Chunyang Avenue

The previous chapter obviously had some results, but the next chapter becomes rubbish. The protagonist is awesome at one moment, rubbish at another, or just a passerby.

How should I put it? The writing style of the book is okay and the presentation is quite clear, but the plot changes too quickly, and sometimes it is difficult to talk between chapters, making it awkward to read. Also, the protagonist upgrades too quickly, and it's all about adventures. Let's just say that in the first part I watched, he broke the level first, and then there were a lot of good things. This is okay, but can you not write it so that as soon as you break through, you think of the next stage, and then after two chapters, you are killed again because of killing? It's too fast for an individual or something to be upgraded. How can other people live? The protagonist consolidates it within a few days after the breakthrough, and then continues to break through, and it is the most perfect breakthrough, and then repeats the process. This writing is a bit fake. Don't you have to worry about the foundation being unstable? Don't you need to practice controlling the sudden increase in strength?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! It's so painful to watch!

The protagonist just got rid of the ghost when he was angry, started fighting without any experience, and knew how to arrange it. I think the author is just a ghost and can only praise.

It's inconsistent. The writing style in the front is beautiful and it's a classic fairy tale. Unfortunately, the back part is pure Long Aotian style fantasy. To be honest, I'm very disappointed. Of course, most people like this genre now, but the author shouldn't wear the cloak of a classical fairy tale. It's not good for both parties.

Battle of the Road is much better than this one, but I don't like the character of the protagonist.

There's really nothing to say about the literary talent. It's awesome to say the least, but the plot is incoherent and seems a bit confusing.

Update soon

Come on, it's very well written. It's full of fairy charm, and the layout of killing and fighting, as well as the battle of wits are all good. The road goes its own way and the light shines

It's rubbish. I couldn't stand it after reading the previous paragraph. I was rambling a lot and wrote my heartfelt words. I was only 12 years old and ended up taking in a girl when I went down the mountain. The main reason is that this girl is a genius in cultivation and I couldn't stand it. I guess in the back, this girl was taken to practice by some powerful people, or she was taken by a dandy, and then the male protagonist took revenge, isn't it so disgusting?