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This is not popular anymore, Shennong
9.7 Points, how many people and machines were found to spawn it, it seems that the fate Gu has not been destroyed.
666, the author thinks this is a new high.
I saw 364, it looks great, handsome, handsome, handsome
What do you want to do when you drag a woman from low-level martial arts to fantasy and write a female channel? Doing everything for yourself is the right answer. What do you want to do when you drag a woman from low-level martial arts to covering the sky?
The author writes very well, keep up the good work. What are you going to write about your next book?
This book describes the characters of all the classmates and friends as very weird, especially Peking University, which looks like a technical school, and Yanei and several younger brothers who are jealous and molesting girls. The protagonist is the soul of a man in his fifties, yet he is always shy and blushing? Do you go around kowtowing to people during New Year greetings?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
Is it good to do it? Please give me more thumbs up, author, keep working hard
It looks good, but there are too few updates.
The plot and character descriptions are awesome
I really can't stand it anymore. The plot is incomprehensible. The cause and effect are completely irrelevant. It ends inexplicably every time. No one can understand what the author wants to express in each chapter. Moreover, the masculinity is too strong. Even Hemingway, I can objectively evaluate it. It's really average.
Old wine in new bottles, but it feels okay.
The update is too slow. Although there are few people watching the new one, I still need to update it.
Is there any Baozi who is a book friend of 21 and would like to read Lu Lu's book again?
It's been 26 years now. Time flies so fast. I really miss the days when we played together. Miss you
The soft-bone rabbit is on the list... I have it all my life
Okay, very good. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.
What the hell is this rubbish written? The licking dog among the licking dogs. Bad review.
There is no sense of crisis, so there is no expectation that the protagonist will become stronger. Upgrading is the main line in the upgrade stream. Since there is no expectation for the main line, the plot design also lacks contradictions and twists, and there is no point to attract readers, so it can only be abandoned.
I like it very much. It's very beautiful. It's my ideal book.
Too little detail
The author's writing skills are very poor, and many things written are very contradictory. For example, at the beginning, the man who was collecting protection money from the gang, if you directly said, "I have already practiced martial arts, would he dare to hit your sister's attention?" While saying that the gang is rubbish without exposing yourself, it's not even exposed. What's the secret of your martial arts training?
Beautiful and fun! Not striving for perfection, but more real.
Very rubbish book What the author wrote is a complete slut That rubbish supporting role and the protagonist's younger brother also gave the protagonist an opportunity to have sex with someone else's wife, haha If you write fan fiction to seduce someone's wife, you can actually post it on 91
After finishing the exam, I just want to say: Long live Chairman Mao's Thoughts
No, buddy, if you write a daily article, you have to add a system. If you don't have a system, you can't write, right?
poison
Rubbish, nothing like technology! ! ! ! ! What a waste of time! !
This novel is really disgusting. The protagonist met a girl earlier, which helped the girl a little bit. I personally had a good impression of that little girl. But later I met Qing Lin, who was said to be her mother. You should all know her mother's experience. This is true. It's disgusting. Moreover, the horse, after following him for so long, really didn't give him anything good. After all, it was also when you were at your lowest, following you saved your life.
You are both proud and proud. The adult mind says that you don't like bullying girls, and you sneered at Ma Hongjun's teasing of the girls from Canghui College. The author seems to have forgotten that he touched the beautiful woman's butt in the first chapter, right? You can't even pretend to carry a heavy barbell of several thousand kilograms from morning to night without blushing and out of breath. Even a titled Douluo can't do it, let alone a three-ring soul master. Everyone knows there is something wrong with this. At first he seemed innocent, but later he turned into a big stallion. After destroying the Haotian Sect, the Tang family took over Tang Yuehua. Later, the Tang family's divine realm became the Ning family's divine realm. It was outrageous that Xiaoyao was offline three times. The author didn't think that after inheriting the divine throne, he would directly obtain the status of a god king, right?
Yes, it's quite interesting. The only thing I read about swallowing the article is to hang it up.
It looks simple, so it can't be a single female protagonist, Aquarius. The anime model has an aunt face, which is really a bit difficult to touch.
Very good. Like Jin Doushan, I like reading this type of immortality writing.
This live article is pretty good, but there are some loopholes that haven't been filled in.
