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I don't know why, but the marriage system is so "harmonious" to moral and legal constraints on mistresses, illegitimate children, inheritance, etc. Nowadays, when encountering the heroine in such an environment, she is already in a state of love to death. What's more, in ancient times, it was even more unfriendly to women. Without rights and strategies, even the title of golden branch and jade leaf cannot be written down. Love without greed is a gift, and going too far is a punishment. The author writes soberly, bear with it!

Isn't it? You can tolerate watching me from the front, but do you have to hide it from behind? They are already in an invincible state, what era are they in, and there is such an old-fashioned plot?

Can the author write more?
It's still too few. Now I save dozens of pictures or look at them again after a week.

✖‿✖What you said makes sense and I am speechless.

The protagonist is even more cowardly than Tang San. Tang San also knows how to regain his position if he has the strength. He is still humble despite his strength. A bank employee wanted to kill him and steal his bank card inside the bank, but he gave in after fighting for a long time. Teachers from other schools wanted to kill him because they bullied the younger ones, but they didn't kill him because of some internal reasons in the school.

A very good work written by Mortal Fans. I have read Chapter 17 now. It is very good. Come on, the author. I have given all my monthly recommendation votes.

The first day of martial arts training increased by 50 points, and then it became 3 points a day. . . . Just say it casually Then there is the root problem. . . It seems like it's important if you want it to be important, and if you don't want it to be important, it's not important.

It's really beautiful. Simply can't see enough. So wonderful. My protagonist will definitely travel through the world later.

Are you serious about this introduction? Hundreds of fighting emperors?

2026.03.20
The 16th day of punching in, the 16th day of school, and the 14th day of class

It looks good, I love watching it, keep up the good work, update quickly, I really like the single heroine

A little watery
After reading about ten chapters, the protagonist is selling clothes. I don't know what companies and shares the protagonist has. I only mentioned 29% of his own business company.

Why don't some martial spirits with elemental attributes remain the same? For example, space is definitely stronger.

Where are people? Why don't you update it? If you don't update it, let the two of you in your family fly.

Woohoo, are you still updating? I finally waited for the update, I must update it.

Pass on, the old ghost Yumin has won the resurrection match!

The first time the entire book was settled. When I saw the hero and Chibi, I felt like I was being cheated (I don't like the hero), but in the later stages, the cheating was almost corrected, and now the summary is pretty good.

I am reborn and surviving on the road again
It was the first time I read this series of survival road stories. It was really novel. Then I found this big book. The heroine is so cool and sassy😎. After reading the latest chapter, the character design has not collapsed. The plot is very compact and the pace is fast. It is really awesome.级好看👍非常推荐(哈哈哈哈哈😊在看到那些载具回收还是系统奖励的时候,我都直接跳过了,太长了😑)大大继续努力加油,期待后面的剧情,也期待你下一本书👴😽爱你🥰

old problem
From the beginning, I have been talking about leaving Shrek and then the plot just drags on. I can probably guess what I want to write later. There is no need for the protagonist's ability to join Shrek and other nonsense. Is it not enough to just go back to the far north? Later, I will go to the Noumenon Sect to be the Holy Son. If you update it quickly, I won't say anything.

If Donghuang really wants to kill a perfect emperor, he can't do more than three moves.

As long as Wang Bo doesn't become an emperor, he can only be stronger than the average Emperor Wuque at most, so it's impossible for him to challenge Donghuang at this time. After all, Emperor Wuque is probably not strong enough to withstand even one of Donghuang's moves, and even if he can withstand one move, he probably won't be able to resist.

I have ideas, but I can't write them well. Did you write 10 of the first 50 chapters about the protagonist? There is a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. It looks very bad. I don't know how the score is so high.

Author, why don't you change the introduction first? You can just replace the two words "map" with "place" for a world.

The clone gene breeders have come out, and they are given maces. What a genius. As long as you say these are genetic weapons, the green-skinned orcs all grow from the ground, and it is not inappropriate to use local materials to make weapons. It is really unbearable to give everyone a mace. Three minutes to persuade him to quit.

Please read QAQ
My grades have been getting worse and worse recently, so I shamelessly beg you readers. ---------- In addition, I have opened a new book, which is also about Dragon King. It is called "Douluo: Martial Soul Black Kite, the Herrscher of Knowledge". It has multiple female protagonists. If you are interested, you can read it.

It's inexplicable. I'm here to revive the glory of an angel. I work as a nanny for others. If I don't agree with it, I'll write it off. It's so well written that my head feels like it's been caught in the door.

don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

All the handsome guys and beauties passing by, come and take a look.
Newbie, new book. This is my first time writing about Douluo + Bengtie. Please don't keep books during the new book period. The author will do my best to restore the character's personality. There may be some problems occasionally when writing. Please forgive me. If you have tickets, send some tickets to support it. If this book does well, the author will consider the next Douluo + Bengtie.

