Douluo: Contracted with Gu Yuena, Killed the Tang Shenwang at the Beginning
by Unparalleled
About This Novel
Bai Xuan, a monk in the world of immortality, was chased by his enemies and fled to the Douluo Universe. His remnant soul merged into Gu Yuena's body and fell into a long coma after escaping. He did not wake up until Douluo's peerless period. After waking up, she regrouped her body and used Gu Yuena's power, but it was sensed by Tang San in the God Realm. Tang San personally went down to the realm to seize the Silver Dragon King's blood. Under his control, Gu Yuena's body was able to kill Tang San even though her strength could only reach 20-30% of its peak. If the God of Life hadn't arrived in time, Tang San would have completely fallen. Without the body of the God King, Tang San could only be resurrected and rebuilt. Ma Hongjun, Dai Mubai and other Shrek members, as well as Tang Hao Ayin, all died, and the divine throne was vacant. The nine major divine thrones were in urgent need of successors, and a battle for the divine throne began. The emperor and the sky fight for the throne of Shura, Xiong Jun wants to be the god of war, the ice emperor wants to seize the sea god, the snow emperor gets the inheritance of the ice god, Brigitte is the goddess of nine colors, the red king is the god of phoenix, the demon spirit is the god of speed... Mun En, Du Bushai, Kong Deming, Ye Xishui and others are also determined to win the divine position, and tens of thousands of soul masters in the world gather at the top of Tianshan Mountain to compete. ... God of Destruction: "Tang San, since you have lost your status as a god, don't even think about becoming a god again!" Tang San: "Huo Yuhao, without opportunities like Tianmeng Iceworm and Electrolux, how could you be such a loser? I really regret accepting you as my disciple. You still want to be my son-in-law. You're just dreaming!" Moon: "Ancestor, I also want to compete for the position of Shura God. You and I will see the truth." Gu Yuena: "Tang San, do you still remember the fear of being killed by me ten years ago?"
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Official(3)Scraped 27d ago
The protagonist is too smart
I came here through KS. When I was fighting Tang San in the first few chapters, the protagonist's IQ was still good. After the fight was over and I signed the contract with Gu Yuena, the protagonist's IQ was inexplicably like that of an inexperienced idiot🤐. It was developing in the direction of lowering my intelligence. The drop was inexplicable. It didn't look like he had come from the world of immortal cultivation. He came out of the world😐, and after beating Tang San before, he started to suppress his combat power😐, and the pressure was even more inexplicable🤐. Tang San's Xuantian Kung Fu can be practiced before awakening the martial spirit, but when it comes to the protagonist's own Immortal Cultivation Technique, he can't practice it😐, and it even says that practicing this technique will be slower🤐. Why doesn't Tang San's book have these restrictions🤐? It's so overwhelming🤐Does the author think that the martial arts world's martial arts skills are stronger than those in the world of cultivating immortals? Or is it that the protagonist, a cultivator who has lived for who knows how long, has no previous cultivation experience? I personally like the theme of cultivating immortals and douluo, but you can't treat people as fools🤐. The protagonist's IQ and character are written as if they can slide up and down. They are not high at the beginning, but then they go down all the way😕. But when you first write the introduction of the protagonist, it is not that NB, and you don't know how much it is if you are not alive. I have been cultivating immortals for a long time, I am not so speechless🤐, the front is NB and the back is almost the same as SB🤐. There is no problem with the plot and character design of the original work. After all, this is what the fans read. You can also write the protagonist as you want, but you can at least follow some logic, right? The front is so NB and the back is almost SB😐
Di Tian, who has the claws of the Dragon God, cannot defeat the Ming Dynasty Er Ming who has no divine power. You can write it.
The first few chapters are well written, but the following chapters are all nonsense
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Official(3)Scraped 27d ago
The protagonist is too smart
I came here through KS. When I was fighting Tang San in the first few chapters, the protagonist's IQ was still good. After the fight was over and I signed the contract with Gu Yuena, the protagonist's IQ was inexplicably like that of an inexperienced idiot🤐. It was developing in the direction of lowering my intelligence. The drop was inexplicable. It didn't look like he had come from the world of immortal cultivation. He came out of the world😐, and after beating Tang San before, he started to suppress his combat power😐, and the pressure was even more inexplicable🤐. Tang San's Xuantian Kung Fu can be practiced before awakening the martial spirit, but when it comes to the protagonist's own Immortal Cultivation Technique, he can't practice it😐, and it even says that practicing this technique will be slower🤐. Why doesn't Tang San's book have these restrictions🤐? It's so overwhelming🤐Does the author think that the martial arts world's martial arts skills are stronger than those in the world of cultivating immortals? Or is it that the protagonist, a cultivator who has lived for who knows how long, has no previous cultivation experience? I personally like the theme of cultivating immortals and douluo, but you can't treat people as fools🤐. The protagonist's IQ and character are written as if they can slide up and down. They are not high at the beginning, but then they go down all the way😕. But when you first write the introduction of the protagonist, it is not that NB, and you don't know how much it is if you are not alive. I have been cultivating immortals for a long time, I am not so speechless🤐, the front is NB and the back is almost the same as SB🤐. There is no problem with the plot and character design of the original work. After all, this is what the fans read. You can also write the protagonist as you want, but you can at least follow some logic, right? The front is so NB and the back is almost SB😐
Di Tian, who has the claws of the Dragon God, cannot defeat the Ming Dynasty Er Ming who has no divine power. You can write it.
The first few chapters are well written, but the following chapters are all nonsense
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