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Originally, I wanted to give you one star based on your setting and general plot, but since you seem to be a novice author, I checked the comment area and gave you two stars to encourage you... To be honest, I've seen a lot of wit-dropping stories, but the one where the main character is wise-dropping is still too outrageous! Originally, the setting of the Holy Lord's martial spirit was pretty good. You have to make the Holy Lord, this unlimited thing, alive and still live in the sea of consciousness of the protagonist. It just lives in the sea of consciousness and shares the memory... Let's be serious. Do you think that the Holy Lord, this unlimited thing, has the Sheep Talisman and will take over the protagonist? The protagonist is a human, the Holy Lord is a demon, and the Holy Lord hates humans! Besides, when you joined the Tang Clan, you were afraid that Tang San wouldn't give you a leash, so you could set it on your own, right? Even if Tang San was a normal person and had selfish motives, no one would say anything if you defected to him, but in Tang San's timeline of Dou Er, you will find that he is really far away from people. Even if you treat him as a dog, he will want to eat your food and you still defect to him... Furthermore, the soul thing was invented by Electrolux based on the wisdom spirit ring. Although the Holy Lord can also do magic, it is too outrageous that it does not know the principle of wisdom spirit ring just after time travel! There is also a big problem with the configuration of the protagonist's soul! The Holy Lord has a total of 12 talismans, corresponding to 12 animals. According to the normal setting, one corresponding animal soul should have one talisman, but there are only a few in the introduction... Furthermore, the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger is a terrestrial soul beast! You said it's 800,000 years old, but it's even more disgusting if it's upgraded by swallowing sea soul beasts... What's the concept of a land soul beast that needs to be upgraded to 800,000 years by swallowing sea soul beasts? It has to go deep into the depths of the sea to devour a large number of soul beasts that are over ten thousand years old. It still has to digest and so on. You might as well call it the Dark Demon Evil God Killer Whale... According to your logic, a land soul beast would have drowned long ago. How can it withstand the catastrophe in 800,000 years?
It's just too slow to get going. Halfway through the plot, the heroine is still 9 years old.
Hurry up and update, it's too little, not enough to read, thank you
How should I put it? The exercises were not done well and did not meet the readers' expectations.
In fact, I think Wang Dong's title of Mucheng can be changed from Big Brother to Brother Mu.
An unmotivated waste who pins all his hopes on others. It's been like this before, but you can imagine what happens next.
Woohoo, that's so pretentious. Are you okay? How are you?
Very nice, a work worth recommending
It's okay to read at the beginning, but it's getting more and more disgusting at the end. If a country's military doesn't dare to touch the family's power, then it's not a country. At the beginning, it said that it values this talent, but then there's no more. When you look at the end, it's like watching a joke.
Apart from the beginning, the rest is really pretty.
In the first 115 chapters, I reached level 7 as a warlock, but after more than 100 battles without any experience, I was still at level 7... A purebred field, those who watch sword and magic battles can withdraw.
The author sends a member.
Suddenly I found that my membership hadn't been delivered yet, so I quickly delivered it.
I can't stand it from the beginning, and it still follows the original character's character. Otherwise, don't write about Soul Travel, just write about a period character.
Thanks for your hard work
The author has worked hard, there is not a single comment in a million words, so let me take a closer look
Datang does not use silver, and there seems to be no limit on how many can be drawn, can you draw unlimited? There is absolutely no training for Pokémon in other novels. You can draw them again if you don't like them. The protagonist doesn't seem to have much strength.
recommend, support
I thought that all the recommendation votes were gone, so I squeezed in and scraped together, and I was able to get 20 tickets. I felt really awesome. I read two new books today, and I don't favor one over the other. Because I listen to books, I took a little longer. PS: I have always been worried about insufficient memory. Whenever I post comments, I like to make animated pictures. Today is another productive day. 3 Pictures are used in this book😘
It looks good. I've already watched it. Do you want to watch Suhuan?
It's very beautiful. Come take a look and listen.
The Chaos Controller in the Wild Era is equivalent to the Hunyuan of the World Realm~Hunyuan Neighbor Lord.
There are still restrictions
If there is no restriction on one's destiny and ordinary people can directly teach it, then only then can one reach the sky in one step
Very awesome, extremely awesome, extremely awesome.
The author asked, will this book be finished? Also, isn't this Chinese-Malaysian? All women? The requirements are not high, as long as you can watch.
