In the World of One Piece: Betraying the Heavenly Yaksha from the Start
人在海贼，开局背刺天夜叉
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 890k Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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8.9Score
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Overall, it's pretty good, and the context is relatively clear, especially since the concept is not limited to pirates, and there are no characters running around or always in other worlds. It's just that the handling of the pirates is not very good. It feels like they are not at the point where they must be killed, which flattens the image of the protagonist a bit. There are also Reilly, Beckman, etc., Who were imprisoned or killed and were overqualified. Smart people should have reacted to the general trend. Finally, the ending is a bit rushed. Im should not be that weak, which makes people feel a bit regretful. I hope there can be more extras, haha.
The plot is exciting, but the ending is rushed. But it's okay if it's not unfinished. Not many One Piece novels can write a good ending. After all, One Piece is not finished. If you write some random endings, you will easily be caught and scolded by people traveling through time and space...
True: Kill decisively and the pirates will die. It would be better if the ending wasn't rushed
Every time the enemy is about to die, the protagonist will make all kinds of mistakes and the enemy will be rescued. Then after the enemy kills the protagonist's people, the protagonist will regret it in all kinds of pain, ha!
The story and plot are still okay. The system is a bit confusing, but at least useful things have explanations on where they come from. No one has a problem with pig feet having space. Pig's Foot uses a lot of abilities and no one thinks there's a problem.
The ending was okay. . .
It's very good. I don't know how to praise it, but this is the only One Piece fanfic that I have read in its entirety. It has a rich plot, although it may be a little bit toxic in the early stages, but it is undeniable that this is a good book and it may improve in the future and the writing will be better.
This is a masterpiece among Pirates fanfics. There are a bit too few women. The Empress is a bit too rational. Isn't the protagonist less charming than Wang Luffy?
Keep suppressing it. If you don't know how to use cheats, just don't write. If you have cheats, you can still play and slowly upgrade the flow.
Not bad, worth a look