It is a pity that this book is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.
The writing details in this book are all top-notch, and the case setting is quite clever and interesting. But the problem is also huge, First, the heroism of the protagonist was not written, and the tragic experience of innocent people was not written to highlight the sense of mission that must be achieved by the protagonist. At present, the protagonist is a pure partner of justice, regardless of who is involved, regardless of his martial arts skills and extraordinary abilities. Gui was able to bury himself casually, and he went to solve the case without even being an official or having any martial arts skills, which made it difficult for people to understand his motives. However, the setting before the time travel was that he was an old prisoner. 👮It is good to be so selfless, unsophisticated, and unafraid of power. The second is that the status comparison is seriously imbalanced. The protagonist is not even a ninth-grade official, but he has been deeply involved in the battle to seize the legitimate rights and still escaped unscathed. It is outrageous to continue to wander among the forces that seize the legitimate sons. For example, there are a total of 52 episodes of the Song Dynasty where Song Ci dealt with cases among ordinary people. In episode 34, Song Ci dealt with cases among ordinary people. When he met Diao, who was familiar with the rules of the officialdom, he began to feel frustrated. At this time, the two were equal in rank and both were fifth-grade. After the 17th episode, he began to fight in the court, and in the 11th episode, he resigned and went home just because of a corruption investigation. Even if the setting of the protagonist in another world can't be so outrageous, can't we just deal with civilian cases in the early and mid-term? Wouldn't it be a good idea to wait until your official position reaches at least the seventh rank as censor before getting involved in such a big thing? The third is the imbalance of power and responsibility. When I saw the water transportation case, I couldn't stand it. Even the emperor of the Qing Dynasty, who was at the peak of his centralized power, could not make an exception and appoint a ninth-grade official as an imperial envoy to inspect water transportation. The other world couldn't be so outrageous. Even if Hai Rui himself came there, he would have to be promoted to the seventh-grade censor, let alone his son. What do those officials who studied hard for decades before becoming Jinshi and more than ten years before becoming imperial censors think? Are they all computer NPCs without any emotions? Fourth, there is no safety guarantee. If nothing happens in the beginning, it can be understood that the mastermind behind the scenes was negligent (only the protagonist resisted and was negligent), but when the canal transport case is seized and both parties know that everything is still OK, it is outrageous. These contenders for the throne actually regard the rise and fall of the country as more important than the throne. Can an upright official who does not accept money, is not afraid of death, and only recognizes the emperor and national laws and cannot just lift his hand, can that prince accept it? Everyone has started assassinating and fighting for their lives. Can their methods withstand investigation? At this time, the protagonist has nothing to protect him, and has no official connections to protect him. If we don't deal with it quickly, the author can rely on the protection of the best martial arts master to solve the problem, but can the emperor sleep at this time? Alas, I have written so much, maybe the author will not read it, but it is such a pity that this book is really well written, but the background logic has too many loopholes.

My evaluation is that it is better to read the original work, it is so well written.

I feel like it won't affect me at all if I skip it. Many places are completely repeated. Art is not made up like this. It will drive readers away.

The writing is getting worse and worse, and the author's books are becoming more and more like a female channel. Starting from the showdown with Qian Daoliu, the male protagonist becomes more and more stupid as he writes, and his character is always a grumpy kid who thinks he is smart. The dialogue in this book is even more illogical, and he likes to talk too much. In the end, the talk is not correct logic, but is a slippery slope fallacy and a straw man fallacy. Fortunately, you are tired of writing all of them in one book and two books. The characters in the previous books tended to be unfettered by their own will, so it's no problem for you to write this routine. The core of this book is to survive. It would be difficult for you to write according to the previous routine.

Adorable new author asking for votes🫡🫡
As the title states, I have been single-player since I first published the book. I hope everyone who has a ticket (any ticket will do) will support it, and those who don't have a ticket can leave a message, even if it is criticism.

It's very interesting~ Come on, the author~ Work hard to update~ Keep looking forward to it~

As a royal man, I was very pleased to read this book. But when there are more than 200 pictures, it becomes more and more unrealistic. Especially when I see that during the Anti-Japanese War, all-out resistance was launched because it affected the interests of certain people. I can no longer stand it. There are thousands of words in history, but I can't even describe them in just a few words. There is no need to explain or refute anything. It's just that when you are facing an entire world and an entire civilization by yourself, it is too overwhelming to overwhelm others' writing. War is a catalyst for civilization. In addition to fighting people and goods, war is more importantly about fighting the information gap. When you keep investing resources because of the war, your opponent is actually also exploring your playing methods and routines. Do you think a magical civilization would not know how to detect magical fluctuations? Just like radio. Your skeleton soldiers are just hiding, not the soul fire has really disappeared. It is impossible that there has been no way to detect the undead in the history of the continent for so many years. The cannonball attack is also particularly easy to copy. It's just that the boost method is different, and even the magic one can make it better. For example, carve explosion runes or plague runes into stone bullets. When you use scientific terms to describe the study of magic. This activates the killer weapon of intelligent civilization: orderly inheritance. They will discover [gravity] and know how easily it can solve a city by dropping a 10-ton stone from a height of 20,000 meters. They will discover [Vacuum], and pictures and texts depicting magical effects such as vacuum atmosphere will be painted on equipment and city walls. Shooting bow and arrow bullets will seriously interfere with the accuracy. They will invent [drawing the ground as a prison], and any field army can prop up a defensive or offensive earth wall in the shortest possible time to withstand long-range damage or increase the height to create favorable offensive conditions. There are too many. You underestimate the weight of the word civilization.

You think that God Shura is the nanny, and you think that the Resurrection God Realm is opened by you even before you take the God of Death Domain. God Shura doesn't know that Tang San will inherit the Seagod position in the future, so why would he prepare Xiao Wu as a scabbard, even if he knew that his successor would be divided into half? And why did he choose Tang Chen as his successor? When you got the Vast Sea Universe Cover, you gave it to Tang San as soon as possible, euphemistically calling it an arrangement of fate. Is it because you couldn't see the Sea God's position, or was it an arrangement of fate? Are you cheap or not? 🙃🙃













