Douluo: Traveling Through Huo Yuhao, Starting with Yao Lao

My evaluation is: among the fan fictions I have read, it is the best. I feel it even surpasses the original work. "Bing Qing Yu Jie" my great sage Tang San is vividly depicted, even better than the Great Love Immortal Fang Yuan. Fang Yuan was decisive in killing and thoughtful. And my innocent Tang Dashanren was so crazy that he divided his daughter into two halves, one Wang Dong'er and the other Wang Qiu'er. Our Tang Dashanren still knew how to play. First, they destroyed the Wuhun Palace, which maintained law and order on the mainland, helped civilians awaken their martial souls, provided free gold coins to civilian soul masters to practice, and ended disorder to promote the unification of the continent. Then the three brothers of the Thousand Jun Ants found a way to kill themselves because they entered the habitat of the Azure Bull Python and the Titan Ape. The three brothers moved to another house after the two overlords died, and they never did any bad things. Because they were high-end versions of Tang San's previous spirit rings, they also had a way to kill the spirit beasts.

I have read Chapter 200 now, and I feel pretty good about it. The only heroine shown in the introduction is Wang Dong'er. Where are my Nana and Wang Qiu'er? Let them appear and mess around with the protagonist. I can't wait! !

Furthermore, you are really a good helper to Sanshao, filling in so many non-existent settings for him. Oh, by the way, it turns out that you call the department that jointly controls the nuclear bomb trivial. I really didn't expect that the article that wanted to relieve my worries and gain popularity had a rating of 8.9. Here I can tell you, old man, undercover has always been a normal political or military behavior. Don't write novels saying that undercovers are lj. In our country, when undercovers get important information and so on, they play themselves like Shrek.

It's so rubbish. Go back to raising pigs, and you've also got a latitude. There's no heroine so far. Soul Saint fights demigods. Do you want to see what you're talking about? The combat power has collapsed like this. It's too bad. 471 Abandons the book. Even if it's water, it's still disgusting.

This book is very poisonous. It is highly not recommended for those who have read the original work, nor is it recommended for those who have not read the original work. No nonsense, just talk about the pros and cons. Advantages: Many local languages ​​are relatively humorous. It can be seen that the author has dabbled in many topics and at least put his heart into writing these chapters. Moreover, some settings still have merit. Let me start by saying that there are many shortcomings, so I recommend reading it. Disadvantages: It's extremely weak, and it's impossible to stay away from Shrek. The most common way to write it is "Thinking of this, Huo Yuhao couldn't help but sigh, if Wuhun Palace hadn't been..., Then maybe now..., Looking at the hypocritical Shrek...", I thought it was okay to write it once or twice, but he often talked to me about irrelevant things. The most outrageous thing is that in Chapter 146 (it seems), he opened two big chapters without writing anything to specifically criticize Shrek, which can be called an emotional trash can. The second is the malicious deconstruction of the plot and characters of the original work. I have no objection to criticizing Tang San. Xiao Zha San is indeed very inappropriate in the second part, but the author directly pushes most of the positive characters in the original work into despicable and stupid opposites. To give a few examples, Xuanzi can In order to increase his strength, he indiscriminately kills students and becomes an evil soul master. Dai Hao can make his two sons kill each other for the sake of the temporary strength of the Duke's Palace. Fan Yu can still favor his wife and perform some unsavory operations even though he knows the whole story and the protagonist's strength. Third, the protagonist has a bad personality. Although Huo Yuhao in the original work was full of hatred and was finally controlled by Tang San, at least he was kind and grateful. However, Huo Yuhao in this book could enjoy taking other people's notes and watching other people's jokes. He could also let the sect pretend to be an evil soul master and attack a country that had a good impression of him and tried to recruit him for zero yuan for a piece of ten thousand-year soul bone (that is, the Xingluo Auction). The left arm bone of the Ice Jade Scorpion (that time), and in the time when the Death Messenger used the words "chicken soup is coming" to describe the miserable situation of the Shrek Seven Monsters of the previous generation, and after getting the herbs he asked for in the Ice and Fire Eyes, he crossed the river and broke the promise to catch all the fish. In comparison, Tang San was bright. At least Tang San knew how to be grateful, respect his opponents, and was very interesting to his friends.

