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I thought it was the Holy Mother, but I didn't expect it to be a bad person

Good books give me books that I have read for so many years. It is the only book that makes me really feel that it is a good book.

There are too few words and I finished reading it in just one moment. I'm not happy.

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The author's writing style is very delicate, the writing has a strong sense of substitution, and the subject matter is relatively novel. If he keeps it up, it will definitely become popular. Big cheers for the author

Must be 100 points
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Urge more, Urge more, Urge more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A very novel story theme! ! ! ! Support! ! ! !

To be honest, it's really beautiful
It's normal for the reviews to be almost three spoonfuls of fans. This kind of fanfic is very interesting. Come on, author, I'll give you the monthly recommendation votes. Write well.

Updates are too slow. Updates are too slow. Updates are too slow. Updates are too slow. Updates are too slow.

To be honest, when I think about this kind of book, I don't know what the author is going to do next? I will stick it as a record, cut it off and kick me.

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After reading, check in when finished and leave the footprints of reading.

The author should update more quickly. There must be more female protagonists.

The further you get to the back, the harder it is to watch. There is nothing obvious about the protagonist Gou. Gou should be 100% sure before taking action against the enemy. As for you, everything happens unexpectedly and you are forced to make enemies one by one. Still so high-profile.

(Who has listened to the novel) I think it can be very good. The ending is not detailed, but I will make some guesses about the ending later.

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The author's update is too slow. There must be more female protagonists.

Powerful warriors in the Holy Land Continent, interesting settings, first-person perspective makes it easier for the senses!

Does anyone feel that these two actions of the protagonist are a bit too much?
It seems that people often do this: Lin Yuan, raise your head! And from time to time, I see the protagonist kneeling down and kowtow. The main character left such a deep impression on me🙃

It's better to quit later and become a free mercenary, otherwise it would be bad to always lead the troops, it would be too restrictive.

My family members are convinced. The author is a cloud player, so you don't need to read it. During the Ompharos section, March was obviously ill and could not go, so the author went with us in March.

Brother, please update quickly. I have been chasing you since the overthrow of Han Dynasty. Come on, brother.

I've only read a few chapters, but I still want to express my opinion. The name of the protagonist's martial spirit is too ugly. It's flawed and has no sense of substitution. Also, I can't put my finger on it. It's just that after reading a few chapters, it's not that interesting. It's like all the plots have been written and used by others. The old routine, and the setting of the protagonist's bloodline is also inexplicable. Let's not talk about how the black dragon is related to the Dragon God. This foreshadowing disgusts me, it is quite nonsense. When I saw Di Tian testing the protagonist, it gave me the feeling that the protagonist crossed the long river of time and space to support his past self. , And the current book about the bloodline of the Dragon God, to be honest, I am quite inexplicable. Although the setting of Dou 4 is too bad, Dou 4 at least wrote about the rejection of the Godhead of Destruction and the Godhead of Creation, which can be regarded as supplementing the setting of the Dragon God. Also, the setting of the Purple and Gold Twins includes the God of the Universe. The God of Creation, at least, is an official setting. If we insist on having the dragon bloodline, we must either solve the Dragon God bloodline and the rejection of promotion, or merge the Dragon God bloodline with the twin dragons and evolve into the Cosmic God of Scourge. But at present, even a pure novel has not thought about digging into this original setting.

What are you writing about? The game starts out crying, either the protagonist is crying or the heroine is crying. How can I read such a disgusting book?

Author, I don't know if you will listen to advice or not. The article you wrote is very stupid, because what you wrote is wrong. For example, in the Dan Heng section, Dan Heng clearly went to the Linyuan Mirror alone, and then got into a fight with the Blade. Then what you are referring to is that they went together and got into a fight with Blade, and you don't want to talk about the pv anymore. Neither pv is official

After reading nearly twenty chapters, I can't stand it anymore. There is no growth path for the protagonist, and there is no plot. He keeps talking to himself and making long remarks. It may be that the protagonist has no plot to write at this time, but this just reflects the author's ability to arrange the plot. It's a pity.

The writing is particularly beautiful. I don't know why it seems so soft and natural.

You don't have to look at the garbage. It swallowed up the Blue Silver Emperor. That Ah Yin is not dead yet, and has become a soul attached to him. It's really cheap. What's written? It's disgusting. Why should that Ah Yin be killed? Leave this kind of hidden danger behind and root it out.

Strongly recommend
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Day 15
I never thought I'd do this, I have never loved before, so I love wrongly, Where do I take off and where do I land.

When will the author's mirror flow be updated? I've been waiting for a long time, please update it quickly, please, please

It's very interesting, with some eye-catching settings. Everyone has a distinct personality and characteristics. The story line is also quite sequential, and the chapters are also long. If you like long stories and unique features, you can check out this novel, which also has a rich emotional line.

















