The Hokage of the Pirate World

It's a top-notch fanfic and worth a read. It perfectly combines Naruto and Pirates, and the character's personality is also clearly described. However, the writing of the system is not very good. When can you redeem the ninjutsu and how many mission points are there?

After watching most of it, the early part was okay. The problem is the war part. Why do you have to save Ace? It's hard to persuade the damn ghost. He's been reminded twice. If he doesn't listen, he will be killed if he insists on going. He even sent a mission to save him. It becomes more and more troublesome after that. What's the result of being so arrogant and domineering after doing it for so long?

What? I gave up immediately when I saw the top. Garp was not a qualified grandfather to begin with, but it turned out that he turned against the Navy, which was okay. The male protagonist has no sense of participation at all. He has no idea what Amaterasu is doing. He beats the white beard and shaves him. When the black beard comes out, the male protagonist runs away and forcibly saves Ace?

Good

It's perfect, it makes up for a lot of regrets, and the ending is good too

Above average, saving Ace really lacks the emotional foreshadowing and plot advancement that it should have, and Momonosuke is not dead. The mission rewards are too complicated. By the middle stage, I can no longer remember what to return. There is no difference between S rewards and A except for points.

You didn't kill Momonosuke? Keep it for the New Year? It pisses me off! Ahhhhhhhhhh! Everyone, please stop reading, I'm so angry that my lungs are exploding! It's so frustrating! !

The plot is very rubbish, the depiction of the protagonist, the character's personality and combat power system are all terrible.

Not bad, give it a good review.

The writing is quite good, but it's a bit immature, which I don't like. I can't read it, so it's not too much to give a bad review.