Siheyuan: Escaped from Famine in 1952 and Suppressed the Beasts

It's not very good. The period novel is written in a pretentious and slap-in-the-face style. It's just that Pig's Foot has traveled through time, has a great background, has great luck, is great at work, is good at everything, knows the future direction, has no sense of planning in doing things, and just does whatever he wants. All the birds are still stubborn, but they just won't accept it, and they keep looking for trouble with Pig's Foot. Pig's trotters just can't win over them. He works in the street office and doesn't show his fangs. There is basically no main line and he relies on his imagination to keep the plot going. Nothing readable.

Not bad, and being violent is not bad either. . . The best thing is to prevent He Daqing from leaving and Yi Zhonghai from becoming a great man 😂😂😂 so that Jia Dongxu can't marry Qin Huairu and Qin Huairu to marry Silly Zhu 😂😂😂 so that Xu Damao can't marry Lou Xiaoe 😂😂😂 and then write the deaf old lady as an enemy agent, the offline agent of the agent captured by the protagonist, then it will be perfect😁😁😁

The plot was okay, but her private life was too messy. She would have sex with a girl when she saw her, and even Qin Huairu's mother would not let go, and she would even have an affair with her. In those days, an older peasant woman who worked hard in the countryside, exposed to the sun and rain every day, and suffered from hunger and cold all day long, could already tell what it would be like just thinking about it. How could this be said?

Nowadays, these so-called writers think that the more beautiful women write about them, the more popular they will be? ? ? Nausea and unappetizing

Write a book! It just needs to be wild and unconstrained. As long as it matches the history of the time, it is a good book. If you want to read with your brain, just read books on history. Reading here is just a pleasure.

Seeing that the Siheyuan is focusing on pensions, why would the people in the Siheyuan think that the pension should be divided among them? Normal people should not have this idea.

A very good Siheyuan article, no typos, smooth writing, good plot, not wordy! It looks very good so far. I hope the author will work hard to write it well and support it!

Too watery! I've written three Siheyuan books and put them aside to practice? ? ?

After reading Chapter 50, the plot is confusing and illogical. At the beginning, I wrote about Chen Xueru wearing a cheongsam and riding a bicycle. How high should I turn the fork to ride? Let's not talk about the forced pulling in the courtyard. Anyway, it's the same old routine and everyone is tough. Besides, the inheritance is only about 200 yuan. You have to buy several kilograms of meat and white flour steamed buns every day and give them to the relief station. How much wealth do you have that you don't know others can estimate? Then there is the pile of belongings given by the master, thinking that the basement is safer than the system space. You, a layman, can find out. Are professionals worse than you? Then there is the matter of your grandpa passing away due to illness or tuberculosis. Almost a year later, the rolling mill notified you that it would provide you with a pension of 500 yuan. It was due to illness and not a work-related injury. Lou Bancheng personally received you as a gesture of goodwill and invited you to work in the factory at will. You think it is too embarrassing for a systematic person to work for someone. Now if you want strength but not strength, and if you want status but no status, you are ready to live off your master. If you are not strict enough to develop, why don't you go to heaven! Readers don't like to use their brains, but they are not brainless.

It's okay to have more women, but if you write about having an affair with your mother-in-law, it's your fault. Stop writing, just let it suck.