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After reading the table of contents, in chapter 169 Han Li, Zhang Tie and others formed elixirs, and in chapter 190 they became Nascent Soul, 666
It's obviously a Douluo fan, but why does it give me the feeling that the protagonist is always scheming with others instead of improving his own strength?
Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster
You are doing well in cultivating immortals, please update more every day.
No matter what, I like to help the author give some ratings
The content is okay, but the plot is too boring. I can't finish writing a short plot in a few days
Read the first chapter before deciding whether to follow up. Don't subscribe to more than 100 in bulk. Otherwise it is easy to regret. I have no regrets about taking the medicine, and I have been pretentious for a long time, which is completely unnecessary. The first chapter is released and the poison begins
All three-star and not five-star ones are gone.
It's quite good-looking, but the author is quite saintly. He keeps writing about meow and huffing. Don't like the author's writing style
The plot is well written. Thunder Patriarch, Yellow Emperor, and Buddha all appeared at the beginning, but after two million words, he didn't even become a great master, and it ended with 80% success in becoming an immortal.
The synopsis said that the protagonist fell in love with Tang San, so I had to take a look.
It's fun, good-looking, and to be honest, it's quite refreshing. After all, there are too many anti-Three themes. It's the first time I've seen a dog-licker, and I'm so happy.
It was a little bit toxic in the early stage, but it was still good in the later stage. I just felt a bit toxic when I was helping Xiao.
Do you know that feeling? I wanted to buy and read this book, but I didn't have enough reading coins. Especially when I finally found a non-fanfic that suited my appetite among the piles of Douluo Douluo Douluo, alas, it was really difficult.
After watching Spreading Flowers
I just regret that the author didn't write more and finished it hastily.
I thought I wouldn't steal Xiao Yan's strange fire.
La la la la la la la, check in is completed, start reading the article
Chapter 56! It is recommended that you check the story of the fight between the protagonist and the monster: the Vine Skull Man. The protagonist has plant control. The protagonist punches forward and the Vine Skull falls to the ground. Can the monster get up and hit the protagonist back? Why not take advantage of the victory and kill him? Also, why not use plant control to pull the arms or neck of the Vine Skull to block it? Even if the monster is strong, it can still block it, right? When this monster comes charging from behind, you have to take a step, right? Why not control the plant leggings, and then cause the monster to lose control of its balance point and fall to the ground, and then hit the back of the head hard in pursuit of victory! . Why do I associate it with the protagonist's plant control ability? It's because you kept writing about this ability in the previous chapters until the protagonist slowly fumbled his way to the hospital parking lot and ended up fighting monsters, and then flexibly used this ability. It felt bad. Even though I won the battle, it felt a bit difficult to deal with, but why not use my ability to write that easy solution, right? It is recommended that you think more about these details.
Good reviews. When will the world view be expanded? The current map is too small.
At present, the total number of people in the entire map seems to be less than 5 million (not counting aliens)
"Inferior" It's a pity that the game crashed at the beginning and was ruined by the system.
The system can be in place from the beginning, or it can be implemented some time after the transition. You don't have to come to the system. But you must not just come to the system when you are frustrated. _ The author's writing style is very good, and it opens the door at a glance, which is very suitable for writing road articles. But the destruction lies in this system. _ Road writing is about savoring a kind of leisurely contentment, savoring a kind of sunshine, savoring an experience, savoring all kinds of things in the world, going to see stories, savoring suffering, savoring happiness, and savoring no worries. Using the system as the driving force of the protagonist is ruined. _ The protagonist refuses to bow his head and is fired by the company. This company is really good, and he is given 2N. Most of the methods are to transfer positions, give a basic salary and then let one person leave. Make money, not shabby. The heir to someone else's company, why do you think you are supporting her? Opposing in public is not called admonishment, it is called Bo Yigong. To give advice in private is to give true advice. The protagonist broke up with his girlfriend after losing his job. Was it because he couldn't stand his girlfriend? I'm afraid not, it's just inferiority complex. It was because I felt that when I had some ability, I was rejected in various ways, but now that I have no job, the protagonist is afraid, so I proposed to break up. Humans are animals. We must believe that the protagonist and his partner are happy. I won't talk about the difficult ones, let's talk about the simplest ones. It's the same for men and women, just do it if you feel the other person is annoyed. When you stop letting someone do it and don't want to touch it, then something is wrong, and you really dislike you. There is a difference in strength between men and women. If a man hugs her, it will be over. The woman can directly touch the man without getting into fist fights. _ So this is the problem, the state of mind that road stories need most, because the system appears at this point in time and is immediately destroyed. The protagonist is, well, a very waxy person. The protagonist's state of mind has not grown or changed at all. He is directly taken over by the system, which serves as the driving force for the protagonist to act. _ The author has collected many stories, although some of them sound very, well, what-not. But most men and women actually don't have such a high level of skills, such as eloquence and the like. So most of the problems will often be exposed in this situation. Likewise, some misunderstandings will be cleared up in this situation. Positive example: I have a friend whose partner is very busy and he always wants to have sex. Even if his friend is at home sometimes, the two of them will go directly to the bedroom. They had many serious arguments, but in the end his partner often regressed. Because in this relationship, he is very pure and simple, giving his partner