Begin Immortality by Slaying Demons

(Personal complaint) Can you please stop dividing one chapter into three chapters and read them all in one glance? Advantages of this work The character of the protagonist is actually similar to that of an energetic young man. From the description of killing the dog monster to seeing the black bear god, the Xiang brothers and sisters' handling methods are very consistent with the thoughts of young people. They do not see darkness or unfair behaviors, and use simple methods to achieve their own ideas. If a dog bites and eats a person, then let him Chop it into pieces, Black Bear wants to establish his superior image, so he pulls him down from the altar and smashes his hypocritical appearance. The Xiang brothers and sisters bully the weak, and they retaliate in the same way. These behaviors can make people hooked, and they do not require too much psychological description. Just looking at the behaviors is enough to make people satisfied. In fact, the description of cheats in this article is very suppressive. From the content of deducing the exercises, it is not difficult to see that the content of this article is all about saying that the protagonist is really not good, which is different from other novels where the protagonist is gifted or draws parallels. The protagonist's understanding and abilities are no different from those of ordinary mortals. The time for deducing the skills is not limited to years. When encountering advanced skills, you need the participation of other remnant souls to develop new functions. It really copes with the title of the novel, which is about fate and long time. Accumulation, the achievements that can only be achieved through trial and error over and over again. If you don't think carefully about the details in the novel, you won't be able to see such details (biss, author, will you die if you enrich the content of the deduction more?), And the author still needs to improve in this aspect. Note: The protagonist is actually very sober throughout the article, mainly because when he saw the notification sound of his deduction of the exercises, he probably wanted to complain about his lack of understanding. The plot is not laggy, and the plot performance is above average, with no brainless plot. The content of the novel is not the traditional one of changing a map and changing the combat power system (it may also be that the characters are written too quickly and the characters are too dense, causing the combat power system to be blurred) It was just the right amount of fun to make me feel very happy even though I was bored enough to watch Deaf Mingwen and complained about it crazily because of the embarrassing pretentious plot. (It is recommended that the author can make the plot of the story more substantial, and the environment, scenes, and expressive tension can be bolder, so that it can be more comfortable and improve the perception) Disadvantages of this work The characterization is not deep enough (except for the protagonist, the characterization of others is basically unimpressive) The plot is too fast (suspected of being rushed, which is very fatal to the life of the novel) The expressiveness of the women who appear in the novel is at a low level (maybe the author is really not suitable for portraying female characters) Could you, this old boy like the author, stop posting one chapter into three chapters all the time? If you have the ability, you can speed up the update to the level of a real three chapters. It's not worth the money! ! ! Final evaluation: This article is of medium level. The plot, novel themes and new beginnings, and the protagonist's behavior are very suitable for young people. Kill, kill, kill. The expansion of the content is medium and not suitable for book lovers who like farming. The timeline of the entire book up to chapter 319 is less than a few years. It is also not suitable for book lovers who have particularly high requirements for writing, details and plot. The problems that have arisen have been discussed in the shortcomings and I will not go into details. Book lovers who want a refreshing novel that is not brainless can feel free to read it. The above contents are all personal opinions. If you have any discordant views, please block them and don't bb.

I finally changed the map, but I hope it won't be upgraded in the same way as before. All the enemies in the previous game are just enough for the protagonist to deal with, and the lifespan gained every time is just enough. It feels like the author is trying to level up, which gives me an invincible but a bit frustrated feeling. If this kind of plot continues later, it will inevitably cause criticism. Beauty fatigue, I suggest that you don't level up in the future, upgrade your qualifications when they are needed, and get the Nanyang Sect. There are a lot of treasures, and the treasures that do not improve the qualifications of cultivating immortals are very strange. If you can overwhelm others with your realm later, and write it as an invincible flow at the beginning, wouldn't it be more enjoyable than the previous upgrade invincible flow, and it will not cause aesthetic fatigue.

Only by never forgetting your original intention can you succeed! Shen Yi did it! Lu Yue did it! From accidentally watching a video to reading this book, to following up on this book all the time, from May to now, maybe I am not a long-time fan of this book, nor have I been with this book for a long time. But this book is the first full-length novel that I have finished reading in my life. When I saw the final ending, I was extremely excited because the title of the author's last chapter was consistent with the book review I had left, because Shen Yi was just like what I thought. He did not sit high in the sky and overlook the world. Instead, he just wanted to live a stable and comfortable life just as he had come. His heaven is never filled with lofty gods and Buddhas, he is just an ordinary person. It also proves the book review I left because I read this book early in the morning and looked forward to updating it later. Perhaps for a moment, we book fans caught a glimpse of Shen Yi's soul in the world outside the book, and resonated with the author's soul through the words.

Anyway, I was quite confused when I read it. I always felt that the author was always writing nonsense. I didn't know who these people were before, so why did this happen all of a sudden? Who are they? What are they doing? Why the protagonist comes here is not explained clearly. It made me guess that maybe they used people to practice martial arts, and then the protagonist found out, but how did the protagonist find out? How did I discover the protagonist? And why did the protagonist suddenly have such a big psychological change, suddenly come here to catch them, suddenly use the new identity he got, and then recruit people to fight for them? What is he doing? I really can't understand it and I'm a little confused. Although I think it looks pretty good, I just can't accept it. Or maybe I'm in a bad mood today. I can't figure it out. In short, I have always wanted to complain about this book. I think this book is quite good, but it makes me uncomfortable to read it like this.

