Fantasy World: A Heavenly Secrets Pavilion from the Start

I have read a very good system novel. There is basically no cookie-cutter pretentiousness. The protagonist is not impulsive, has brains, and works as a profiteer in the Tianji Pavilion. The main theme is a person who is close to Pingyi. In the first few hundred chapters, due to lack of strength, most of the descriptions are from the perspective of the supporting characters and the protagonist's incarnation. Later, he became invincible and then went out to wander. There is no nonsense in the article and it is well written. In general, the plot is compact and comfortable to watch. It is worth watching, but the update is too slow →_→

It's really good-looking and more exciting than most system streams. I hope it won't end badly. Come on! ! !

I couldn't stand it after reading a hundred chapters. First of all, the woman next to the protagonist was too brainless. She interrupted before the protagonist could speak, and she was still muttering in her heart about how bad the protagonist was. As a servant of the protagonist, she must understand her own position. She is not the protagonist's apprentice or girlfriend, and staying in Tianji Pavilion for a month is no better than staying in a sect that has been for hundreds of years. In a word, this woman is too brainless. Give up, give up, next book

The biggest failure of this book is Nangong, who really gave up the book decisively. Why can such a person become the son of luck? If it wasn't for the purpose of perfecting his Taoist heart, I guess he wouldn't care about Mo, and he really couldn't stand it anymore.

Lord Ye Pavilion was very stable from the beginning when he had no cultivation. He relied on his golden finger deduction ability and his great deception skills to make people think that he was unfathomable. Then he began to promote the reputation of Tianji Pavilion, which made him have more money, more people to know, and some friends, so that he would not be alone. Now he has ascended to the Hongmeng Taoist world. His writing is also very good and his business is getting bigger and bigger. The characters he writes about are also very vivid, such as the crazy Taoist, a person who is willing to risk his life in pursuit of the Tao, and Yi Tianxing, Li Ruoyu, Su Mu, Yue Lingxi, Xi Xi, Wuxiang Demon Lord, etc. Are also very good. Finally, I emphasize again that you update too slowly. Please update more. And the author, when will you create a group? When you build it, tell me what's in the book! I hope to establish a group soon, and then I will continue to push for updates!

After looking at it for a while, I found it was pretty good. (´∀`*) I can barely give you a good review! That Ye Xian'er is a bit useless. I think this novel on a male channel is better than the fairy cultivating novel I saw on a female channel before! Good. It felt pretty good in the early stages. (Note that this is the early stage) However, I feel that the male protagonist seems a bit lame and his cultivation is not that good.

The plot is compact and the writing is wonderful

After reading four hundred chapters, I made a lot of mistakes. Let's not talk about whether the writing is good or not. At the very least, you should review it after writing. There are many places where you can see problems at a glance. This is a matter of attitude. Abandoned.

The cultivation level is too confusing! The protagonist didn't have much presence. Instead, he was robbed of the limelight by a supporting character of unknown origin ~ Nangong Zhan Pier. The more he watched, the more angry he became and gave up🌶️🐔🌶️🐔🌶️🐔🌶️🐔🌶️🐔🌶️🐔🌶️🐔🌶️🐔

It's really good-looking, not bad. What makes me feel most comfortable is that I killed the son of destiny, so comfortable. The whole book has a framework and a pattern, and the villain in the book has a brain (the protagonist is a neutral character, and can be called a villain in terms of value orientation). It is not a brainless novel, and there is no random love story. I tried the medicine myself, and my whole body is clear.