Honglou: from Now On, I Am Jia Lian

Too little story telling and too many ideas. It's not like writing a novel, It's more like writing a review. The psychological descriptions of characters also require narration. Can't be included in the story. The continuity of the story is also average. There are two chapters of exclamations in the middle of a story. The exclamations have not been completely integrated into the story. It is the kind of addition that does not affect the plot without writing.

The plot is quite nonsense. After winning a small-scale battle with a thousand people, he was about to be granted the title of uncle. He said that he was too young and had to squeeze him before he could be granted the title of uncle. Otherwise, his merit would be enough to grant him the title. This is outrageous.

The narrative is procrastinating. I digress from the topic after writing one thing. Let's start popularizing science.

What is written here is a mess. Someone died in the family. When the old lady's son died, she immediately wanted to have fun. The younger generation below also wrote poems and drank wine. The protagonist also became an official immediately. Ding You understands that the author is just a second-hand person. I checked the information, but there is not much.

Just say something. My child, you really don't understand. Jia Lian won't keep his filial piety after his father dies? Just give it to you directly? Since the Second Spring Festival is still four or five years away from the start of the plot. How could he be thirteen or fourteen years old? There's no shortage of information, right?

Do all the women in Dream of Red Mansions, regardless of their seniority or noble birth, become concubines with pig's feet? How is that possible!

I've read dozens of chapters and I keep talking about the nihilistic history that you just made up and has no impact on the plot.

It was pretty good, but the ending was a bit abrupt.

The setting is good, the writing is average, the plot is relatively bland, there are no ups and downs, and the characters are not fleshed out. Many of the characters are divorced from the original setting of Red Mansion but are not attractive.

It can be said that the Red Mansion fanfic is top-notch, because he is actually half and half in the Red Mansion. The love between the children in the Red Mansion and the important events in the court are mixed. It is a pity that it collapsed a bit in the later period. The Red Mansion has almost no thread. It is all about the court, and then I can't write anymore 😂