Has it been deleted?
Why is it different from the short dramas I saw? What about the xx segment?
Five stars, must be five stars!
It's a very good novel. I had a great time reading the Mystery dungeon. The few dungeons that have appeared so far are all good, but my favorite is the Mysterious dungeon. The protagonist steps on his left foot and right foot and ascends directly to the sky. In ten minutes, Sequence 3 rises to Sequence 0. He directly tears up Adam's script without looking at the face of the night. So many mystery novels are very interesting. It's rare that the Gou San family doesn't look at the face of the dark night. It's almost like a dog. The three families used to have tolls collected by the dark night. The protagonist of this book spirals directly into the sky without looking at the face of the person. Other copies are also quite good, such as Curse, Hokage, Chenglong, etc. However, there are many cool articles of the same type, so it doesn't feel as mysterious and cool. I haven't watched Yangshen, so I didn't watch that part because I didn't understand it. I suddenly realized that it would be so cool to take the same-travel route in Secret. I don't need to have high-end knowledge. I can rely on other worlds to increase my soul strength and directly upgrade to the old days.
There are too few, and they still have to be raised.
I have read Chapter 36 so far, and I don't feel any problems. It's just that there are too few, and they still have to be raised.
So far it seems to be well written.
Innocently, Wuhun Temple and Shrek are naturally hostile. This is a matter of stance. The butt determines the head. It is more serious than the conflict with the Holy Spirit Cult. Normally, Shrek's priority enemy is Wuhun Temple. The evil soul master is only temporary. Shrek and Wuhun Temple can only exist on one side.
Your strength will also transfer with your marriage, right? You can get twelve wings with the protagonist. If you get divorced, will the protagonist have to give half of his soul power and a martial soul to Qian Renxue?
It is indeed a silver arowana with astonishing wisdom, and the things it does are more and more astounding every time.
I was persuaded to quit the first three chapters, the plot is not as attractive as the introduction
Author, I have a few questions to ask you: have you thought about how to add the plot of the Zhetian trilogy to Tianmu? Author, have you decided how to write it? In addition, remember to add the extra chapter of Shengxu to the sky. You can't let Ye Fan in this time and space, this new time and space, you haven't written much about the development of Ye Fan yet. After all, you can't always let Ye Fan see the development of his original time and space. You should always let him experience the development of a new life. Author. Just write about Ye Fan's development in this new time and space. How will he develop when he knows his future? Author, it's time for you to write better. The author will reply, I will reply quickly.
There are a bunch of poison points at the beginning, and golden fingers teleport randomly, but the protagonist can survive, and then the price of goods collapses. During the Qi refining period, tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of spiritual stones are available, and a talisman in the Qi refining period costs a hundred spiritual stones.
Although I haven't watched it yet, I will watch it tomorrow when I have time. It should be good. I don't think it's necessary for the heroine to be invincible by herself. After all, there aren't many women who can be snatched up at this time, and there aren't many who are too talented to be worthy.
Is the heroine confirmed? If not, the default is none.
It's been a while since I've updated. I don't know how to be a eunuch anymore.
There are things to watch like ordinary people, it's very good, and I'm following up on it.
Very good, good and attentive❤️... Rich and colorful content
27DAY丨I don't feel like it
I don't think so. Doesn't it mean that the game can only continue forever, except when you die one day, and maybe death will start the beginning of new life?
27DAY丨Can Si Wu return to the real world?
I guess it's not possible. Because from this part of the game, it seems that there is no passage back to reality, only a bound safe house.
The settings have been changed to the point where I don't recognize it anymore, it's just like pornographic books.
27DAY丨Can Siwu return to the real world
For Si Wu, it is definitely possible, but Si Wu just doesn't think about it, after all, he is so powerful! ! If you have no brain, I believe that our company has no baby. Come on!
New book, please read it
New book, please read it, dear readers.
Okay, I like to see these the most, hahahaha
It's so unbelievable. Is it a martial arts spirit or a woman, and will I play with myself later?
Still updating! Σ( ° △ °|||)
Judging from 23, this has been updated for at least two or three years, right? (¶ ˙ᗜ˙ )¶.
The content of the work is very well written. It is not like the previous ones, with big hooks, such as direct Grinder, etc. It is very comfortable to read.
27DAY丨Can we return to reality
I think Ah Wu can definitely go back. The only question is whether he wants to go back or not. Ah Wu can do anything! ! Awesome