The Primordial World: From the Start, I Made Nuwa Cry. Turns Out I'm a Mythic Great Luo

I am in the 5th grade of elementary school and can write like this for fun. The plot is really exciting.

I don't know what this author wrote? Rub the reader's IQ on the ground?

Good…

How can I put it this way? Except for the author talking a little too much, this book is very good. The author's writing is brilliant, the writing style is good, and the plot has its ups and downs, without missing any foreshadowing. Overall, I quite enjoyed reading it. In addition, I just hope that the author will write how many times the protagonist goes out to his own cave, okay? Even if he is hiding, he is not so stubborn. He has never gone out until now.

The writing is messy, and the typos are very serious. Many of them cannot be understood after reading for a long time. It is too fake and insults the readers' intelligence.

The writing is really rubbish, and it can turn a dignified saint into a rogue. Nuwa's saint's IQ is written to be the same as that of a mortal. What is a saint? The saint kills decisively when encountering trouble. You can pinch and calculate, and you can see it over time, but you still don't know who is standing in front of you? Author, is this your first time writing a prehistoric novel? I am also an old bookworm. When I read a book for the first time, I was so disgusted that I wanted to scold the author. I feel like my intelligence has been insulted by you.

This book makes me look like a bitch

The Nuwa in it is stupid

The villain is really brainless. He knows that he is not as powerful as the protagonist, but he still insists on provoking him. He is completely out of his own way.

So stupid