Douluo Dalu: I'm Really Not the Ice God!

Dear author, you have already said that you will write a female protagonist. Why do you have to be unclear with Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing? Although I can see that it is their wish, why do you want to disrupt their original trajectory? It feels a little bit irresponsible. I understand that you want good results, but you really didn't handle it well and I can't continue reading.

There is no logic at all. The awakened martial soul refuses the martial soul hall, fearing to be involved in the turmoil between Qiandaoliu and Bibi Dong. The protagonist has read the original work, what happened, Hu Liena was killed by Qiandaoliu? Or was the golden generation killed by Sendo Liu? It would be more reasonable to say that he was afraid of Tang San. He recognized Qian Renxue as his brother. As a time traveler, if he didn't find out the true identity of the prince first, it was Xue Qinghe who should help him. He is his brother after all, so don't get fucked. Ren Xue was tortured to death, so of course there is no need for psychological burden if he fucked Ren Xue. He hadn't found out his brother's identity for two and a half years. If such a stupid time traveler met Xue Qinghe for the first time, he would probably have to recognize the thief as his brother in the future. Qian Renxue hugged and hugged the protagonist and acted so affectionately that she was unrecognizable. Don't know about temptation? Next to him, Snake Spear Douluo, Qian Renxue called him by his first name, and Ning Fengzhi also became the prince's teacher, but she still felt that the prince was 50% female. Qian Renxue sends the protagonist to become a disciple of Chen Xin. How will he destroy the Qibao Glazed Sect and his younger brother's sect in the future? Does this conform to Qian Renxue's logic? Of course you are the author, and you will arrange the subsequent plot, but the logic does not make sense. Later, it turned out that he was an ice god in his previous life, and he was not an earthling in his previous life. Is it meaningful to leave a way to let himself know that he was an ice god in his previous life? It would be better to leave some opportunities to deal with Tang San.

How can I put it? I read it in one go. The story is pretty good (compared to other fanfics) and it is also the second fanfic I have read. To be honest, compared to those that traveled through Tang San and so on, they are basically the same. It is really good that a character is created independently and has nothing to do with the original work. This is called fanfic. The writing is good, but you need to practice more, and remember not to use your brain when reading the book! ! !

Before about 200 chapters, I would call it a good book. Before about 550 chapters, I would call it garbage. There are a lot of typos in the plot of the war with Haotian Sect. It is obviously a passionate battle and touching, but it has to be messed up. And the whole book feels like three people wrote it at the same time. Before chapter 200, there was one author, before chapter 550, it was another author, and the final battle was by another author. What the hell, it's a mess.

The protagonist is the same as 🐶, they are both decades old, and they still pretend to be young everywhere. It's really disgusting. While talking about this single heroine, he is also having an affair with another woman. It's so new, and the writing is pure🐶💩

Disadvantage 1. Plot content. Although the overall framework is good, too much of the content is greasy and crooked. It's more than adequate. If one or two crooked chapters are acceptable every twenty or thirty chapters, it would be a bit uncomfortable if the story is crooked every six or seventy-eight chapters. 2. Before the male and female protagonists reveal each other's details, one pretends to be stupid and the other makes up his own mind, and then they pretend to be men and belittle each other. Are they gay? 3. Although there are relatively few single-female protagonists about Douluo, since you are already going to write a single-female protagonist, why bother writing about girls who are obsessed with male protagonists at all times? 4. A fantasy novel about sweet pets... 60% Sweet pets, 40% fantasy

Although I don't like single female protagonists, I think this one is okay.

I have read more than two hundred chapters. The book is really good. There are some unreasonable things but not too many! There is no such thing as the protagonist not being able to recognize Qian Renxue, and there is no such thing as not joining the Wuhun Palace. The key point is the part of this book going to Wuhun City, which was very well modified. Among the many fanfics I have read before, this is the only one. I won't spoil it, you can check it out for yourself, it's a really special treatment. And he didn't say licking Tang San, nor did he say killing him or anything like that!

Can't you write a little more at the end?

In the previous life, the protagonist was an earthling who traveled through time and became an ice god. He was very good and very powerful. Faced with "Xue Qinghe"'s many intimate actions, he still thought he was 50% female and 50% male. He was a piece of cake and didn't want to get involved in disputes? Show off your talents, refuse to simply refuse, and have peach blossoms rolling in? ? Ex