortable to watch. Besides, Pigfoot is not that good either, so I can't stand it.

At chapter 30, the plot starts to get a little confusing.

It doesn't conform to the Three Views. If I want to see someone who is close to Tang San, I might as well go back and read the original work.