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Missing the ending, it feels a bit emasculating, so I deducted one star.

Too six. The city lord is here to trouble you, a 6-year-old child. Still, still have to. Sophistry, turning his money from this pit into investments. I just like to talk nonsense. The plot can be surprising. But you can't have no brains, right?

You have been struggling, and you have just started to have some strength, but you are unfinished at this time.

It's really not that good at the beginning, but it becomes more interesting as you get to the end, and there are a lot of jokes.

The first batch is slow (it cannot be said that the slowness is because the chapters are too long), and the later batch is fast, and they are upgrading like crazy.

The culprit is the girl from the Li family, a remnant of feudalism, an indecisive scumbag, disgusting thing, and he is the one who deserves to die.

Check in at 3.20 on the 16th day
Today is another day at work, alas

The writing is pretty good, and it's more in line with my personal preferences, but I don't really like Tang Yue, so I'll keep it for now.

I feel like the protagonist with long hair and good looks is suitable

These things have been too popular recently, and Kuye can just play with them to make me laugh. If you don't advance the protagonist's main plot, why are you playing Kuye all the time? How long will a Duande rabbit be in need of water?

The data is as funny as it is. A soul that was approaching a thousand years after entering the Spiritual Ascension Platform for three years is still one step away from a thousand years. The Millennium Fire Horn Ox fought a few rounds with the protagonist and became nine hundred years old. Do you know what you are writing?

It's so beautiful. I even opened a membership for this. I hope it will be updated soon.

What's going on? What's wrong with you? If you don't update, what are you doing? 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😌

Halfway through, there are several chapters in a row that are all about settings.

Hello, Li Ka-shing, Barkol Road, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, la, la, la,

The content is all skipped, and many chapters are incoherent with the previous text.

I hope I can continue to write well.
I hope it can be written well and not involve such disgusting plots.

I really can't stand it anymore. I'm taking care of all kinds of resources all the way. I'll give you whatever you want.

I haven't read the original work but I like this book very much. Brother, you must not be a eunuch anymore.

The speed of the car took off, and even the pressure could not hold down Six Six Six.

Not bad, good to watch, the plot is very interesting, I hope you can continue watching more

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If you are an old scholar, let me take care of you first. Come on, author! ! Do it faster

Every time I watch something like Lord, I am speechless
The following can be improved, but the protagonist's personal strength cannot be improved a little.

Seriously, I'm done
I really don't know what he wrote is so messed up. I don't know what kind of copy he used in this prehistoric way? Wasn't this Nuwa the one who took the form of Long Han after calamity? If I remember correctly, it seems that the Six Saints generally take form during this calamity, and what is the protagonist's system? I don't even know if he is trash or what, tmd can extract fragments of the Chaos Bead and fragments of the Creation Jade Butterfly. To be honest, your status should be very high? ! It was also said that it can block Tianji, but you blocked a der. I don't know what you are blocking. If you can block Tianji, Nuwa will not be able to find you at all! And you actually wrote that Nuwa was already a quasi-saint at this time? ? ? Are you telling me that he has already become a quasi-saint by measuring the calamity of the ferocious beast? He would be a quasi-saint by now! Are we all that weak? Shouldn't she be the strongest when other saints plot against her? It's really written in a mess and I can't even read it. Tmd Is the one you wrote the protagonist or Nuwa the protagonist? There are also a lot of settings for time travellers, so I'm very curious, what is Buzhou Mountain's coercion tmd? Is it possible to climb Buzhou Mountain if you want to? It is true that during the ferocious beast period, Buzhou Mountain was not accessible to anyone who wanted to, and it seems that Nuwa transformed into the middle part of Buzhou Mountain. If you can't climb Zhoushan Mountain, you must be Taiyi. And if I remember correctly, Nuwa and Fuxi in the early stage seemed to be equivalent to conjoined twins. Just like Sanqing, they seemed to go everywhere together in the early stage, right?

I started to make people write some disgusting and poisonous things at every turn. Observe Samsung for two days first

You don't even need to read the beginning. First of all, if you don't say that the elder of the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex family said, it's best if you can capture him alive. If you can't capture him alive, kill him. If I hadn't said this, I could still have barely read it. And after saying this, no one of the four major elemental academies can compete with the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex family, so how could this bitch from the Shuiyuanyuansu or Ice Elemental Academy dare to stop it? In other words, after stopping it, with the potential of the martial soul, if the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect did not ask Yu Yuanzhen and Yu Luo Mian to come over and bring a few stronger soul masters, the Water Element Academy would be gone, right? It's really the small head that controls the big head, right? Just to join the Water Element Academy, you can put aside all kinds of fantasies and just write nonsense, right? I also thought about what if Sendo Liu came to the rescue, but it turned out to be a bad water elemental academy. Moreover, it seems that the dean of the Water Element Academy is just a level 78 soul saint. He is probably not as good as Flanders in being able to become the dean, and he cannot be a brainless person. He can't be like a sick person, offending the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect for an unrelated child, right? Ah? I thought it was either Bibi Dong or Qiandaoliu, or at worst, someone from the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, but in fact, it turned out to be something from the Water Element Academy.

I'm afraid that YY will make me drift away
The author is somehow right, I don't like anti-Japanese dramas, they are too insulting to sacrifice and struggle. I felt very happy after reading what you wrote, so I didn't dare to read it any more. I felt that reading too much about intelligence reduction would affect reality. I'm sorry! Not the audience.

