After Feeding the Exiled Criminals, She Was Forced to Reveal Herself

After reading the previous chapters, many people said that the female protagonist is pure and dedicated to the male protagonist. They think she easily accepts the existence of the system and think she is stupid. . . I want to say that you should not presume to speculate on the thoughts of a painter. The Huahua Man is a creature with an extremely abnormal mental state. I don't know when it will turn into one (it's not specific, because I am). Not to mention encountering the system, even if the heroine directly travels to the past, she may be able to accept it. Another point is that some people say that the female protagonist is stupid for spending all her money on the male protagonist. I wonder if you have experienced the happiness of krypton gold? Like playing B games or something, developing a paper man is really a sense of accomplishment. Not to mention that I only have eight cents left. Even if I lose everything, I will still give him krypton (a bit exaggerated, but that's what it means). Who doesn't like a cultivation system that treats you as a god? Can't you get the feeling that the paper person relies on you wholeheartedly? . . This is similar to when we buy paper millet or something, this kind of psychological satisfaction is so satisfying. Moreover, the male protagonist still has no archive, so if you miss the opportunity, it will be gone. So I don't doubt the heroine's behavior, but I understand it deeply😰After all, the heroine should be in a state where one person has enough to eat and the whole family is not hungry. Apart from paying off the mortgage, there seems to be nothing left to do. Isn't the purpose of making money from painting just to raise children? Wow. . . ! In the early stage, the heroine treats the hero as a paper person.

This book is really nice, with novel subject matter, but there are too few chapters. The feeling now is like being very hungry, with a banquet of Manchu and Chinese in front of me, and I can only eat white rice, so the author should work hard to read more

According to the author's writing method, I estimate that this novel will have at least 3,000 chapters. A thousand chapters can be written on the road to exile. 1,000 Chapters for the male protagonist to revolt or overthrow the court. 1,000 Chapters for the friendship with the female protagonist to overcome all difficulties and be together. Then there are some messy sub-line emotions and the inner world of the narration... According to the author's update speed, this is simply a huge pit. Generally speaking, the subject matter is fresh, but it doesn't look good👀

If I had known you hadn't finished it, I shouldn't have opened the first chapter. Now I'm scratching my head. Are you happy?

I started to catch up on chapters 50 and now I really can't keep up. I just skipped the exciting part and waited for the update of the escape room. But I just skipped it the next day. Okay, the author is not good at writing adventures, so just pamper him. In the end, he wrote it by a bandit who encircled and suppressed the mountain. I have been working on it for almost a month (now I feel like I can write it for three months to half a year depending on the situation). I have only been writing the article for four or five days. I just chatted and made some small moves every day and it was over. I really don't know if it's because other comments said it's ugly, or because the author simply can't write it. I basically don't post comments, but this broken rhythm is really unbearable. From the first time I discovered the good article, I was secretly happy to now that I am ready to unsubscribe after writing this comment. Many people who read the comments are like me. Author, you should reflect on it. I can only say ten points for ingenuity, and seven points deducted for others.

Nowadays, the popular Internet tool WeChat is played like this by you. It is really imaginative, advanced and novel, and the functions of WeChat are all new tricks. I haven't understood some of the functions yet, but you have played with them in the book, and I admire them. I was successfully poisoned by you. I give you five stars. Come on, I have to continue to test the poison with myself.

It's quite attractive in the early stage, but the heroine doesn't get any benefits at all. She treats the hero with all her heart and soul, and even spends her own money in it. It's a bit unrealistic. To be honest, no one in real life would be like this. Pure dedication is a bit abrupt. The author should set up a system to tell the benefits of saving the hero from the beginning. After the heroine agrees, the relationship will gradually increase in the future. If there are no benefits, the heroine is willing to pay. , And I have read more than a hundred chapters now. To be honest, there are too many supporting roles. I skipped them and read them. It has no impact on the plot. There are too many main words. In fact, it can be explained in a few sentences. There are really a lot of irrelevant people. Although it is said that you can't just focus on the main character, but you can explain the supporting roles. If you keep talking, people will have no desire to read. I hope the progress will be faster. The above are just my personal thoughts.

People who tweeted from other apps even opened memberships just to watch this one. The author changes the perspective when writing the climax, and the change back after the change is extremely blunt. For example, in the section of Xishan, the main point of view is clearly written, which shocked Li Songnian and Guan Mu until their ears and noses bleed. The next chapter should continue to write. This is the climax of the fight in Xishan. However, in the next chapter, the perspective switches back to the exile team, and in the next chapter, the perspective of the emperor is given. Then he turned back to the Xishan perspective and added scenery descriptions and supporting characters' perspectives to recreate the scene. . . . Is it necessary? I haven't opened it again for almost two weeks after quitting it here in Xishan. Not only did it interrupt the reading experience at the beginning, but I was also annoyed by the "retrospective" at the end. After all, the plot only lasts for five chapters.

I finally found the genuine version and I burst into tears. I spent more than 90 yuan to read it on an unknown website but it was stolen. . . . I finally found this book. The author is great! Finally found a serious army

I have been reading novels for several years. If this author calls himself the first in hydrology, no one would dare to call him second. He does not distinguish between priorities. He mentions the climax in one stroke and describes repeatedly the places that can be mentioned in one stroke. Multiple chapters are incoherent. When the climax of the plot is written, the scene is immediately changed. I don't know if you understand that feeling. Originally, I wrote it as a novel. Because the next step is to have some fun, I end up stuffing you with a piece of shit. The word count is too ugly. This article is like a piece of junk. It's a pity that it has such a good subject matter. I opened a membership several times for this article. However, after several months, there is no progress at all. The suppression of bandits is not over yet. Is the author planning to spend the rest of his life with this article? At this rate, I won't be able to finish this novel in a few decades.