The Immortal Maiden Is Fierce

Yes, when I first started reading the first sixty or seventy chapters, I felt that the book's rating of 8.1 Was too low. It should have been at least a 9, and a little higher than 9.2 Or 9.3 Would have been fine, but the further I read, the more I felt that the rating was not bad. The rest of the story is almost entirely about several women fighting over each other and getting jealous, which makes it more and more boring. From the first sixty to seventy chapters, it seems that the author has good writing skills and a very high level of writing, but the subsequent content overwhelms his ability. Although old bookworms will basically like to read some pornographic and refreshing novels later on, the gap between your front and back is really big. It feels like one mouthful of national treasures and two mouths of horse urine. Forget it, give it up, give it up.

It was too bland. After reading the first 70 chapters, they were all about fighting with three women, and I only felt good once when I entered the clan competition. Others drank plain water, but already felt pain and started to jump. I can't hold on anymore. Too watery.

When Zuo Lingquan was born, he had everything a mortal could have. The son of a famous family, unparalleled beauty, and a wealth of wealth... But when he was a toddler, he discovered that this world does not belong to mortals, but a world that can be cultivated. There are monsters, ghosts, walking on the wind, and immortality... But the protagonist's physical condition is not good enough and he cannot cultivate. However, through his own efforts, he was able to fight against immortal cultivators even before he knew how to cultivate immortality, and finally embarked on the path of pursuing immortality. Although it is classified as a fairy-xia, it is more about the love between children and the chivalrous spirit of Jianghu. There is a complete cultivation system in the book, which is different from the classic classification of levels. Although it is renamed in a unique way, it still corresponds one-to-one with the levels of the classic Qi-training and Fund-Building Pills. This fairy tale does not talk about the affairs of the court, but only uses the eldest princess to recruit a consort to give the protagonist a chance to enter the capital. Because of her outstanding appearance, she is a bit like a "show girl" and has a great chance of being selected. I was resisting in my heart, so I wanted to do something to end this unreliable political marriage. He killed monsters, attacked officials, and angered the eldest princess in plain clothes. He was just walking towards the immortal gate step by step, intentionally or unintentionally. Watching the protagonist's fighting scenes in the early stage, especially the fight and play with the eldest princess, is very eye-catching and has a strong sense of immersion. Even the dual cultivation later with the beautiful daughter of heaven and the master of a certain sect is eye-catching. The author vividly displays the characteristics of each heroine through various daily descriptions, including the shy Wanwan, the jealous and quiet one, the tough Jiang Yi, the playful baby Lingye...

Daily writing is quite interesting, but if you write too much, problems can easily arise. Especially the princess, who looks like a shrew in the back. In addition to being jealous when she appears, she also competes with others, making her look very petty. And no matter who they are, they have to compete for status. If it only has one or two paragraphs, forget it. It was quite interesting at first, but it turns out that the whole story is about a group of women competing for favor, so I might as well change it to a palace novel. Jiang Yi, who liked it very much at first, started to feel something was wrong the more she watched it. Ever since Ling Ye joined the team, Jiang Yi's plot seemed to consist only of jealousy, suppressing Ling Ye, and fighting for status. I used to be arrogant, now I am jealous. Others also compete for status, but not so frequently. Only the two who appear at the beginning play soy sauce in the main plot and can only be jealous in daily life. After all, Qingwan was good at R&D, and there wasn't much competition behind her. Jiang Yi was the only one who wanted to be the boss without doing anything, which seemed very annoying. This movie has more daily content than Cultivation of Immortals. If you like daily gags, you can check it out. Those who like Cultivation of Immortals more may not like it as much. Overall, it's a pretty good little h-story, and I recommend everyone to read it.

The author is so boring! This writing is too plotless, it's nothing but lustful. The main character is a dog.

The character of the drunk lady becomes less and less likable the more I write about it. Is it necessary to portray the character this way?

Really verbose

Well enough

This book is much worse than Shi Zi, and the style is similar. Guan Guan is not good at writing about cultivating immortals.

I ordered it. It's a good book. It's good to read. I love reading it.