My Identity as an Immortal Has Been Exposed

The day I met her, she was constantly looking down at her phone, completely out of place at the dinner table. Afterwards, he was incredibly attentive to her. One day, someone caused a scene at the company, and she was cut by broken glass. He carried her to the hospital like a whirlwind. She asked him why he was being so good to her. He finally spoke: "I want you to update faster."

Well, to be honest, I came here because of the novel's title, cover, and synopsis. After reading over twenty chapters, I discovered the protagonist is an old man, unlike the one on the cover! 🙊🙉🙈 But the plot, relationships, and characters are all very well written—it's amazing!!!

The first and most obvious problem is the author's poor writing style. All the supporting characters, when facing the protagonist, only kneel. There are many ways to express gratitude, and people have different personalities, yet all the characters are essentially just a shell of a model. The constant kneeling only demonstrates the author's weak writing ability.

I'm using this one and only chance to leave a positive review to urge the author to update soon! I'm waiting for it every day 😤

It worked fine at first, but it stopped working once it got dark.

Well, the premise is great. It's a lighthearted, enjoyable story with the added element of live streaming, and it's not just mindless bragging. It's pretty good.

I read a hundred chapters and then stopped. The protagonist is just a selfish old man with no country, no family. Every time he disappears for a hundred years, his descendants are wiped out by others. He achieves immortality himself but never teaches his wife and children, preferring them to die rather than teach them. He even says that one immortal being in the world is enough, as more will cause bad things. He's incredibly selfish.

It started off well, but ended poorly.

Let me say this: I've caught up to chapter 374. The first third of the book was great, very enjoyable. But after the introduction of the dark world, it started to feel a bit off. And then, around chapter 300, they used the "Heavenly Dao Reboot" method, basically starting all over again from chapter one? I feel like I've been tricked. But you guys can still give it a try; maybe it'll be slightly different after the reboot.

Honestly, if one has achieved immortality, why must they engage in worldly affairs? Earning more money is understandable, and helping loved ones improve is reasonable. But why, after ten lifetimes, has one still not escaped the state of detachment? Ten lifetimes span ten thousand years—an incredibly long period of time that almost no one has experienced.