Devils Don't Know How to Fall in Love

This way of writing worked before and now I am still resting on my laurels. The protagonist is a pure licker, why not just kill the nun? Just because he looks good? So abstract

The first point is that the attack method is very simple, except for firing light bombs, which is light cannon, and then there seems to be no more, except for using artifacts (did you say there are combat skills? I didn't see it, you said no, there really are none) 🙃 For example, to put it simply, condense the magic power into a disc and then add a little wind element into it. Isn't this Qi Yuan Slash? Is it that difficult? It's really not possible. You can still call it, 8-point light wheel. As for the defense, you can only defend one side. This is a woolen defense. Put a shield on it, and then add some gold elements and earth elements into it. The defense power is pretty good, and there is no blind spot shield. This is not difficult, right? Point 2: I won't criticize you before it's put on the shelves, but you'll give it back after it's put on the shelves. Isn't this a pure waste of coins? For example, whatever you want to introduce, you can put it in the author's post Also, what makes me delete the book is that beating a stupid person, having a whiny conversation, and then fighting back after being attacked, everyone thinks this is very poisonous, and releasing the power step by step to put on pretense, and your own family members are still in danger, just put it there, to fight fake matches, you can't just take out the magic weapon and go up to kill, a person who can be killed at will, you can win 3 or 4 pictures There seems to be some more, but I forgot My personal summary is not only not fun, but also not abstract. I could still read it five or six years ago. I heard that the author is also an old author, and I don't know how to change it. Let's put it this way, without the use of artifacts, with the same personality and the same level, Miyamoto Musashi can beat him ten seconds. Not only is he not very good at melee combat, but his magic power is also average. Of course, I'm not the author, this is just my idea Anyway, the author can't see it, and I don't know if this comment will be there? Actually, I don't care

Why did I suddenly transfer from Devil High School to the wrong place? And I don't see any connection other than the name. I'm a little confused. If the data is not good, I can't write anymore if I take Orpheus and directly reach the peak of combat power? Is it too sudden?

Did you convert this map? ? ? What the hell, I changed it without saying anything, where is the girl that dxd accepted? Where is the Dragon God? You changed it without saying anything. I really can't understand it, Luo Qing, you... Alas

There's a little water in front, but it's still acceptable. I really can't stand the map conversion at all. Where's the girl you accepted? Where is the Dragon God? Why did he behave the same after the second time travel as he did the first time, with no confidence at all and no characteristics at all? What about learning knowledge? What about the martial arts you practice?

It's intellectual, not exciting, not three-dimensional, and very disturbing to watch.

I really vomited when I saw the nun let go in Chapter 39. Forget about all the water settings in the past, it is really hopeless to be a turtle man these days.

The first is that the writing is too poor. One small thing can lead to 4 or 5 chapters and a lot of narration. Is the word count deliberately low? The second is that they are too soft-hearted and hesitant to do things, and the enemies always run away, which is a common problem among some authors. They always have to add some plot behind these weak enemies and make up a stinky and long follow-up.

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Is this map change so sudden? And it's like changing the book, except for the name, everything else has been changed? ? ?