Douluo: Titled Qin Demon, This Killer Is a Bit Cold

It's not good-looking at all. The protagonist's skills are useless. After all, he's from another world in the Star Reaching Tower, even Tang San has one. And is the hundred-thousand-year-old soul ring a decoration? At the same level, it is on par with Golden Crocodile, and its configuration can crush Qiandaoliu.

It feels a bit confusing. There are many people who should have met once, but it seems like they don't know each other the next time they meet. Qian Daoliu knows that the protagonist has won the battle, but Tang Chen doesn't know. Qian Daoliu should have paid attention to the protagonist. Di Tian went to help the protagonist fight, but he didn't recognize him again the next time he met. This happened many times.

Golden Crocodile Douluo spent half a year on his way to destroy the Haotian Sect, and his true soul power turned into a horse.

Is the heroine Gu Yuena?

I really don't understand the scene where Xiaorou meets the poisonous wolf from the year before last. I just changed Zhu Zhuqing's name to Xiaorou, and then replaced the Nether Leopard with the poisonous wolf from the year before last. I even forgot to change the Nether Leopard in one section. Is it so disgusting? I really thought that readers would forget the plot immediately after reading the previous part.

It's okay in the front, but it's confusing in the back. If it doesn't work, don't write about time travel. It's really

It's a bit fresh at the front, but it's uncomfortable to watch later.

Not bad

The more I look at it, the more powerless I feel

It looks a bit messy from the back, but it should be a foreshadowing of the protagonist's power and state of mind later on, but it's a bit much.