Selling Lucky Jars in Soul Land

I should be qualified at this time of reading. If nothing else, at least I think I am relatively qualified in fan books. I can't give this book a good review. I think the pot is a bit outrageous. People who are good with the protagonist can get good things. Otherwise, it will either be the best or it will be gone. Don't tell me about luck, why do people who are good with the protagonist get double rewards and the last one is basically good? Anyone who is not on good terms with the protagonist will do everything wrong. I feel that the protagonist has an aura of mental retardation, especially the part about Tang San's palace. I was really convinced. The time traveler was such a calm person before the time travel. After the time travel, I was really speechless. He committed suicide before a good person came around. It's too brainless. The key is that you started this book with people with intelligence and brains. In the end, you made a stupid comment to me. Anyway, I don't recommend reading this book. If you really want to read it, just look at the first 10 or so pictures, the middle and last ones are all messed up.

The writing was pretty good in the early stages, but it got a bit messy later on, and many of the settings in the plot didn't match up with the original work. Fans shouldn't have struggled so much, but if you sell jars, you'll just sell jars. What's the point of running to catch pets? If one isn't enough, you have to catch two.

It's okay. There's no such thing as bad or bad. The original work is good. Whichever character you like, make him strong. There's nothing wrong with it.

It's fun but also toxic A problem with ordinary Douluo fan fiction is that the original characters are forced to be OOC, using the character skin and name, but the core is completely different. Are these characters like this? It's just that the author wants them to be like this. Yu Xiaogang, who "has low self-esteem due to his talent and is eager to do something to prove himself" has turned into an extremely conceited, face-loving fool who likes to make his face look fat. I thought that when Tang San came with the fairy grass, Yu Xiaogang didn't say "I have seen this fairy grass before". Dai Mubai, who "feared that he was doomed to fail, chose to give up on himself, but finally chose to break his own destiny" was portrayed as a Teddy with his lower body in mind. Ning Rongrong, who was "arrogant, self-regarding, pampered, and spoiled by her parents to the point of being a princess," turned into a white lotus flower. In addition, there are many, many golden iron triangles whose friendship for decades was shattered in one day; Xue Ye and Emperor Xingluo, who have no scheming and no imperial power but can rule the Nuo Empire; Titled Douluo and Ditian Gu Yuena, who have lived in the belly of a dog all their lives and cannot show any experience; Summary: It has the beauty of "an emotional drama written by a virgin"

Fortunately, I was not dissuaded by the comment that the ending was disappointing. I think it's pretty good, and it's quite innovative. The ending was okay, everything went smoothly and it felt like everything was flowing smoothly. It was originally a fun article, but it was finished after reading it. It was quite fun. If I want to find faults, I personally think that the two pets (Xiao Wu and A Yin) are quite a failure, and the plot is deliberately added to cater to otakus. I promised that I don't have a woman in my heart, so I draw my sword and it's a natural god🙄

It's a bit sloppy, and a lot of ink is wasted on the introduction of items. This book looks like it has a lot of words, but in fact it only contains more than half of the content. And this is a daily article, which is not too much for daily life, and the timeline is also very short. It can be said that from the beginning to the end, it didn't even take half a year. Yes, and the other thing is that the ending is actually very bad. Although it cannot be said to be a bad ending, it is still very bad. However, this book can still be read. After all, there is no big poisonous point. It is just that the writing is a little harsher, the ending is a little worse, there are more pitfalls, and the contrast between the characters is already very good.

This is my second review. The description of daily life is very sufficient. Personally, I like this kind of novel very much.

I think this book is very good.

A very well written Douluo novel, highly recommended! Recommended value:⭐⭐⭐⭐

It's quite hard to explain. Your position is already very clear, so don't say you are neutral. That's hypocritical.