Age of Elf: Starting from Mewtwo

The part about subduing Charmander was really poorly written. I just missed it when I saw it. In order to save Charmander, who has mediocre or even poor qualifications, you have to use the mythical beast skill stone. The protagonist also said that life is priceless. I really wanted to laugh. It's like you encounter a stray dog ​​or someone else's pet dog on the road that is about to die. You can save it, but the cost is one billion. Who will save it? Even if you want to write that the protagonist is very loving and loves elves, can't you write like this? The Peerless Virgin is not as loving as you. Is it reasonable to spend one billion to save a dog that doesn't even know if it has an owner?

It's good-looking, but it's not popular enough and the author doesn't have the motivation to write it down.

The final ending is a bit shabby

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading it halfway through. The female characters are so poorly created. The author thinks he writes as if he respects women, but the look down on and condescension that almost overflows from the heart is really disgusting. Although I wanted to write about girls with different personalities, I ended up showing them to be interested in the protagonist. They basically care about appearance, and then show that the protagonist is not moved by appearance... It's weird. The character setting is also uncertain and contradictory. It is just to highlight the B character. If you want to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, just pretend to be a pig, and if you want to hide, just hide. It is written as if you want to show off but you are embarrassed, and you talk about being vulgar and developing while showing off your knowledge. I wrote about the protagonist's tribulations and rewards... Except for the beginning, which was okay but then turned very stiff... Giving him tribulations just to give him a golden finger, although it's not particularly abrupt... But it's not that smooth either... It's over nine o'clock. It's really overrated. Not recommended for girls to watch, the further you go to the back, the more uncomfortable you become. Recommended for boys to watch, after all, the female characters and golden fingers are all in line with your gender.

OK

That's it

Brother, you are really lazy. There are so many abbreviations and too little water. It is not enough to read.

Nice

The ending is unsettling

I have to close Mewtwo at the beginning.