Days to Build Friendship at Hogwarts

It looks good. The plot and settings in the early and middle stages are relatively rigorous. The author also consulted a lot of information for support. However, the only drawback is that the emotional line of Morgana in the later period is unclear, and the presence of the hidden villain is too low, and the ending is a bit hasty. Overall, the author is quite thoughtful.

The first and middle chapters were very interesting, but I thought the heroine was Morgana, but in the middle period I was very sure that Qiu was the heroine. The plot was very interesting, but it was always between two girls. It was difficult to watch the finale. I originally thought this book would be good, but in the last chapter, I married two girls. What did I want to do? . . Waste of my time! ! ! It's better not to watch. .

There are holes dug but not filled, there are typos, and there are a lot of inconsistencies. Except for two of the enemies who killed the hero's parents, the rest didn't even know their names. It was the first time I read a novel in which the protagonist refused to avenge the murder of his parents. In order to suppress the male protagonist's combat power, the milestone rewards were directly cut off, and the system became dispensable. Morgana's love line is really a failure. Morgana confessed first and gave her three years to think about it. The Mirror of Erised and the Boggart clearly hinted that the male protagonist liked both of them. However, the male protagonist did not even dare to say that he liked them and refused to refuse. It was just that he wanted it and was afraid that the other one would fly away. Morgana saw the male protagonist spreading dog food and would look like a clown from time to time. In the end, both of them were accepted in the last chapter. I don't even understand the use of what was written in the first volume. The grimoire was ashes, an extremely awkward emotional line, and the role of a medieval queen didn't have much of a supporting role. In the end, it just died like a piece of cake on the side of the road.

The protagonist is always thinking about the plot B that was ruined by him. It's really funny.

How shameless

Thank you for your book, it is wonderful