I Can't Believe I Can Read Ancient Divine Script

Although this novel is a bit of a stallion, I have to say that it is well written. Each character has his own story, and each female character has her own characteristics. Lin Zhiyun is dignified and elegant, Yin Ning'er is soft on the outside but strong on the inside, Li Bing is cold and domineering, Leng Wushuang is tolerant and kind, and Jiang Yushi is stubborn and cute. Love, Shangguan Junyi is charming and considerate... Even Gui Mandrill and Shen Wei are flesh and blood, and the details are handled well. Everyone's background is very complicated, making it difficult to think that the villains are all heinous. However, the update is too slow, so it is suitable to watch a lot in one go, and it is not satisfying to watch intermittently.

Nowadays, reading online articles makes me want to vomit, and dog-licking articles are even more disgusting. As long as the words are used to describe women, they are either fragrant, fragrant, fragrant, fragrant shoulders, etc. If the woman has dandruff, would you also want to take a few bites? No matter whether it is a man or a woman, the smell of sweat smells bad, so why does it smell so good? Are you willing to smell body odor?

As a semi-"senior" novel reader, after reading more than 500 pictures, I really can't help but want to give a few suggestions to the author. Readers who want to get into the trap can consider whether to read it after reading this review. This novel can be regarded as creating a new article idea, and it is indeed written according to this idea. However, as an imaginary system novel, this article contains several errors that can hurt readers' psychology. I would like to point out to the author that everyone is also welcome to discuss below the chapter comments of Chapter 1: First, the level division is not obvious. Putting aside the plot and characterization, in the novel, the division and creation of levels are very vague. In this novel, the character's cultivation levels are divided into human wheel, earth wheel, heaven wheel, spiritual master, and saint (the subsequent levels have not yet been seen). In the first 200 chapters, the spirit masters the protagonist encounters are mostly the best they can meet. The author also portrays the abilities of the spirit master very well, especially the female characters around the protagonist. However, in the following chapters, he failed to catch up with various events in time, and also "carelessly" omitted various factors that would lead to unfavorable development of events. In the description of other social environments, various relationships and entanglements between various characters are not clearly described. For example, the royal family of Daqian, as well as the official institutions of the entire country, completely lacked the rigor and stratification that an orthodox national institution should have. The description of the Jianghu sect only used words such as "the first sect" and "the first doctor" to prevaricate the past, and did not reflect at all how it was the "first sect". This is not only confusing for readers, but also makes the content of the article trivial. Secondly, the character creation is not clear enough or even unprincipled. Regarding character creation, I can tell that the author has spent a lot of effort on this, hoping that readers can strengthen their impression of the characters through dialogue and various reactions, and promote the development of the storyline. However, I personally think that the author's portrayal of the protagonist and the description of the characters in the harem made me read that the protagonist is "without sincerity" and is just a "stallion" who thinks from the bottom of his body, a "scumbag" who wants to include a good-looking woman in the harem. For example: When fighting the "Golden Eyes" (or something like that, he is a villain with a rare physique anyway), he actually had the energy to talk and flirt with the female character next to him. This made me feel very disgusted with the protagonist. The protagonist's behavior is also "disgusting". When the women in the book are paying for the protagonist's fault, the protagonist is still "molesting" the women. Moreover, every time the protagonist appears "at the last moment", the villain almost always dominates in the front and then GGs in front of the protagonist's "coercion/strength". Sorry, I don't appreciate such "cool points". As a woman, although all types of women are portrayed as normal in most places in the book, there were still a few places that made me very uncomfortable and even insulted me in person. Especially as a woman in the harem, although it is normal to change your personality, you can't become a stereotype, right? This left me speechless. As for the supporting characters (like Oni, Kaede), the portrayal is too much more than that of the protagonist, and the "supporting characters" appear to have a better perception of the characters than the protagonist, making it difficult for readers to distinguish who the protagonist is. The third point is that social concepts, storylines, and timelines are confusing. The world view of this novel is based on the "feudal cultivating immortality" genre that is the mainstream of online novels today. The characters and social relationships based on this are often the type of "feudal society" in ancient China. However, adding the element of cultivating immortals often inevitably changes social concepts, forming a trend of "asking questions first, leaving all sentient beings in the clouds". The protagonist of this novel not only travels through time, but also has a "system" and is an "anomaly" in this world. However, because the author failed to fully shape the characters and hierarchies, the entire social image was in a "semi-collapsed" state. Moreover, because many things happened on the same timeline without revealing it to the readers, the story line was confusing. Although the author wants to create different characters and different tasks take place on the same timeline, the improper proportions can easily make readers confused and bored. I have roughly summarized these three points, but I have not completely updated them. This is just my personal opinion. But I can still tell that the author has put a lot of effort into this book and is really optimistic about it. Because the language logic and the characterization of the "supporting characters" are indeed very good. I hope the author can go back and read it completely to improve the book. Or maybe this is the feeling that the author wants to present to the readers, then you can treat the question I raised as a fart. I will continue reading now to see if I can see that the author's writing skills are getting better and better in subsequent articles. If I find new questions, I will add them again. Book friends are also welcome to discuss them below my chapter comments. This one is not good, but I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Can the author change that star? Because I am a reader who prefers to hear and hear. I beg the author to change it a lot 😂😂

Please don't write *****

1. Don't always be the one who gets raped and the other gets raped. It's okay at first, but it gets more awkward as you go on. 2. The male protagonist was too calm when facing death, and too abrupt when he was rescued. 3. This book is written as if every man has "I am a pervert and I want to have sex" written on his face. 4. There is an air of double standards everywhere, as if you can only be a scumbag yourself and not others. 5. The protagonist's aura is so great that he can avert danger every time he encounters it.

Judging from the first 200 chapters, I like the character of the protagonist. He is resolute but not cruel, but also a little cunning and nonsensical. It is worth reading. By the way, I would like to complain about many of the protagonists in the Seven Cats and Fairy Tales books. No matter how I read them, I feel like Lin Pingzhi, a eunuch, selfish, cruel, and without a moral bottom line. There are blood feuds and happy grudges that wipe out people at every turn, and the plot is all templated with pretense and slap-in-the-face routines and clichés. It is also very hidden and you have to read at least 50 chapters before the plot unfolds to discover the stupidity of the content. It is very uncomfortable for readers to abandon a book halfway through. One more thing, my habit of choosing books is to read around 9.0. If it is too high, I won't read it, and if it is too low, I won't read it.

It's too much of a virgin bitch, too much of a dog licker, it's boring to read, and it's hard to grasp the scale to write this kind of article, which is difficult for most people to accept.

Brothers, I have read hundreds of chapters, and I would like to express my opinion. First of all, I have read books for so many years, and I have never been so frustrated. NTR can't stand it anymore, and it goes on endlessly. For the first time, I have a fear of novels, and I feel particularly frustrated. , And secondly, there are too many stars, it's too confusing, and every plot can be written into two or three chapters. Also, if you don't like ntr like me, don't read it. I tried poison, and I was almost pissed off. The main character is a bit rz. Alas, I regret reading this book and gave up on it.

The article is just like an epileptic patient, chaotic, with daggers here and there... The writer may also think that his technique is superb... But in the end, no one reads it...