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You don't have to write if you don't know how to write. The author is Yunba. But if you have played Genshin Impact seriously, you won't know OOC.
And about private armed forces
What can be found is pmc company Of course, there is no unified license for PMC in the United States. State governments have the authority to issue government qualifications to private clothing companies. Therefore, the private armed forces of those landowners are all legal, and they can even establish their own military factories within their territories.
Rewrite the engine on the spot? Are you serious?
Why are you just looking at Mistress's legs?
You already have a system, why are you still worried about this telecom account and that telecom woman?
I always feel like you, the author, have gone astray.
There is another large group in the United States, namely landlords Don't think that these landowners are just like that. These landowners have private armies. In their territories, the police stations, education departments, and governments are all organized by themselves. They are a state within a state. And the apparent identities of these big landowners, such as Buffett, are the owners of large companies. Trump asked them to donate and invest hundreds of billions before, but they did nothing. Why? Because it is not their core interest. Their core power lies in private areas. Trump dare not touch them. If one move is made, the American landowners will be in collective unrest and the economy will collapse. No one will be able to live well. This is impossible, including Trump's own family, which is also developing in this direction. If the protagonist does not take the corporate route, then smuggle the territory, first rent a farm, and then gradually expand the territory resources, such as forest resources, or natural scenery resources, etc. It is not difficult to establish a good relationship with the governors in each state. Other process issues are not difficult, and the protagonist of the governor's vote can help. You must know that although it is a private territory, the people in the territory are still American citizens. But the problem is that private territory must not be violated. This old American law is here. Do you think it is the private territory of American citizens? No, you are wrong. It is the private territory of American directors. There are many landowners in the United States who purchase private land, and many have personal weapons. The licenses of the Blackwater Company were tradable in the past. Although they cannot be applied for again, those licenses are basically in the hands of the landowners. Their territory has used this license to legally create a lot of private armed forces. If they were to pull out all of them, the US military would be devastated.
Author, I have something to remind you
In fact, for American capitalists, business is not very important to them. Their basic base is private property, and the land resources they purchased after they started their business These land resources are their basic base. On those lands, they have absolute sovereignty, and even the FBI cannot enter. Even if outside companies collapse, they have a large number of armed forces on their private lands and can make a comeback at any time. So this is why Trump asked their companies to donate money, or talk about money, but they didn't do much at all, because companies and money are tools for them, and the main base for survival is on private land, where they are not afraid of anyone, even if Trump wants to send troops in, they can't get in, and they need a fight. Once a fight breaks out, private landowners across the United States will unite to resist. So author, you need to think from this aspect
I really don't understand. The protagonist has been kneeling and licking Klein, and the demigod traits are given to him for free. The troubles caused by Klein also have to be wiped out. For example, the trouble caused by the hermit and Klein is ultimately the problem that the protagonist and Adam solve. Even if you say you invest in him and put all your attention on him, that's not how you do it. The demigod traits are given for free and you wipe the butt when trouble occurs. The description of Klein also makes me feel a little ungrateful and completely indifferent to the protagonist. When facing a friend, I even feel a bit condescending and have a sense of superiority, treating him as a subordinate, but this protagonist is indeed destined to be a subordinate. He sold the Twilight Hermit Society cleanly and disclosed precious information directly. The broadcast is very characterless and poorly portrayed. Even if he is a lone wolf, he can achieve his current achievements just by relying on Adam. This Tarot Club has even lowered his own level. I even feel that this book has ruined Klein's popularity among the public.
It seems that the number of people checking in at night has increased in recent days.
Why do you have to have a relationship with Dai Yuhao? If you don't talk about it, you can't write. Basically, people who have a friendly relationship with Dai Yuhao end up becoming nanny writers.
Why did it all turn into a Kamen Rider plot?
You probably wrote it later using AI, right?
I'll do it, the heroine is gone. What about the author's follow-up? At least there is a female protagonist fighting against the mortal interface
I'll do it, the heroine is gone. What's next for the author? At the very least, there is a female protagonist fighting against the mortal interface and the spiritual world. I feel like this book is getting worse the more I read it, right? This is a good novel about cultivating immortals. Book lovers can read the novel "The Peak of Green Lotus".
Very nice. I like it. I hope you can cheer for it.
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I thought it was survival plus killing monsters, and the result was a harem.
Don't you think it's outrageous? Cats and dogs on the roadside can hear the protagonist's inner thoughts, and the range can range from those around you to those sitting in the stands playing in the ring. Isn't it awkward to have an inner monologue about your comments about your teammates and force the other characters in the audience to listen to them? Why not fill in some settings to reduce the number of people who can hear their voices?
Can the author tell me if it will take more time? I'm so frustrated that I can't finish it (((̨̡‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅)̧̢))
The fact that Ye Fan has the strength of the Emperor of Heaven only shows that Ye Fan himself is very strong, while Wang Bo is entirely because the Chaos Body is very strong rather than because he is very strong. This may be the reason why Wang Bo cannot survive nine lives.
It is also because Ye Fan's Dacheng Holy Body has the strength of a great emperor, so once Ye Fan becomes an emperor, he will almost become a heavenly emperor. Unlike Wang Bo, he can have the strength of a heavenly emperor because he relies too much on the Chaos Body.
There is a problem with the core idea. If you cling to Jin Yong's Confucian elite spiritual core, there will be no market for your writing. And do you really not study? In the early years of the Southern Song Dynasty, people from the north returned to the north, and people from the south returned to the south. Is it possible that you can't be the King of Han? Can't we start industry?
Will the heroine have to sacrifice later?
