
Naruto: Starting with the Twin Kamui
火影:从双神威开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.8M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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All-time: Popularity.
1.2kChapters
2MPopularity
7.5kReaders
9.6Score
23.7kRatings
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After reading this book, I no longer follow Boruto. I discovered that Boruto is for three-year-olds. And the character of Uchiha is very powerful. The design is not invincible, but it can create a good, although not invincible, but better than invincible existence. Well, in other words, it means that the aura overwhelms others. This temperament is difficult to write about. This is very rare for the author. Support, I hope the author will not have frequent convulsions, and divide it every day so that we vipers chasing the critical point can also feast our eyes on it.
I feel that after reading your book, all the regrets in my heart are over (except for Jiraiya). The integration of reality and the world of Naruto is very wonderful, and some interesting things in the book (A Fei plays with excrement!!!) Also made me laugh so hard that my stomach hurt. In this book, the protagonist is not invincible like some novels. But one thing, I think Madara will not change. Whether in the TV original or in the comics, Madara is a arrogant influence, and he should not be with Uchiha Yu and the others (maybe the author's understanding of Naruto is different from mine). I think this book is very good: it does not blindly copy things from Naruto, but adds some very interesting new things (I think the underworld at the end is a highlight of the book, and of course I am also looking forward to the scene after Yu hits Takamagahara). I have a small suggestion: I hope the author can focus on the things about Zhen. I think being able to resurrect this thing is a bit too much, and directly occupying other people's bodies is a bit too much. I think it can be changed to integrate the will of the killed Otsutsuki with the will of the person who killed Otsutsuki, just like the Jinchuriki (like the Eight-Tails and Nine-Tails of course). I hope the author can consider it, and finally hope that this book will get better and better.
I feel like I could be more detailed and write more, hehe, because I'm afraid that if you write too fast, the novel will become shorter😂. After I caught up with it, I looked for a lot of Naruto adaptation series, but basically I didn't want to read it after just one glance. Really, this novel is very well written. First of all, I liked Obito and felt sorry for Obito from the beginning. This novel really made up for my regret. Later, it was really cool to form an alliance with Hashirama and Madara. Furthermore, I'm also wondering why some people can't be reincarnated from the earth. It's a pity to die, such as the Minato couple. Aren't they willing to be reincarnated by the earth to accompany Naruto to grow up? There are many reincarnations of dirty people in this novel, which is really great. Today I saw that the author is actually a girl. It's amazing. Compared with you, I really didn't understand Naruto 😂 (I feel the same way regardless of gender), and those reminders are actually unnecessary. It's really good to update three times a day. Most of them are like this. And, don't you think one chapter of this novel is very rich in content? It's simply awesome. It's tiring for the author to write too much. We don't want to rush it, let the author write well. It's great. Moreover, as a Hina fan at the time, I felt that Sakura's forehead was wider, like a dial, so I called her Sakura Oo. In this novel, I feel that it was well written hehe. Come on, author, I will keep chasing it, and I will lead my friends who are Naruto fans into the trap (it's obviously not a trap😂).
When I saw this in class, I opened the table and shouted "Awesome!". The class teacher pinched my neck and said "おもりたいのか?" (Do you also want to dance?), I pointed my finger on the head teacher's forehead and said "Serve as the class teacher last" (Forgive me, this is the last time for the class teacher). My deskmate suddenly yelled "ナイトカイ" (), and the homeroom teacher was kicked to the ground. The homeroom teacher stood up and said "うちのUchihaののMR.がHUんでくれます strongestとする" (my Uchiha homeroom teacher would like to call you the strongest). At this time, I sat down and said "てるだけじゃない!いいね!" (Don't just look at it! Like it!)
I saw advertisements elsewhere and came to this software. I think this is one of the few right choices in my life. After I came to this software, I have not read other novels. This is the truth. I saw this novel in the advertisement. Lin Yu and I have similarities. I also like the second dimension. I always hope to leave reality and enter the second dimension. But the only thing I can do is to imagine and put myself into it. This is the only comfort I can give myself. Next, evaluation: The author is thoughtful and broad-minded. He draws on Japanese mythology and has a lot of pupil skills. Readers are advised to take notes and draw lessons from other anime scenes. I hope they will appear more in the future. I hope some supporting characters will appear as much as possible, and unimportant people do not need to be described too much. I hope Yu's combat power is not just Madara and Hashirama, but more people who can match Otsutsuki. There can be more lovers. Please further improve Uncle Snake's combat power, and I don't really want Uncle Snake and Anko to be together! I hope there won't be a third time traveler. I hope there won't be a third time traveler. I hope there won't be a third time traveler. I hope that you won't lose your lover, child, or friend, please; I hope that your friends won't turn against each other; I hope that important people won't die. If they die, not only will the people around them suffer, but readers will also suffer! The sense of déjà vu in this work is very strong, and it is easy for readers to imagine the scene, but it is difficult to describe in detail the non-original characters. After defeating Otsutsuki, I hope that the whole world will live in peace. Although in this case, there will be nothing to write about. This is a trouble for the author. Please satisfy us, thank you! It took me three days to read the 720 chapters of this novel. I like it very much, and it has changed my understanding of Naruto. The author's thinking is very broad, but I hope the author will not create a stronger person than Otsutsuki. After all, everyone yearns for peace, and Yu's original intention is freedom. I really like this novel. I hope it will never end. Even if it does, I hope it will have a good ending. If you need anything, the author can send me a private message. Finally, please remember to give the author a bonus, I love you ♡
I was speechless when I saw the article you wrote about the protagonist and Danzo. The eyes on Danzo's arm were clearly from the time Danzo was marginalized by the Uchiha tribe after the Kyuubi attack. The Itachi Slayer and Shisui's eyes were all after that. How far in advance are you doing this? Aren't the eyes on Danzo's arm afraid that the Uchiha tribe will destroy him?
A teenage kid can write so well and beat the third generation at will. Did Obito have so much chakra at that time? When he was about to be unable to write or write to death, he had to penetrate it, use Susanoo, or substitute techniques, just like you use these ninjutsu without using chakra. The opponent almost died after just a few moves. A teenage boy almost beat the third generation to death in his heyday. Also, after traveling through Naruto, can you speak Japanese? There is also Susanoo's magical weapon, which seems to be endless. A broken book, rotten
When I was learning Shigulin Immortal Technique, I had already written down what would happen after 1,000 episodes. I, Li Goudan, would like to call you the Foreshadowing King.
A masterpiece, it made up for the regrets of my youth. Well done to the author.
It's pretty cool, much more passionate than Boruto's. I just watched 200 videos a day and then it was gone in three days. . . It's good, but it's not good to lie to Sasuke and Black Zetsu to deceive Nagato. I usually think about time traveling through Naruto and I'm not so imaginative. The author is still very good.