The Mastermind Behind Journey to the West

Although I know that the Bodhisattva is a man with a female body, but that's it, Ollie.

Could the author stop writing seventy or eighty pages just to make up the words for one story?

Guanyin male

I haven't understood what this novel is about after reading it for a long time.

The whole story is basically a monologue, with a lot of nonsense. In your novel, excluding monologues, the maximum number is 200 chapters. Nausea

I hope the author can compress and compress the situation of writing a monologue. Two or three chapters and a dialogue are not completed yet. Novels should be written from the best first-person perspective with a sense of immersion, content that the protagonist should not know. Don't reveal anything, answer it at the appropriate time, just like you are playing a 3D game. Put yourself into it and use the dialogue content as the main condition. The explanation does not need to be too detailed. You already know 1+1=2, so don't write it again. It is boring and will block your own thoughts. When I started the first chapter and the second chapter, my eyes really lit up. The protagonist's role is the main one, and everything else can be ignored. Don't put the cart before the horse, and don't write from God's perspective. It can only be used to make a movie, bring yourself into it, and set up some of your own ideas. No matter how exaggerated the novel is, it can be. However, many authors write too many scenes for other characters. That's really disgusting. Listening to books makes you confused, and reading books makes you waste time. Big Baos didn't have a formal duel with the character, so try not to write any scenes, otherwise it would be too messy. I just want to read the novel, and the character observes the world with his own thoughts. This kind of novel is the best. I would rather have fewer words than be messy and messy. The author himself didn't even post it, let alone anyone else. I don't know if you have signed a contract with Qimao Platform, if so. You can see this comment. If not, please stop updating this book on the platform. Thank you.

The author has his own ideas, but the writing style is a bit wordy, and some content in some chapters is too repetitive.

What Taoism owes to Buddhism has been repaid. Two saints. Not enough?

At the beginning, Li Jing and Bodhisattva Chang'an were in front of the stage and defeated the boss behind the scenes. They killed people at will. They arrived in anger and wanted to kill them all. In the end, no one died, but Li Jing was beaten up and finally reconciled. The book was ruined from the beginning of writing about women. You can have female protagonists, as many as you want, but you can't always revolve around Yang Chan. From the beginning of writing about Yang Chan, I think I am still writing about Yang Chan for a long time. Romance is not written like this.

There's so much nonsense