Swallow the Sea

The writing is decent, but the plot lacks exciting moments. I didn't want to continue after reading a few dozen chapters; the pacing is dragging, making it a painful read. The characters' personalities are also confusing; I don't even know if the male lead is reckless or blinded by hatred. It's hard to understand.

The author of "The Hidden Edge" is absolutely blown away! He truly captured the youthful exuberance and the carefree spirit of middle age in the novel. Looking forward to this book!

I think your writing is good, but I don't understand its purpose... Nowadays, young people reading ebooks are too old to understand them, and even seasoned bookworms don't have the patience for this.

The beginning was alright, but Ningzhou became too chaotic later on. So much buildup, yet several characters were ultimately useless; their combat power and cultivation levels all collapsed. All that buildup resulted in nothing being said; the big boss appeared alone, died, and that was the end. I don't know what the point of all that buildup was. How powerful was the Eastern Realm?

The story of seven or eight people in Guan Town has been stretched into more than eighty chapters, with no exciting plot and a chaotic storyline. Veteran readers are saying: What the hell is this garbage!

I sat bolt upright in my deathbed, startled. A good book right here, and you didn't read it? You're just being a clown. 😎😎😎

But appendix

It's much better than those fantasy cultivation novels.

Although I haven't seen many, I think they're very good.

The author's writing is excellent, but the plot is somewhat drawn out and can easily make readers lose patience.