Concealing the Edge

The plot has ups and downs, the writing skills are deep, there are many details and foreshadowing, and the characters are also full-bodied. Zangfeng has made great progress compared to the previous book Sword Chang'an, and I personally feel it is more exciting than Dragon Elephant. Different from brainless novels, the descriptions of other characters are very exciting, and the fights are not brainless and make no sense, but are planned and then acted upon, with a premeditated plan surrounding the protagonist unfolding layer by layer. Whenever I feel that the plot is very deep, I find that the protagonist is in a larger conspiracy, trying to survive through cracks. The theme is also very clear, the resistance to fate and the pursuit of freedom. The protagonist gradually becomes the leader of the pack from a lone tiger and wolf, from living just to live to having something for which he can sacrifice his life. (Feeling very gratified?!) But when I think about how much deception and helplessness the protagonist has suffered, I felt inexplicably sad when I faced such a disaster, but had to live with a persevering image, especially the sentence "I guarantee you will all have a future", and the cost of choosing to incarnate in thousands of ways in order to open your child's eyes to a beautiful world that makes her like it. I cried and laughed at the same time. Meeting an old friend under the moon, Zhong Changli's sacrifice in Linglong Pavilion, Song Yueming's change, and what I personally think is the most exciting story: the twins of dragon and snake, Mr. Wei's escape from tribulation, etc., Which are all exciting. All aspects of life are revealed one by one. People will always change, but some things will never change. The article jumps a bit from chapter to chapter, so you should read it slowly and savor it carefully. As for the female protagonist, it is a single female protagonist. The only slight drawback is that the last thirty or forty chapters feel a bit rushed and the combat power is a bit low. For the story about the monitor, you can read the book Jian Changan, which is equivalent to the prequel to Zangfeng and is also very good.

After reading the whole book, I personally feel it is a mid-range book. The angle of entry in the early stage is different from that of ordinary novels of this kind. The plot is fascinating, the middle stage of the story is full and full, and the plot has ups and downs and excitement. However, the shortcoming is that the writing in the later stage is really a bit messy. The protagonist's intelligence and intelligence are relatively blunt, the description is too shallow, and the twists are too far-fetched. Most of the time, he looks like a fool, and the people next to him appear to be smarter than him. In the early stage, I was eager to read it every day, but in the later stage, I was patient and read it hard. Overall, the author's writing is excellent, the story is compact, and the overall story is good.

I really like juvenile books. I've finished reading it already. I present the poem I wrote for Zang Feng. Show one's ugliness (those who have seen it will understand the meaning): Begging for luck, luckily you will see it. He was a boy back then, but he has changed. The snake goes to death and the dragon appears. It's fate that makes me happy, but I'm willing to do it for you. (To Qin Keqing) The fake husband has a bad temper, Helplessly follow suit. When it is difficult to distinguish between life and death, It is love that will never leave you. (Note to Ye Hong)

The plot is very messy and there are a lot of foreshadowings, but I couldn't write it well. I can feel that the author wanted to write a good book, but maybe it was because of his limited level that he didn't write it well. Writing a book is not easy, I hope the author will continue to work hard

The author wanted to write about Jianghu, but ordinary people couldn't understand it! (The main line of the story is not clear) The author only narrates but does not solve puzzles. I remember an author once said that if you want to write something profound, you must constantly solve puzzles so that readers can follow your train of thought and finally resonate! It feels right. This book makes people confused.

I watched it for a long time. It took me about a month to read a little bit every day and then I finished it. In fact, when I read the end of the previous chapter (that is, re-counting it as the first chapter), I found it to be quite good. However, the negative reviews in the book reviews at that time were quite harsh. The vocabulary of the article is quite good, unlike many flood books that only have one word in hundreds of chapters (like "Dragon Pattern" written by Su). This may be because it is rarely used in combination with ancient Chinese words and sentences, and the overall fluency needs to be improved. The plot is also good, but there are a lot of pitfalls in the early stage, but fortunately, they are all filled up later. It can be seen that the author has an outline. Unfortunately, when adding or opening some pitfalls, it is a bit abrupt. In order to make the writing full of mystery and appetite, it is understandable that some statements or descriptions of characters are skipped. This may be the reason why some people say they can't understand it. It is not vernacular enough, but this is of course a personal issue. Everyone has their own preferences, and it is not a good article. But most of the pitfalls have been fixed and it is still a good review! ! It does what many popular books fail to do, and it does not have a cheesy plot. Instead, it is full of twists and turns. You can calm down and experience the martial arts world created by the author. Jianghu, ancestral temples and Tianwai are a good combination. It will not be forced to continue writing because of Tianwai. All in all, this book is still worth reading! But there is definitely room for improvement in the author's writing skills!

The author's math scores must be very good. His thinking logic is really strong. If you look from front to back, you won't be able to figure out the relationship if you don't have a good brain. However, if you push it from back to front, the logic is indeed simple. I admire it! Admire! It is strongly recommended that everyone be smart when reading. This is where I think the author is most successful. In addition, the ending is a bit fast. Although so much has been explained, there are still many things that are unclear. If I don't like Ye Hongjian, who is more scheming than emotional, Xuan'er is better, hahahaha😃😃😃

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It seems that the author likes the book "Xue Zhong" very much, and its shadow can be seen everywhere, but the shape is similar but not the spirit. Painting a tiger cannot be the opposite of a dog!

It's very tiring to watch. There are all kinds of little foreshadowings from beginning to end. It feels like you won't understand what's going on if you don't read it carefully. The author's style is a headache. Maybe the author writes too seriously, so he pays great attention to all kinds of details. On the contrary, it makes me very tired. I don't know if there are any readers who feel the same way. I only express my personal opinion.