As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep following it. I can't give you any evaluation except that it's beautiful. I've watched it for the fourth time. I really like the main character Shen Yi. Let's break down some of the things I like about this article: 1. There are no messy emotional lines. (OS: The protagonist Shen Yi has no emotional connection, no official supporting role, and no female protagonist.) Each female character is well-shaped, and there is no deliberate attempt to vilify or weaken the female character just because it is a male story. (OS: Anyway, everyone is equally weak in front of Shen Yi, either weaker than Shen Yi or on the way to being weaker than Shen Yi.) There are actually quite a lot of female characters in the book, and they are all single arrows against Shen Yi. The positive female characters who have appeared are all constantly working hard to become stronger and positive (os: the negative female characters that have appeared so far are all burping) 2. This is a fun article, and I enjoyed reading it anyway. [Emot=default,25/](os: Those who looked unhappy were dragged out and beheaded.) There is no conspiracy or brain-burning plot. In fact, the author's writing style is relatively plain, because I have read it four times and I haven't seen any golden sentences that can make the book stand out. But that's not to say that the author's writing is not good, it's just that it's suitable for simple-minded people like me. 3. The central intention of this article is very good: to be a human being. This principle runs through the entire article. The protagonist Shen Yi was reborn in the body of the little catcher in Boyun County. She stretched out her hand to stop the dog demon and protect the Liu family and his daughter (os: The Liu family and his daughter were still not saved in the follow-up plot, but it completely strengthened Shen Yi's determination to become stronger and a better person, because during this period Shen Yi wavered and became stubborn and only kept her own mind.), Becoming stronger step by step and protecting everything behind her. But Shen Yi is not blind, but depends on manpower and tries his best. Now the plot progresses to Shen Yi's confrontation with the gods and Buddhas all over the sky. Even though he has become very strong, Shen Yi's positioning of himself has never changed. Shen Yi is not aloof among the gods and Buddhas all over the sky. He is just a human being. He just wants to live well and protect all the people he wants to protect. Ever since he was reborn in Boyun County, the hand he extended when facing the dog demon has actually never been put down. 4. In my personal opinion, the biggest feature of this book is that the protagonist Shen Yi is so well portrayed. At first, Shen Yi just wanted to have the ability to protect himself and have a hot bed with his wife and children, but as the plot developed step by step, Shen Yi gave up this idea. Shen Yi realized that there was not enough time left for him. He had no time to have small affections, and he could not let those weaker than him become his weakness (os: Shen Yi later cultivated the ruthless way). In fact, he had been walking on the road of having to continue to become stronger, because once he stopped, countless people might die behind him, and everything he wanted to protect would be wiped out. And Shen Yi will definitely do what she promises. She won't accept anything she can't do but will try her best (os: apart from cheating the little white tiger An Yi, this is the only time she feels completely guilty hahaha). From Boyun County to the map of Shen Dynasty, Shen Yi can sleep with peace of mind no more than five times. Shen Yi has been growing stronger and does not trust anyone or anything. His biggest reliance is himself. Shen Yi has always been a good baby who works hard to become stronger. (Os: This sentence is after Shen Yi released the Daqian map, because Shen Yi's reborn body was only in his early twenties, and he is still in his early thirties after working hard. Everything on the map is thousands or tens of thousands years old.) Disadvantages of this article: The author is slow to update, one chapter a day, and he always asks for leave. Let's take a look at the Shen Yi Jade Xu Universe Dharma I generated using AI. [Emot=default,64/]

The author always has a situation where A appears at location C, and then B sees A. A came and C took a bite of rice. "Why is he here?" B touched the anus. Who can understand whoever sees quickly? ? ? ? ? Reading a novel requires a lot of mental effort, so I can't relax. Normal shouldn't be. "Why is he here?" B glanced at A and touched his anus with some embarrassment. The author never says who is who. He may have a picture in his mind, but he doesn't consider that this is the first time the reader has seen it. Then this book gave me the embarrassment of having writing but no writing.

First of all, I'm not trying to drag you out. Although the title of this book is very similar to that of an assembly line novel, the writing is really good. The world view is complete, the plot is smooth, the characters are well described, the supporting characters and details are well grasped, especially the protagonist's character. I really like it. It speaks less and the words are clear and concise. It is impulsive but yet cerebral, cold yet humane, and decisive but has a bottom line. This is the best book I have read this year. It is indeed very good. I wonder if the quality will decrease in the future.

The content of these two books is basically the same as far as the twenty chapters I have seen so far. Brother author, what is going on with you? It's very similar. The dog demon at the beginning has one year left to live, plus martial arts skills, etc. Good guy, is Doenjang dipped in green onions your trump card, or have you been censored?

Halfway through I couldn't stand it anymore. The IQs of all the members were worrying. They started saying that Nanyang had been sealed off for one hundred thousand years. This time is a very large number in any fairy novel. It can be called the age of myth. In this book, there are only one hundred thousand and one thousand years ago. The characters are surrounded by The situation has not changed. The Ten Thousand Monster Cave is so powerful that it has not wiped out the human race. The protagonist of Nanyang has gone from the first level to the eighth level in less than a year. Other sects are watching this miracle grow so fast and are not curious. It is too unreasonable not to arrest the protagonist and study it.

It's a very ordinary book, the plot is cliche and bland, I really can't stand it.