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It's very well written. Keep going and don't stop.
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So far, it's okay. I rarely see ancient zombies. I've only watched the ancient zombie movie "Kingdom" before. I'm looking forward to the future~
Although Douluo has no character requirements, I feel that a protagonist with a good character is definitely better than none.
I think Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong should forget it, even if they have no status, I feel a little disgusted.
I personally think there shouldn't be too many female protagonists, and you shouldn't fall in love with the protagonist for no apparent reason. It's normal for people to always give to each other and then fall in love with each other. Also, don't have too many female protagonists and just accept some women out of desire. That's very boring and tasteless, and it's easy to fall into clichés.
The author is great, won't the Douluo book be updated?
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In the future, if the author doesn't know how to write about the protagonist's life story, then he shouldn't write about it. It feels inexplicable.
Kaiyuan and the founding of the People's Republic of China? It's so funny. The transformation from Qin to the first great unification was not the founding of the Yuan Dynasty, and the subsequent dynasties were nothing at all. The temple title Taizu is even more funny. The first emperor himself abolished the temple title system because he said he did not like sons to discuss their fathers and ministers to discuss their emperor. The emperor system created by others calls himself the First Emperor. I even saw the "extremely human minister" and I didn't know how to complain about it.
The difference between traditional immortality novels and current immortality novels is that there are no intentional conflicts mixed with fantasy, nor are there conflicts between small characters that penetrate immortality, so they are suitable for reading slowly.
Are you a knotweed or a sunuo?
Don't end it and turn it into a running article. It's not easy to finish it.
No, is this a eunuch?
I feel that the writing at the end is not good. The author didn't want to write anymore. I feel like I just read the beginning and then lost it in a hurry.
This book has been promoted! Please put it in!
This book has been promoted. The subject matter is very good and it is extremely popular. Come and publish it!
author
What I mean is that you should choose beauties and collect them all. Many novels about Dou Po Cang Qiong are about the beauties. Do you understand?
Force the plot
I'm speechless. You are already a strategic figure. How could Danzo openly confront you? He is just bad but not stupid! And the plot is also very unreasonable!
If you like to read cool articles, you can read it. It's also relatively mindless.
It's a bit interesting, but also a bit poisonous.
Let's just talk about Han Li. Would Han Li really believe what you said from the bottom of his heart and then stay in Luoyun Sect? I can only say it's ridiculous Staying is equivalent to leaving your life to your decision. How can this be possible for someone like Han Li? He's definitely going to run away, so I can at most leave you a letter to deal with it. There is also Yan Ruyan, Wang Chan What about Ghost Lao Tong Lao who is in the later stage of Wang Chan's Protector Pill Formation? Yan Ruyan is banned, can she resist or take action against Wang Chan? How is it possible, so what you wrote about the vape juice smoke stabbed Wang Chan in the back. This kind of thing is simply impossible to happen. Killing Wang Chan has been banned. Isn't Yan Ruyan just killing himself? At this time, only two people working together can have a chance. Escape, or persist until the soul-shattering master of the middle Yuanying stage of the Ghost Spirit Sect who is in charge of the Yue Kingdom notices, not to mention from the original work. Yan Ruyan went to Han Li to plead for mercy and spared Wang Chan's life, which showed that although the two were under some coercion, they still had feelings for each other.
Support, I hope the author will update as soon as possible, continue to update, and wait for updates, I am a member to watch, come on, author! Recommended!
In a friendly match with Tiandou Academy, the protagonist ended up at level 99. Although he was supposed to be a peer, it still made me laugh.
I've finished watching it. It's not bad after the labor pain period.
The plot after the battle with Tang Chen is much less toxic than the beginning. Unless you say that the author plans to delete the account and start training again, then I didn't say that.
I read it on Kuaishou tweets. Bibi Dong and others didn't even know about the eight spider spears that grew when they absorbed the second soul ring. Didn't Bibi Dong have a six-winged purple light wing?
If the reward setting is not good, just set it all privately. Don't give high-level rewards, but the effect is small and cannot be smaller.
Why should a primary school student travel through time? Could it be a normal high school student or above? The protagonist is written like a ruozhi and the writing style seems to be writing a running account. The villains are collectively trying to outwit each other, but they are still not enlightened. The protagonist seems to be lacking love. The protagonist's family is like being born. It does not fit the relevant character design. Bibi Dong forcibly derails the intellect and does nonsensical things. The preface and follow-up are inconsistent, and the main plot is broken. It is a pure romance novel.
The delivery boss has a look!
This book has been promoted, has good retention, is popular, and has been put into pods!
Good
The combat power is chaotic, the protagonist's sense of presence is very low, and the small world is really confusing and long-winded, but overall it's pretty good-looking.
The number of words updated daily increases
Next, I plan to have 5,000 words per chapter. Starting from Chapter 17, I will update two chapters every day.
I'll give you a five-star support first. After reading part of it, the writing is still there, but your combat power is too exaggerated. It's a bit exaggerated to have 4 levels to fight three 8-level evil soul masters, even if you have restraint and an artifact. And you don't use martial arts to use power. Why can't those evil soul masters recognize angel martial souls? How could you think of going to the evil soul master's lair in the Sun and Moon Empire before they grow up? Your combat power in the later stage is too broken when you write it like this.
The protagonist is a scumbag, and even if he is reborn, he is still a scumbag and a hypocrite.
I want to know who the hero is! It must be Yunzi!
The author's thoughtful work
From the beginning of the protagonist's rebirth, the protagonist is like a super invincible protagonist. It is very smooth. There is no villain, no twists and turns and conflicts. It feels like people all over the world are supporting the protagonist and want him to succeed. Even Liu Tianxian's mother Liu Xiaoli licked her face and wanted the protagonist to be her son-in-law, so it felt boring after not watching much.
Can the author update more? If not, don't stop updating.
Changing the map is the same as the history. Who taught you to write like this?
I've seen it, I've seen it, it's okay, I can watch it
It feels like it's a female video, the main character is a bit of a virgin
Very special, I also plan to wear Crocs and Ear Pictures
Let's talk about the character of Hokage. Let's arrange a few clones on Poseidon Island or something like that.
There is nothing to say about shaping the male protagonist into a licking dog.
Come on😊
Nice! Just a little less! It would be more perfect if there were more!
Everyone in Douluo has a martial soul, and you have nothing but a martial soul.
The real crushing is that a single pressure can make people unable to get up. With just one move of his hand, he can embed a person into the mountain without even being able to dig him out. Look at what you wrote. If you really can't, find a factory to work in.
Ten chapters updated daily! ! ! So pretty! I should save up more and watch it.
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The subject matter is novel and the content is well written, but the number of words updated every day is too few.
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It's not bad, but it's just not good enough. It's not good enough. It's not updated yet.