Only Ye Fan, the strongest holy body in history, can truly have a strength that is not weaker than that of the Wuque Emperor. Therefore, Ye Fan can break the curse of the Holy Body becoming an emperor. Without the combat power of the Wuque Emperor, it is almost a narrow escape to break the curse.
Really, I want to write a special article to say how serious I am in writing. I really didn't realize that nine wings are equal to three disasters and nine days. But don't you want to laugh after reading what I wrote? It doesn't make sense at all. It's really over.
After reading it, I was speechless and a lot of venomous, especially [url=bn]Jiang Nannan[/url]
Jiang Nannan's original novel first appeared in the 6th grade. The protagonist entered school at the age of 12. What do you mean? The protagonist went deep into the mountains to collect herbs when he was 7-8 years old to help Jiang Nannan's mother cure her heart disease. Let's talk about some of the poisonous points in this novel. 1. In order to collect Jiang Nannan's poison points, I complained: There are so many top-notch goddess opening templates (big sister template) in this original work, so don't have to involve Jiang Nannan. 2. The protagonist's strength and martial spirit are very weak. Complaint: If you don't play one of the three ultimate spiritual forms in Dou 2, how can you be invincible? 3. The protagonist revealed his identity at the beginning when he was very weak and complained: You really think I am stupid. Even if the system can't say, I will just let the Titled Douluo tie you up, won't you just die? 4. There is no topic at all for the person chosen at the beginning. I complained: If you directly choose the arch-rival in the inner courtyard, Senior Sister Tang Ya, Zhu Lu, Ning Tian, Wu Feng and Xu Jiujiu, wouldn't the topic come up?
The author has good ideas, but is disgusting
The writing is at the top of the list for novels. Generally speaking, I can accept it even if I change the settings a bit. There is logic, and the plot follows the logic and there is nothing wrong with it. If you want to become an immortal, just cultivate it well. The protagonist should be made to have ideals and beliefs, and he must reform and cultivate immortality for the sake of his beliefs. Realm, you want to take the public examination, you want to poke fun at all the sect monks who have families, why the sect monks from the cultivating family are not worthy of being your fellow disciples, it's just wrong to go up and kick you without offending you, after looking at it for a long time, it does smell like that As I got better and better, I started to feel something was not right. I had the symptom of changing from a pleasant article to a disgusting article. I took the time to read other people's comments. I would like to thank the reader who spoiled the story about the death of Narcissus and let me get out in time. Otherwise, I would really scold my mother. The author is I'm a bit of a literary youth, and I feel it, but the difference is that this author is very hidden, tricking people into killing him. I originally wanted to trick more brothers into joining in to be disgusted, but when I thought about it, I felt unhappy if the book's rating was too high, so I helped the brothers who read the comments first.
Rubbish. There's not much to say. The logic doesn't make sense. The division of combat power doesn't work either.
Let's give it four stars first. After all, it's not a very important thing here. It just gave me a headache.
Why does the author keep emphasizing that the protagonist's talent is not good? Is it the side or the mission? Look at this, there are more before, so I won't take screenshots. I emphasize here that most people only break through the level 2 blacksmith at about 13-15 years old. Mu Xi passed the level 2 blacksmith at the age of 13, and is already a genius among his peers. The protagonist is 9 years old, level 2, what else can I say? The historical record is over eight years old. Do you have to break the historical record to be considered a genius? You come here to break the record and keep shouting that his talent is not good. Who can say anything? A talent can't compare to others. You keep saying that it really gives me a headache. Moreover, the protagonist did not put all his energy into forging like Tang Wulin. The protagonist was not only 9 years old and level 28, but also put most of his energy into exercising. As a result, the forging was similar to that of Tang Wulin. Then you Kuku said that his talent was not good, so did you really understand the background? Writing blindly
The contrast is too great
This level. . Full of loopholes. . Are you a novice? What are your characteristics? Sold your account?
Is the author still alive or not?
To be honest, I have never played that game and I really don't understand it.
According to Douluo's setting that hidden weapons can kill gods, the Desert Eagle is invincible. . It's still one shot at a time, no matter the level. After all, cold weapons cannot be more powerful than hot weapons. .
It looks good, the author will update it soon, urgently (๑•ૅω•´๑)
After reading the introduction, the results of this book are immediately revealed. Shrek is a pure demonic person, and he is the grandson of Xuanzi. The author's setting directly dissuades most people. It is really an idiot's identity and background setting.
Not good enough. Excellent product 👍updated and updated.
Classic, funny, with lots of jokes, highly recommended
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
This is the first time I see the protagonist absorbing soul bones for only 500 years, and it is not an external soul bone.
Still deleting comments and never regretting this
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Understand Chapter 1 Why not exile to the deep sea? I remember that the God of Fire was later adopted by the adoptive mother of the ocean goddess Hera?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
Overall, it's great. I hope typos or something can be corrected.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
He has always been a liar and has no ideas of his own. He is a bitch who helps both good and bad people. What's the use of Mumadi? What's the use of his apprentice? He won't be held responsible for anything he does wrong. The plot has always been watery.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
I was so disgusted when I saw the part where I accepted Jiang Nannan.
Where is the sadness in the part about taking in a harem just to make up for the tragedy? There are also problems with Jiang Nannan's character. After the relationship in the original work, Jiang Nannan felt embarrassed and embarrassed to see anyone, so she left her sick mother and went to Shrek to study. At that time, her mother was not well and no one was taking care of her. If Xu Sanshi's conscience hadn't been found to help take care of her, Jiang Nannan would not have been home for several years and her mother would have died in bed long ago without anyone to take care of her.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?