enough satisfaction and peace of mind. His partner won't worry about him cheating. A large part of his subject's energy is also consumed. So this relationship is very stable, probably for eight or nine years. Counter-example: Recently, a friend of mine has been very upset, so much so that he plays games with friends every day, and has stayed up all night for four or five days in a row. After all, we are not in the same city, and the people are not the same every day. After all, there is always something going on. Where are the roots? After the Chinese New Year, he went back and found that his partner wouldn't let him touch her anymore. Don't let me say anything. So what is the reason? Ha, right, something must have happened. So he's been, well, staying up all night lately. This means that friends are not together, otherwise they would have to drink heavily every day. This... Actually, can be regarded as a semi-clear card. It's weird if nothing happens. _ Humans are animals. _ The author has a friend who spends money on two or three stores at home, which can be considered normal and can be spent in a lifetime. So what should his elders say to their requests? People who come out of Hengshui mode feel that it is very low, but it may be very high to themselves. He said how his elders oppressed him. The author asked, then why not leave? He said he was afraid that his family would not give him the money. The author said that since you want to wait for the money, you might as well calm down and remember that your goal is money. Everything you do now is just a little pretense to make the old man happy. There is no need to do things so seriously and put so much pressure on yourself. So the same is true for the No. 1 Person in this article. If he doesn't need family support, then just cut off contact if he feels annoyed. If he needs family support, then just make his family happy. You can't ask for money and have your own way. This is a very good entry point, because Subject No. 1 Listens to the family, which means that the subject's family provides support, and it means that the money the protagonist earns is simply not enough to support the family. Can you understand this logic? Therefore, the protagonist has no reason to get angry, has no ability to make money, has no ability to do anything, has no ability to coax with eloquence, and has no ability to guide. So, what reason is there to feel wronged? _ Then in this case, when there are many and very good entry points in the previous ones, let's boast that the system is here. There should be growth, or transformation. The mentality that should have broken out of the cocoon and turned into a butterfly to look at the world again. All gone. It's not that we can't have a system, it's that we can't do it at this time. At this point in time, the author was wondering how the system could come at the worst time and what the author was thinking.
I read more than twenty chapters. Author's fantasy
Beautiful, hahahahahahahaha
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See it's not bad now
I rarely follow new books, but I've read them quite well so far. I suggest the author add chapter titles. I feel like I've forgotten where I saw them.
I've read another book called Fighting the Sun and the Moon, but the general idea is similar and nothing new.
It looks good, but I still have more to say. Why did you stop updating it?
Damn it, my a** is so broken. After chasing me, I feel itchy. Damn it.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Does the author Jie Jie Jie also want to follow the example of San Shao who started writing about color?
Confused
In this novel, it takes two years to achieve qi training, and it becomes more and more difficult the further you go, it is too difficult. Also, you are practicing the Jiaolong Fuhai Jue. How did you get the elixir to use tigers? I don't understand very much, or I'm just confused.
Get up quickly
What about your extra? Hurry up, have you gained weight during the Chinese New Year?
Brainless Madonna, the first one with the peak of Nascent Soul to make the island country disappear
Is it okay to bet on the reincarnation of a dog? Useless
What's going on? Is he a eunuch or reincarnated?
I saw more than 300 photos on my previous account. I was about to start viewing this account again, but I saw that it had not been updated for more than a month. What happened?
Author, your biggest problem is leveling up. The second soul ring absorbs 4,000 years of soul rings before it reaches two levels.
That person who tweeted UP, please tweet about this book. I'm too poor to buy the book😭
Wonderful! Kill decisively
The main character is not the Virgin, the plot is smooth and has no irritating points, and I watched it for 12 hours straight to finish it.
Where is my little maid, my green snake and three-flowered pupils?
I watched it from the blogger's video. The update speed is basically the same as the original book, which is only a few chapters away. I feel that the protagonist's strength in the early stage is improved a bit too fast. In the later stage, he basically follows the old route to recruit girls. Now that the book has reached more than 600,000 words, it is almost impossible to change it. Therefore, I suggest that the author try to lower the protagonist's level when he opens a new book next time. Your protagonist's strength has improved too fast and there is basically nothing to write about in the later stage.
A bunch of SB, extremely poisonous, extremely poisonous, disgusting to death
Well written, ruthless 😘A little bit of love!
Rubbish novel, updated every five days, the beginning is unfinished
The author writes whatever he dreams about
I'm not saying that Honghuang is not good, I even like watching Honghuang, but this author just writes whatever he dreams about, and it's so embarrassing.
How can I put it, the plot is a bit weak, ah, short and weak, I read the 50 pictures and I read 120 chapters, and I read it in one night
Wow, I feel so uncomfortable watching this. What the hell is this written about?
Why isn't it updated again? 👹👹👹👹. Please update me soon! ! ! !
It's all water
It's getting more and more watery. I can write so many chapters about this class reunion. There is not so much water on the entire earth.
I read it when I was in junior high school. Now that I am in college, I suddenly came across this book while chatting with my friends about what I read as a child. I have been looking for it for a long time. Fortunately, I have a record of purchasing it. However, when I came here, I found that it was still not finished. Because of this book, I have a filter for Yongzheng. I also like the heroine and the princess.
If someone can write this, it will be useless to hire an expert at home.