Is this worthy of decisive killing? He is simply a money-splitting boy in Douluo Continent, a Buddhist and Taoist saint. Voice insult? It's okay. I'll forgive you. Killing intent? Forgive you. I forgive you for cheating on me. It's a game, it's okay, I just injured you and you'll be fine after some treatment. He only kills the protagonist if he offends him to death. Is this called decisive killing? There are two million people in the country. The local college and Mingde Hall where they grew up were completely bombed. How many geniuses, soul guides, teachers, and materials laboratories were there. The soldiers wanted to parade the murderer's body through the streets, but the protagonist refused, and finally buried the murderer's body intact. Go to Shrek City to take revenge and give them 15 days to escape. Doesn't this give them a chance to transfer the fire? Qianjia is an example. There are actually two level 98s secretly. After removing the Eyes of Ice and Fire, the words and murderous intentions of those immortal herbs made me kill them all. It's not like they don't have the strength, and there are too many spiritual treasures from heaven and earth. In the end, I gave them opportunities (both transformation pills and magic circles). In the end, I only picked some basic herbs and received the rewards they deserved. Mr. Mu tried to kill the protagonist many times and violated the rules of the duel, but in the end he did not kill him and let him go back to Shrek to deal with his funeral. There are too many similar things. It can be said that there is no heroine, no emotional drama, and the protagonist is invincible all the way. Snow Emperor is not the heroine. Meng Hongchen liked the appearance of the male protagonist since she was a child. She fell in love at first sight and the protagonist slowly accepted it. He is irresponsible and not proactive. This is the emotional line. The praise is to let more people see it! Click like to become popular and avoid pitfalls for subsequent readers

I can't stand it. This is a breath of fresh air in fan fiction. There aren't many plots with female characters in more than 300 chapters. The protagonist's family has always been the dominant one. If you don't plan to write female characters, don't include those female characters in the introduction. It's really funny. There are still fans who don't have a harem.

Let me comment again. I can only say that this protagonist is worse than Tang San. The author is completely emotional. I came to read the novel, not to watch you spit out garbage.

Let's look at the characters with the most serious problems first. From the more than 300 chapters I have read so far, it seems that the setting of the killer is completely to pave the way for killing people happily. As a killer protagonist, the whole story is inseparable from all kinds of bad jokes. He is like a tough ylg, and he has a lot of sexual desires in his heart. The character of the protagonist has a sense of fragmentation, and he looks like a villain who has succeeded. Let's look at other character issues The biggest problem is Taotie Douluo Xuanzi, who is called a black man for the sake of being black. You said bring it into the perspective of the protagonist, I was disgusted by Xuanzi If you don't bring in the perspective, the whole text looks disgusting. He created an old man who is not serious and unreliable, and he has been doing all kinds of brain congestion. I have to say that the author's writing skills are superb, and he can give people a nauseating feeling through the screen. In terms of writing, The whole text smells like cans. Eight out of ten sentences spoken by the protagonist are bad jokes. After finishing the bad jokes, he starts to complain about the failure of Tang San's characterization, and frantically dumps garbage on the readers. The protagonist's image is not like a normal person, and is completely the image of ylg that has been absorbed into the brain by bad jokes. Lei's method of adding emotion is also very bad. What he sees is that the readers are angry and the protagonist is happy, not the readers.

All I can say is, the protagonist is like this, why should he still study under Yao Lao? You are not even a hair above Xiao Yan! If it were Xiao Yan, no matter how much Xiao Yan hated Shrek Academy, he would at least have a reminder. After all, it would not be difficult for the evil soul master to use corpses as bombs. Even if they were on good terms with each other, he would be able to save them. But as for the protagonist, there is not even a reminder. You still know the plot after all. Even if you just mentioned it like the original novel, not only did you not save him this time, but you also deliberately killed a few more people, right? That is to say, it is free in Qimao. If there is a fee, I will be sick for days🤮🤮🤮