The Charming Beauty of Peach Blossom Spring

The preface does not match the postscript

The more I write, the worse it gets

As a cool novel, there are still many chapters that are more exciting and good-looking. The male protagonist Yun Yu is well-capitalized and passionate. There is nothing appetizing about the plot of Liu Xiahui pretending to be a monk and eunuch. Unfortunately, the overall plot has many shortcomings. The male protagonist is armed with martial arts and defies the inheritance of heaven, but he is busy doing business to make money all day long. He has no money to pay back. He is a hypocritical saint who practices medicine without making any money. He is not very decisive in killing and doesn't know how many evil people he has spared. He is pregnant with Yunyujue but does not know how to practice dual cultivation and cannot bring his own woman a little benefit to improve her realm. What is the use of just making some small gains for herself, especially what kind of woman this male protagonist is. Having slept with so many men, women are very damaging to the protagonist's halo. He has slept with countless women but doesn't take them seriously and can just let them find boyfriends and husbands. All this makes people feel entangled, depressed, aggrieved and disgusting. It doesn't matter if the story is cool, dirty or slutty, but the protagonist must have a normal man occupying his woman's territory. There is desire and a sense of responsibility, and the ending is that the harem is in disarray. It is very unfinished. I have seen many truly excellent and cool novels such as Ru, Village Flower, Little Shennong in the Flower Room, the protagonist Lin Fan: The Best Little Fairy Doctor, etc. The protagonists are sentimental but not sentimental, romantic but not obscene, and have a strong sense of responsibility. This is the highest level of refreshing novels.

Positive energy

It was interesting to watch at the beginning, but later it felt like the script had been changed. Yes, my brain couldn't keep up with the rhythm, and the plot was mediocre.

Is the author dreaming?

The writing is messy, and the preface does not match the follow-up.

The writing is immature and the logic is not rigorous enough.

Some plots passed by in a flash, and some were incomprehensible. No matter what, they still need to be described. For example, in the second scene where she was given drugs and how she just had fun, I had to try my best to describe it without being locked up in a dark room.

You only wrote about Liu Feng's growth and the many women who helped Liu Feng grow up. Are there not any women who are in a relationship with Liu Feng who are pregnant?