There's Something Terribly Wrong with My Hogwarts

The reason why Harry Potter is so popular is probably because of "Hogwarts" - this paradise that we imagine in the depressive reality. Freedom, magic, innocence, friendship, pure and beautiful. This book obviously does not realize this. It viciously regards certain failed education systems as a standard and pursues them from the real world to the magical world, making people even have uneasy dreams. The name of the devil is well-deserved haha~

This is a system-flow HP fanfic that was completed in 21 years. The plot is smooth, the sentences are smooth, the story is strong, and the various settings are relatively novel. The author has also made various attempts. I can only say that the response has been good and bad, but because of this, you will see a different scenery in this novel from other HP novels. In addition, there are still many controversial points in this book: in the early stage, the controversies mainly came from the setting and plot. For example, the question of how many Galleons can be exchanged for British pounds and other secondary settings made some readers feel far-fetched, or the plots such as the disappearance of the protagonist's magic power and the branch plot of the Soviet Union, these plots have mixed reviews. In the middle and later stages, the protagonist reformed the academy system. Some people found it interesting, while others found it boring. In addition, in terms of plot development, the protagonist originally had power, but he did not use it well. Also, he understood his own shortcomings and needed to learn certain spells. This happened many times in the article, but he never learned it, which led to him falling into some dangers. Some people felt that it was too playful and boring. There are two main problems with this book: the first is that the rationality and cheating balance are not good, the strength improves too quickly in the first two years, and the car is not stopped after completing the main line, and it can only end in a hurry in the future, which is a pity; the second is that as I said before, some novelties have been made attempts, and then based on readers' feedback to decide whether to continue these plots, so these plots appear to be anticlimactic, and the various characters who appear in these plots are not mentioned in the later stages, and the character descriptions appear to be sloppy, so overall the novel also appears to be anticlimactic. Overall, this is an HP-themed novel that is off the beaten path but worth reading. It can give people a relaxing experience in their spare time (as long as it doesn't take it too seriously🤣). Again, I believe it will bring a good reading experience to some readers.

Spoiler alert, it sucks

It's unfinished, and it's really not interesting to transform Hogwarts into a Chinese-style education. Some interesting settings are not discussed, but some irrelevant things are ignored.

It's weird and a bit arrogant. I have no idea what he's writing. It's not interesting at all. Don't read it at all.

"This time the phoenix did not rise from the ashes again, the bat A cup of toast to the messenger, Ziyu came with the letter and kept watch for seven years; Have a toast to Dobby, swear to protect your best friend to the death, and sleep by the seaside; A glass of toast to Lily, whose green eyes conceal tenderness and the fragrance of lilies; A toast to James, see the true love in life and death, die protecting love... Pure entertainment The book is very beautiful

The building is unfinished, and the plot is a bit broken

How should I put it, I feel a little weird. If this book is about a general Western fantasy, I think it's fine. But if it's about Hogwarts fan fiction, I feel something is wrong. It feels like it lacks the purity of the original magical world and adds too many things, but it's still readable. But the house elf in the second part, haha, this elf can actually harm people under so many awesome magicians, and it hasn't been discovered yet. Dumbledore deliberately chose to let it go in the end, so my evaluation is just a 6.

The book is unfinished. Although some plots are good, this book is more like a Chinese educator coming to Hogwarts to reform. It's not that today's Chinese education is bad, it's just that people read books and fanfiction just to have some fun in their depressing lives, and there's not much need to do this. And I personally am a fan of original works. Some plots in the original work are missing. Of course, there are some well-written big scenes in this book, such as the protagonist's battle with the basilisk. The overall plot is okay, but rather than writing some jokes, the author would rather innovate some novel plots to attract attention. (The above are purely personal opinions and some small suggestions. If you don't like them, don't criticize them.) I think you can read the books according to your own preferences. The comments are just a reference. After all, many of the books you like are discovered by yourself, rather than relying on comments that carry certain personal thoughts.

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