One Piece: The Right Way to Use Conqueror's Haki!

It was difficult to defeat the 18 million pirates in front of him, but he also fought back and forth with Hawkeye. Even if he didn't use all his strength, he could still defeat him? Hawkeye's inner monologue was actually still heartily approved. It's funny, thinking about the admiral having a little time with him is still heartily satisfying.

This is the worst pirate fanfic I have ever seen. First of all, the plot is not smooth. After writing about an island, I just rushed through it in a few sentences, as if a person has no body and only has a head, hands and feet.

The previous plots of Golden Lion were okay

The protagonist's full-level domineering and domineering garbage can't even suppress some of the little ones, and their combat power is also exaggerated.

The plot is okay, the fighting power is broken, the male protagonist is weak, and the author is empty, lonely and cold

It's a harem story, and it's not just based on itself. I use all the advantages of knowing the plot to pick up girls.

You are not writing a novel. You are clearly telling a story in a way that cuts off the beginning and ends. Your combat power is also jumping around.

➕The emotional scene is really a failure