What kind of crazy operation is it to recognize the master of the Star Tower? You have to become a disciple of the Mountain Guest and practice the Secret Book of Nine Tribulations. What do you want to be the future Lord of Luo City? Don't forget that the source world has the original path of cause and effect. You still snatched such a huge opportunity, and the souls of all four systems have mutated. You can die without breaking through to immortality. What are you thinking?

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty Too short, too few, too few, too annoying.

Isn't this just a piece of self-pleasure by the author... And it's the kind that lacks common sense... In 1979... You wrote Ip Man and planned to film it? Then he is just one or two Japanese... Do you want to take Zidan earlier?

I've read dozens of chapters and I can't stand it anymore. What the hell is this about?

Really retarded. The preface does not match the postscript. Reading this novel gave me the feeling that my brain is not fully developed and my cerebellum is not fully developed.

Again, the writing can't keep up with the imagination.
Don't update if you don't want to. I don't know how to write villains and battles, so I have to write hard. As a result, my writing and thinking can't keep up, and the update is delayed again and again. I can write about cultivating my own beasts, but I have to write the battle scenes that I have written in a mess. I have to write some villains, and I have to write Ruozhi, Ambush. I didn't even think about whether I could control it before. From the beginning of the Time Tribulation Ice Dragon, why it was led by the fallen to the protagonist's city and why the protagonist was the only survivor who was not frozen. The seeds of the golden apple won by Cloud Cat, the memory-altering Gu pulled out by the Evolved God, the identity of the fishing old man and the Evolved God entering the abyss, and which fallen organization the ghost elders behind the two fallen twins in Qiming City belong to, and the twin cats were affected by the pollution of the abyss by the Mountain Swallowing Dog. Why were the spiritual cultivation space and the spiritual beasts in it not affected? Has Feng Lin's volcanic skill proficiency increased after participating in the preliminary round of the Young Dragon Cup? How much has it increased? Where did the ritual power collected after winning the final go? After the baptism of dragon blood, when can I use the advance future improvement to get it from the nightmare dragon? The skills obtained, whether the Heaven Control function can enhance the Twin Cats' Hundred Tribulation Tiger Roaring Thunder, where the power of the Dog Tail Jujube Tree went and what its use is, why the Deep Sea Ao family wants the Jade Vein Dragon, and whether the owner of the Sky Emperor in the small world can advance to the Evolution Palace and use the Evolution True Eye and the Dragon Bone Sign for Divination How to collect the power of incense... If you don't fill in these pitfalls, why should you fight with the other Four Saint talent holders? This is still the protagonist, and there are also a lot of pitfalls on other supporting characters, such as whether the squad leader has obtained the Nirvana Phoenix Fire, how many people know about Lin Qingshuang's talent, and why the Gu family uses " "The God-Building Plan" is about cultivating Shen Wu Nian and their family's 100,000-year luck. Is Zi Ji Tong ready to kill the Luck Wudao Dragon? If this pile of pitfalls is not filled, a bunch of childish fight scenes have to be added, and a bunch of things are imposed for the halo of the protagonist. The people around him are good to the male protagonist and have a good relationship with the male protagonist. They are all beauties, and the male characters are basically incompatible with the protagonist. The only male character is a sleeping beauty because of his young hair. He wants to open a harem as soon as possible. If you don't know it, you would think you are a masculine person. From the beginning to the end, there is almost nothing to watch except cultivating the beast and getting along with your own beast, because it is ugly.

When will it be updated? I've been waiting for a long time.

What kind of stinky article was written, what kind of Bluesilver Grass soul ring was absorbed, and what the hell was the point of absorbing two of them? There are metallic soul beast plants. If you don't find a *** animal soul master, if you write a novel with this level, it would be a shame to leave it to grandma's house.

Has the author really seen Douluo? Did you awaken your martial spirit at the age of ten? Tang San awakened in the village. There were only a few people there at that time. You start with dozens coming.

I feel like the author simply didn't understand that the purpose of the existence of the Primarch and the Astartes was for the Great Crusade. The Primarch itself was a ruthless subspace job done by Huang Pizi for the Great Crusade. He couldn't bear Luojia's delay in the progress of the Great Crusade because of the Perfect City, so he took the Smurfs and Custodes A over there and forced Luojia to kneel down and admit his mistake. Now you say you won't go, what's wrong, man? According to Huang Pizi's tone, I can't bring the Dark Angel over to open your eyes. It's not nice to say that. According to Huang's incredible level, if you say you don't want to do the Great Crusade because of the construction of the home planet, it's possible that he directly ordered the home star for you. The Emperor is an old tyrant. I wanted to laugh when the author wrote the conversation between Perturabo and the Emperor. Do you really think he dare not kill the Primarch?

What nonsense
After reading the introduction, the protagonist was also a rural boy back home, and suddenly he became an eighth-level worker. Everyone knew there was something wrong. This is a novel.

Let me know when you get it so that others don't have to go in vain.

I won't tell you whether it's good or not. Anyway, I stayed up late to watch it.
My eyes are sore when I look at it. Author, I hate you.

I came across the tweet video. Reading this article is really a waste of time. I don't know how to write about female videos. I'd better change my route as soon as possible. 0 Stars.

There were some problems in the middle and later stages, and many holes were left unfinished. The early stages were pretty good, but the plot was confusing in the middle and later stages, and it felt like a lot of content was missing. There was even a chapter that repeated a lot of words in the second half of the previous chapter.






