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I'm just asking you if the water clone was copied. Does anyone know if you have learned this technique? Special jounin assessment in front of others? Nc writing method

It's considered a fine piece of fan fiction, and it's pretty unflattering. Alas ^_^ There are too few written about Yuan Zun

I have a burning vat. There is no danger to create danger. Go to school in Notting City and beat his son right under his nose. I thought I had some trump cards, but I got beaten up. Hahaha

You know, you know, rubbish, the big rubbish among rubbish, it's all brushed up by the wind, I'll post it if you delete the comment

I feel like I'm a bit stuck in writing. The enemies in the early stage are already invincible except for saints and quasi-sages. I want to just focus on blocking the road, but I'm afraid that I won't have anything to write about in the later stage. I really think that the whole book except you is a fool... The title of the book should be "Invincible Road" which starts from blocking the road on the journey to the west.

It's pretty cool, but updates are a bit slow. Highly recommended.
It's pretty cool, but updates are a bit slow. Highly recommended.

I'll write this novel and another one called Lone Bamboo, or write another one about time traveling and becoming Tang San's father. There is more fun to write about.

It's very beautiful. I like Jiang Li very much. I hope there will be more updates.

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Can't tell the difference between the main character and the supporting character. Are you going to stay with me or take over for yourself? It's you who speaks every time. The protagonist has no ability to think at all and is just a puppet.

It was very interesting at the beginning, but once I went to the Cang Beast Continent, the author's writing style couldn't quite keep up with the needs of the plot development. There are many repeated words and the description is superficial. There are not many twists and turns between the plots, basically the scenes are constantly changing.

Lu Zhou It's more relaxing to be with the heroine, there is no sense of depression. The love between Shen and his brother is too depressing. There should be more Lu Zhou. Shen is too much.

The writing is broken, but the development is slow in the front. When the underground mastermind infiltrates the human world, the development force is good. After the 500th chapter, there are problems. There are more and more characters. The characters written in the previous chapter become facial makeup and gradually disappear. The opened map is also too big. And now it is not pleasant to read. It is getting more and more watery. The protagonist is almost gone. There are often many chapters that are not revealed.

From the introduction, it looks like rubbish
The 10-year-old Grand Master, the Battle of Dadong Mountain. Emperor Qing said that there are still countless realms, and he must be careful and careful every step of the way to avenge his mother. TMD after breaking through to the Grand Master level, I will stop eating beef. What's the point of cultivating forces and engaging in political intrigues?

The author has reached the level of the Great Emperor. He looks at it every day as if he hasn't seen it. It doesn't seem to have changed at all. It's as if he hasn't seen it at all.

Even if you have trouble, you still have to be prosperous. No wonder no one reads this book.

The mission will give birth
After completing one mission, 10 missions popped up. In the end, I couldn't figure out why the protagonist came out this time. The missions are all missions. It's amazing.

Very good. It's the first time I've seen Xiao Yasan kneeling and licking him so thoroughly. I can only say that the protagonist's martial spirit has a strong hold on him. Well, just enter the underlying code.

It's much worse than the previous book. Although the last book collapsed at the end, it was still good. What is the protagonist doing in this book?

Let Hong Beibei reach the top in the book, wrote Psycho, feel my Rhythm, Chill kill direct art trilogy😘😘😘

I like it very much. I am addicted to watching it. I watched the video from Kuaishou.

Have you noticed that every one of his novels is about eunuchs?

If you don't know how to write about politics, don't write about it. It's purely funny and treats the people at the bottom as idiots. They just have less information. For example, he wrote about Konoha's policies. Konoha died early. The bottom people are just illiterate, not stupid. Take a look at the exploitation methods of those dynasties in Chinese history. Isn't it more hidden than what is written in your book? What's the use? Can two fluttering sentences of "The Will of Fire" compare to thousands of years of Confucian loyalty to the emperor? Look at how the Ming army responded at the end of the Ming Dynasty

Faulty third soul skill
What is the protagonist's third soul skill? The maximum transfer of soul power with the opponent cannot exceed level 40. What is the use of this soul skill? It's purely for the purpose of playing the soul skill chosen on Monday, right? This is really not as good as an amplifying or attacking soul skill.

For all those who love survival novels, you can give up reading after reaching chapter 178. If you don't listen, you will only regret it more and more when you look back.

What the hell is this writing about? There are over a hundred chapters now, half of which are games, especially the game around chapter 80. The pig's feet were injured at the beginning and then became all kinds of awesome. He won the game even though he was injured, and even after a fight, a lot of people were amazed.

Because it was a gift from God, but the result... Are the authors two people? They are completely different from the same brain and writing style. Don't look at it.

While eating a meal, we checked each other's 18th generation ancestors, and then caught the person and made it trending. It's funny.

Is there a way to travel through time and become enemies and devour each other and grow at the same time?

Haha, at least you can write it and dare to publish it. No one can succeed casually. Come on.

I am very much looking forward to the follow-up article "Not Allowed to Be a Eunuch"

It's so damn poisonous. I recognized the previous ones. Isn't it just funny that Dugu Bo surrendered or died after being defeated in an academy? If you are in the Ice and Fire Eyes and there is no one else, I will think it's normal, but it's like being in public.














