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There are really few fans of Sun Moon Same Wrong
Have you cut the book? Have you cut the book? Have you cut the book?
Read Chapter 4 yourself, the first three chapters are useless. Anyway, it feels weird and embarrassing. Why do you write it like this? Let's talk about the fight with the unyielding soul. I also gave my past and future plans to this unyielding soul. When I come back, I want to laugh.
The more the protagonist looks at it, the more disgusting he becomes.
Damn it, I looked at the title of the book and read it a few times. I thought it was a novel with a female protagonist and a female lead. I took a quick glance at it and dismissed it. This time I accidentally clicked in and found out that it was a male protagonist.
Not bad, I like to watch good things, please update more, sleep, sleep, sleep, sleep, sleep, sleep, sleep
The male protagonist is too constipated. Please respond to Xiaoxi more. Even if he wants to be so awkward and tactful, he still has to let Xiaoxi know. You stinky man has really wronged Xiaoxi for so long😊
By the way, don't Luo Xiaoyi and the others have too few soul rings? Twin martial souls!! Soul Saint already has 14 soul rings.
The opening three chapters are poorly written.
I'll keep reading. If the rating doesn't change, it proves that the book is not good.
Quick update, different from other Dragon King fanfics, I feel very good
Shen Qingtang (must see)
Regarding the reason why the male protagonist did not report Shen Qingtang immediately, it is in Chapters 76 and 77. I suggest you read it first to see if you can accept it.
When, where and when will it be updated?
I became the person in the secretary room
The first few chapters are okay, but the later chapters are repetitive.
When and where was it updated?
Take in mothers and daughters, take in sisters, take in masters and disciples, take each one as you see them.
Humorous speech is a bonus, but if you are talkative and have no words, you will be speechless. Northeastern people may not necessarily talk a lot or be nagging, but the protagonist has been reinforcing the stereotyped image on the Internet. Others are always complimentary and answer the questions. This is the first time I see the protagonist nagging him. It is very annoying. There are only a few paragraphs in the plot where the protagonist is full of talk. Sorry...
Not many people have finished reading the novel. This is a book that I still want to read after reading the whole novel. I want to read it again after reading it, and also want to see if the author has any other books on the shelf. Thanks to the author's words and thoughts, I not only felt the love, hatred, joys and sorrows of the characters in the book, but also gained a deeper understanding of how to behave in the world.
Just so-so! It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away
It's creative. Just look at the name and it's a good book. Whenever the two Tang Dynasties are at odds with each other, it's Lily.
The school beauty in front failed to awaken. The protagonist takes her to fight, but the gold bars he finds are not handed over. The white-eyed wolf takes everything with him.
parallel time and space,
It's okay if you don't have to use your brain to watch it. Personal feeling
Can the author update time be fixed?
Xiang Fengfeng, have you entered? No update for half a year
The author must accept all of them
Do you know what book you hate the most?
What I hate the most is rubbish if there is a gold finger. If there is no sign for quality, it is worse than rubbish.
It's pretty good. Not to mention how beautiful it is, it can only be read by me, a bookworm of 20 years, and there aren't that many bad points.
I love Ah Wu so much! ! ! Ah Wu is the invincible fighter in the world!
The update has been discontinued again. Have you cut the books? Are there any more updates?
There is a single heroine in QQ. Douluo. 10 Books. 9 Books are all harem stallions. People are numb after reading them. Shui Bing'er feels inappropriate to have a harem.
This book should be called The Protagonist's Story of Picking Up Girls. Lin Chaoying, Lian Xing, Yang Yuhuan, the mother and daughter named Shan, Xiao Longnu, sisters Liu Shengxueji and Liu Sheng Piaoxu, there are too many to count. The subject matter is very good, but I really don't like so many women, seeing each one sleeping with them, I am extremely speechless.
26DAY丨So far, what is Si Wu's famous scene?
Every appearance of Si Wu is a famous scene. What impressed me the most was Si Wu's pink hair, and Si Wu's words at the beginning, "Hello, man." Then there was the scene of friendly "communication" with NPCs in the theater.
26DAY丨I haven't watched much yet
I am still reading the first few chapters. I think there is a ghost there. At the beginning, hehehehe, who is the ghost?
My dear friends, this is the beginning of a new book, the authentic talismans of the series of mortals cultivating immortals.
You deserve the lucky floor! There is no percentage, but there is luck, hahahaha (≧∇≦)ﾉ
Does the author have a single heroine or multiple heroines?
The biggest advantage of this book is that it doesn't have ink stains, and you can kill when you say it, unlike those who catch and run away, and then you can still draw dozens of pictures.
The writing and plot are both good and the characterization is okay.
The early stage is okay, but the middle stage becomes more and more ugly. There are a bunch of inexplicable plots. The novel can have two or three chapters where the perspective is not on the protagonist. The slow spots are only four or five chapters. More than ten chapters of this book have the plot jumping on various passers-by. Should the plot be so watery? I rely on how the protagonist clears the level, rather than watching the extras and watching the extras to commit suicide.
Not bad. Keep up the good work! Keep
After reading a hundred and ten chapters, there are no big mistakes, but there are no highlights. The flat and vertical layout and assembly line cannot attract readers' desire to read further.
The author's writing is very detailed and refers to a lot of history. The wording is also very appropriate and the content is full of ups and downs. I love reading this kind of writing.
I don't know what you are thinking. Is your version of Chinese martial arts wrong? Is it that weak? Haven't you already redeemed that sincere heart? With Zhicheng, your strength should increase by leaps and bounds after you leave the earth. I didn't read the novel carefully to understand the expressiveness of those powers. In Zhetian, there is no one with explosive saint-level combat power. At least 6 surface levels, as well as Ah Qing and Xiao Feng, I feel like you are trying to force things. It is enough for you to get a Dao principle affinity bonus and a physical potential bonus. There is no need to force things just for the sake of the Tao fetus of the innate holy body. Why aren't there other physiques? If you insist on talking about these two, you just forcefully talk about it, which will make people very unhappy. Tao's affinity bonus and physical potential bonus, as long as you don't say it explicitly. No matter how much the increase is, your room for flexibility is not very large at the end, and it is completely locked.
The name "Sorrow is Just Sad" is full of atmosphere. Turning sadness and all kinds of feelings into invisible power, it is as if the book is wrapped up and carried by the sadness and thoughts. The words have a hint of sadness, and the idea is unique and contagious. In an instant, people can feel the thoughts hidden in the words. It can easily affect the reader's mood and make them want to read the story.
What a terrible book, incomprehensible and incomprehensible
For a novel with 300 chapters, accepting more than ten women is too much, so just accept three or five.
1. Every time I say something at the beginning of the chapter, thank you for this, thank you for that, and then if there is anything else I want to say, please beg for this, beg for that to be exploded, blah blah blah, why not put it at the end of each chapter. 2. The protagonist is simply a loser. If you have the strength, you don't have to force yourself to suppress him. He has been ridiculed and is still trying to defeat the strong with the weak. People are going to kill you, but you still let this person go and let that person go. 3. Although his ability can be promoted equally, he insists on taking the plot slowly. He is also ridiculed in various ways in the plot. Again, it's over.
Very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful
Cut it and stop looking at it
Tokyo flow, One Piece system, writing Magima and Genshin Impact is pointless, not to mention the writing is not good