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I was deceived by the title of the book, but I feel that the title is right, but the writing is okay.

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The author's writing style is good, the plot is not sluggish, and he is better at writing battles than most of the ones I have read. From the first glance, the author uses Douluo to gain fans first, and then writes his own stuff, which is very good! I blindly guess that the author will write about eighteen kinds of martial arts in the future😘

I really don't know if you knew the original work when you wrote it, and after Qian Renxue absorbed the fairy grass spirit and evolved to level 28, you later said that she was level 30. Didn't you read it or change it? I really can't hold on after seeing this.

The villains are all smarter than the protagonist's friends. Without the protagonist, the world will be destroyed and the earth will stop rotating. The writing is too forced. Everything has to be solved by the protagonist. The supporting characters are all trash. Go ahead and write a cool article. Here comes this disgusting person.

One thing is, no matter how awesome the opponent is or how high his cultivation level is, if he feels defeated in front of the protagonist and cannot see the protagonist's cultivation level, he can always say: You are just a mortal.

Please update quickly, the author begs you🙏I haven't seen enough but it's still very interesting

It's a boring novel, I fell asleep while reading it

It was fine in the front, but Qin Ming only had his training methods😐

Are you Yun Douluo? Forget about being the top level in the Chamber of Secrets, Tang Chen's Bo Saixi had eight soul rings after passing the eight exams and all had eight black and one red. How about you give Qian Daoliu two yellows, two purples, and five blacks? What's going on? I haven't even figured out the settings yet so I'm writing a fanfic.

Ghost Demon Lord Huo Yuhao. It feels good to look at. I like this kind of decisive protagonist.

I kind of know why this thing is free. What rubbish? Have you really seen Warhammer? Are we saying that the Emperor likes others to call him the God Emperor? That means bullying the Emperor. Now he is in a vegetative state and cannot move. How do you think Luojia rebelled?

There is a lot of useful information, no need to fill in the water! Support it! It would be nice to update soon

Except for the protagonist, the others are all old people, and there are also old people who have been there for several years, but they all behave like newcomers for the first time. On the contrary, the protagonist is as comfortable as an old man when he enters for the first time. How did those old men get into the dungeon in the past few years?

This is too fake
A stinking history with a score of 8.7. I couldn't hold it back when I saw the soul ring I obtained. The 20% increase. Uncle Dai Mubai didn't even want to polish your shoes for your uncle Dai Mubai. Also, the author was extremely careless and just used martial spirits to get whatever he wanted. The golden-eyed black dragon only had one dragon, Emperor Tian, and he even added races.

Talent
Don't look at it. Go back to the past and become a chaebol. What do you think? It's a piece of cake, can you understand it?

Personally, I think it's quite good. The front part is indeed a bit boring. If you don't want to watch it, you can skip watching the later battle plot.

I don't know why, but I always feel like I can't remember the previous plot after reading it. After flipping through it, I found that some plots and characters suddenly stopped being written. No wonder I feel like I haven't read it before. I obviously followed it from the first chapter.

What's the point of reading this chapter every day now? If I write this without reading any chapter, I'm really convinced. What's the point of reading this chapter every day?

I don't know about other things, but when it comes to acting and casting, if you know exactly what role someone needs, there's a good chance you won't get the chance. Who the hell doesn't prepare for the movie in advance, and even say hello to most of the main characters in advance?

It feels a bit similar to Jobless Reincarnation, and has little to do with Frilian in the title.

Damn, Chapter 10 is simply poisonous. Forget about the three sworn brothers in Taoyuan. After the sworn vows, I immediately asked the protagonist for a spell, pig's feet, and gave it to me😐😐😐😐

Well written but too slow
It's been a long time since I've seen anything like this that appeals to my eyes. The consistency or professionalism of the writing (although I don't understand it) is really good. However, the transition in the middle is too long and there is a bit too much water, and the rhythm is very draggy. I was exhausted from reading one chapter a day. Many times, useless transitions are made in a chapter without connecting the previous chapter and the next chapter, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

Damn, I'm really shocked. This book is two or three years old, but it's still very useful in my bookshelf😑

I've read Chapter 68. Overall it's pretty good, but there's one bad point.
It seems that the Alchemist Guild assessment does not strictly require recommenders, right? Is it possible that someone who is unintentionally self-taught in the field cannot be registered? This is quite poisonous.

It's good to watch, but the plot is a little slow. Every time the protagonist has something good, a lot of people are praising it, and it takes a long time to praise each achievement. It's really a headache to watch this kind of plot all the time.

Divine Gold, the Saga Theatrical Version is just the legendary Hyphajedon. You messed up the good setting and turned it into something different.

Very nice! The heroine is a petite little girl, loved by both men and women~
At present, it seems that it is a sweet story with multiple male protagonists (and female ones?). It is a relatively rare and sweet story with a non-bloody female protagonist who is delicate, sweet, white, black, and all. It has a complete range of male protagonists. I highly recommend it, so go for it!

Is this library out of books? There are books that are updated every week, so use them to make up the numbers! Laughing to death

Curious about the author's logic
Seeing Du Cang enter the Marquis Mansion and kidnap first a guard and then the eldest lady of the Marquis Mansion, this Marquis Mansion can make the monarch so fearful that he is ready to kill them. Then what kind of country does this mother-in-law want to destroy? What's more, this Hou Mansion can't be destroyed at will. What else to write? The whole drama is over.

No, author, are Qian Duoduo and Yan Shaozhe NPCs? I thought I was under an illusion and kept repeating this one.

With Gu Yuena's 10,000 years of worldly wisdom, I can only say that he is stupid, but he is not a retarded person. He writes like an idiot.

The author is very fond of using aphrodisiacs... to take advantage of others' danger or to commit sexual abuse.
In harem literature, among the current women, Wang Yuyan, Li Qinglu, Li Mochou, and Zhao Min were all obtained by using aphrodisiacs. Yaoyue is obtained by healing the opponent's wounds, and the four swordsmen of Lingjiu Palace are obtained by intimidation.















