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The plot in the first few dozen chapters is okay, forget about some random quotations, just think that the author is forcing YY, and the readers just want to see the plot of the story. After writing that Hewei appeared, he no longer wanted to be a son, a woman forcibly made trouble, and often wrote such scenes. Is this disgusting and trying to persuade readers to quit?
My life has fallen into darkness again, and I feel that even the beam of sunlight coming in from the skylight is no longer so warm and bright. My life plunged back into grayness, and I felt that even the sunlight from the skylight was no longer so warm and bright.
At present, the plot seems reasonable and the characters are consistent with the setting.
You can take a look, it's very good and real.
Patriotic rice is better than dog food! ! !
What's wrong with eating patriotic food? You can't write a beast as the protagonist, right? I don't know what those people who hate patriotic meals are thinking. Did people before 80 learn to read novels?
The writing is okay, but there are all kinds of little poisonous points.
It is recommended to jump directly to Chapter 7 after reading Chapter 1. Although there may be some information missing, you may be poisoned if you don't skip the poisonous points in the middle. It is also recommended to jump directly to Chapter 47. This chapter is extremely poisonous.
The author is great, please update more quickly, I can't sleep at night🤔🤔🤔
Without that writing style, it would be a cesspit. Many fans don't write about it, why do you think it is?
The book is not bad, very good, keep up the good work.
Very nice, the author will update soon Hurry up
Slowly I started to become European~
Fairy, was your keyboard trampled by a cat? How about I lend you my keyboard and I guarantee that I can type 200 words per minute! !
The most interesting thing about this genre of shaping the golden world through various vests is the interaction between the vests in front of other people, do you understand? Let me put it simply, two vests of opposing forces can find a suitable opportunity to exchange a move in front of everyone, and then compliment each other. If you really don't know how to write, just refer to Feipeng and Chonglou in Sword and Fairy III. What's the point of just writing about each vest without interacting with each other?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, highly recommended (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑
The skill design is quite good, but in the subsequent plot, it seems that he is rushing to become the Shrek Crown Prince, and he has some thoughts of accepting Ma Xiaotao as the heroine. Tentatively rated as seven stars, we will see the performance later.
Write a book about Qiandaoliu who time travels to Douer, but the evil spirit is the strictest father😘
I have read this book of yours, and it's okay, but I hope you won't be like other authors who don't update it until the finale, or stop updating it after a few hundred pages. In this case, this book won't be worth reading. We readers hope that you can read this book. This book has a perfect ending, and it is also the ending of the book "The Demon God". Don't write two or three or forty or fifty pictures and then stop updating it. It would be meaningless. I hope that readers who are looking forward to this book will continue to pay attention to the updates of your book and continue to read it. We will reward you if we have tickets, but I hope you won't give up, let alone live up to our readers' expectations for this book. I hope your book will have a perfect ending. I will always pursue this book. From the author, we look forward to the ending of your book🌹🌹🌹
25DAY丨Hmm~a piece of advice
A piece of advice for NPCs in the same dungeon as Ah Wu: Remember to be polite and friendly, otherwise you will be punished~
25DAY丨Advice～
A piece of advice for the NPCs in the same dungeon as Ah Wu: Remember to be polite and friendly to others, otherwise be careful~ (because our Ah Wu is the friendliest person in the game)
5.22
Linear algebra is so difficult. Who can learn it for me?
It's well written, please update it as often as possible
The plot line is quite good, but the characters are basically messed up, and the treasures obtained through cultivation are also exaggerated, just like those written by a kid, and boring.
25DAY丨Advice to NPC/players
Advice to NPCs: Don't listen to the rumors about surviving NPCs in other instances. We have a kind heart and will never tear NPCs apart (definitely), so be brave! Give me enough gaming experience~
Author, please keep updating, it's very beautiful.
[25DAY丨Please write a piece of advice for players/NPCs who do not have the same copy as Si.
He tried his best to look up to Si Wu and hugged Si Wu's thigh tightly. Be a pendant that doesn't cause trouble and let Si Wu have fun.
It's a masterpiece. I've finished it. Go check it out. There's a knife at the end.
Hey hey hey hey, I want five stars
Very nice, but updated a bit.
Too watery,
There isn't much in the main plot, nine out of ten is commentary, and it's paid, so there's only a little bit of creativity left.
Chase it all in one go! It's not a series where one family doesn't enter the same family!
The heroine is a beautiful and powerful little creature! The heroine's mother is a super heroine in the hard-on system! The two of them, including the father who adopted the heroine, the eldest uncle and the second uncle are all ruthless bosses who take precautions before they happen, and strike first to gain advantage and then to suffer disaster in the series! You should be a family! 🤑🤑🤑
The writing is pretty rubbish, let alone using the experience card and not doing anything. I have all Luo Feng's cultivation enlightenment secrets. I can just use the resources in the Death Mo to directly break through the planet. I also exercise, and I want to write about cheats, but I still don't understand how to use cheats. Swallow the big stage, stay away from the small one,
What did Guiguzi think when he used the theory of the Six Kingdoms to deceive the people at that time? Did he really think that he was a fool? The political essays are all taken seriously, but a bunch of people are boasting about this one, and they don't understand.
How to stop updating? Are you a eunuch? ? ? ? ? ? ? Uh-huh
25DAY丨Give me some advice
Don't mess with her, don't mess with her, as long as you don't do anything, you can still live! ! One last time, don't mess with her!
25DAY丨Advice
Please pay attention when you meet the beautiful and intelligent Si Wubao. The opportunity to clear the level is right in front of you. If you want to live, please seize it. Become the boss's follower, work for the boss, and you will get a gift pack of a copy of the level!
Thank you Xianxian! Thanks Ameng! Thank you Si Wu! Give me this chance! Thank you all!
5.22
Your little cutie suddenly bubbles up, say good night in advance.
I finally waited for the new book, looking forward to the update, please do your best
[25DAY丨Advice for NPC players in the same instance]
What the players say is, listen more to our baby Si Wu to ensure that you can survive. Si Wu is still very kind. If the NPC doesn't listen to me, then use it as a monster coin. If you obey, then use it later.
Do you have to wear something sexy if you know how to wear it? Hahaha
This is my first time writing a book and I am also a newbie. If there is anything wrong with it, please understand and you can also say it directly.
[25DAY丨Please write a piece of advice for players/NPCs who do not have the same copy as Si]
1. When Si Wu asks the question "Do you like me?", There is only one answer, which is "I like". 2. When facing Si Wu, be careful, careful, and careful in your words and deeds. This is related to your life. 3. Try to create interesting and novel characters, which can help you prolong your life.
[25DAY丨Advice for players who have played dungeons with Si Wu]
Those who follow "nothing" will prosper, and those who go against "nothing" will be isolated. My Siwu baby likes to make friends Hahahaha, although it's not that serious, my baby Si Wu is not easy to mess with.
It looked good, so I clicked report
Samsung! Can enter. More to my liking
25DAY丨Advice
To NPC: I hope you can have fun with Ah Wu ~ so that Ah Wu will not be bored in the endless world! To the players: Improve your ability to assess situations. Needless to say who is the strong one! Sweet-tongued and soft-hearted, that's all. Enjoy it for yourself!
It's rare to see such a retro novel today.
Good book, very good quality and very well paced. It's refreshing enough, but not disgusting.
What kind of rubbish novel is it? At the beginning of the myth, it was only called Tianzun and Quasi-Tianzun, but this book is called Quasi-Emperor? !