Overall, it is a very interesting live broadcast. The heroine Su Xiaoxiao is very talented and eloquent. Every time she insults someone, I laugh so hard hahaha. The punishment I think of when I win the PK is also unique and very funny. When provoked by other anchors, she immediately responds, which is very refreshing. The eldest brothers are all very good at portraying each other. Don't say anything else. I'm going to be addicted to CP hahaha. It's a pity that there is only one eldest sister. One thing that is difficult to avoid in live broadcast articles is that there are several big brothers, but there are only one or two big sisters. The male-female ratio is not very good. There are still some flaws, and the context is inconsistent. For example, in the first article, it is said that the eldest sister will be promoted to level 16 the day after tomorrow, but in the second article, it is stated that the eldest sister posted a barrage saying that she is about to reach level 16, but this small flaw is not too annoying. A big loophole is that the cause of death of Su Xiaoxiao's father was not investigated. The annoying stepmother escaped and was not captured. How could this not be written? ? I'm really confused. There's no extra story. In summary, it is worth reading, a very good novel. I don't know if the author of my book review can see it. If so, I wish the author a happy day. If he has other works, I also wish him lots of traffic.
A book that tests insight, knowledge reserves, and IQ
What do you say about this book? I don't understand it... There are slang, pronouns, typos, financial confrontations, and too many long-term plans between countries. It's very difficult to read. Without the explanations from the experts in the reviews, I estimate that the number of readers of this book would be less than half (sympathize with the brothers who read pirated copies). Even though there are so many problems, it doesn't affect the author's ability to write the story smoothly and with ups and downs. He doesn't forcefully show patriotism for the sake of so-called patriotism, which is very good. Even if the protagonist has various tricks, we can still see how difficult it was for our ancestors to prosper and develop the country in the early years. Great book, I only gave it 3 stars because it was too difficult to read.
Keep updating, keep updating, keep updating, don't be unfinished, don't be unfinished, don't be unfinished.
Don't write about variety shows
It's enough to just go through the variety show in one go. What's the point of writing the plot?
I want to complain: 1. The combat power level of the story has collapsed in the middle. Since Qin Mu opened his own divine treasure, he had to rewrite it every time he explored a place to open his own divine treasure. He emphasized the divine treasure many times. It felt like the only way to become stronger. I'll write it after a few chapters, I'm very impatient to read it. 2 Why not write more about the conflicts between the old-era generals and the new generation of people in Wuyou Township in Wuyou Township? Their transformation was highlighted even more during the Yuanjie War. The story is very exciting and moving. I particularly like the author's portrayal of a person like Kaihuang Qin Ye. Others follow you not because of your strength but because of their admiration for your leadership qualities, and they call each other a Taoist friend. There is also a strong Taoist heart. No matter how powerful the enemy or difficulties are, Kaihuang's Taoist heart has never changed. He draws the sword to protect the people of the world. I admire the spirit contained in his first sword style, the Taihuang Pingtian Sword. Also very successful was the First Ancestor Human Emperor. Although he was a deserter during the founding emperor era, during the Yuan Realm War, he used his actions to prove his determination to protect people, and his seal skills were not easy to change. In order to protect others, he did not hesitate to sacrifice with the enemy, which showed his heart to protect the people.
The author describes the plot rigorously and with ups and downs. The reader is gripped and cannot stop.
Reading this book is full of ups and downs, and the scenes change again and again, always grabbing the reader's attention.
Very good, revealing his identity as a demon outside the world and the existence of the system to Zhu Zhuqing
If I didn't follow up on the review, I really wouldn't know the author's skills. The work is 👦 and so is the author 😔😔
What a pity! The heroine is not with Luo Shian
After reading hundreds of fics, this could have been rated as 80 points or higher, especially since I wrote 123 at the same time, which is almost enough to be split into three fics. This is an advantage. The small disadvantage is that the plot is not intense enough.
When I saw 298, it seemed a little dull, a bit like chanting sutras, without any intense conflict.
It's a cool article It's a bit fantasy and a little bit of a house fight and a palace fight. There are a lot of characters There are just too many extras. You can read it when you are short of books
I originally wanted to buy it after reading the reviews.
At first glance, it looks like an old book. The male protagonist is particularly crotchless, mentally retarded, and has a cowardly personality.
Has the author been sanctioned recently? I feel much more restrained