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The writing is very good, the structure is clear and logical. It's not that the heroine is silly and sweet and has no love brain. It's double A. It makes people calm down and read the novel several times. It can stand the test of time.
The author writes very well, especially the illustrations, praise
It's a poisonous point from the beginning. The family background is closely related to Diduo. Moreover, Diduo also goes into mining. The lower-class family also has a beautiful sister, which makes gangs notice. Typical cases of abuse are over 18. It is even more outrageous that a martial arts gym does not accept disciples. If you have money, you can't make money.
Good guy, as for the follow-up, I think you can also write it like this
Garbage abuse story. The heroine is really ugly. I came here just to see how you cheat and get rebates. You and I made a profit with 800,000 views. The website will also give you a reward of 500,000 yuan. I can go to the next door. No function to block authors
If there are two generations, shouldn't Zhang Dong and Zhang Xianguang know each other?
Very rubbish. They're all going bankrupt right away. Then film the plug-in. Then the movie made a profit. Ten times twenty million is gone. There are so many ancient ways of writing. I didn't feel any pleasure after reading Chapter 4. Quite disgusting
I thought it was good at the beginning, but it became too toxic later on. What is the meaning of the existence of a character like Fang Ting? Why is it written so idiotically? I really don't know what to think, I want to persuade you to quit! It's really uncomfortable!
I thought it was good at the beginning, but it became too toxic later on. What is the meaning of the existence of a character like Fang Ting? Why is it written so idiotically? I really don't know what to think, I want to persuade you to quit! It's really uncomfortable!
There are too few updates. Can you update it more?
So well written
Great, come on, come on, come on. Follow up
After all, the author is not strong enough in writing. He is probably being interviewed. If he continues to write the book, it will be blocked.
If Golden Crocodile Douluo dies, the sign-in flow will probably go completely crazy and the Holy Spirit Sect will probably not even be able to leave him alive.
The author's writing style is good and quite beautiful.
QQ's first book, it should be something to look forward to in the future.
This is a good introduction, please criticize it.
Update soon... When will there be 10 chapters a day?
Come on, author. This is my favorite Douluo fanfic that I have read so far. Come on, author.
The system settings are a bit too self-explanatory, but other things are fine.
You can read it. When I was short of books, I read it anyway.
Who knows? A critical hit at the beginning! The heroine Yu Wantang finally managed to survive until she retired from the Time and Space Administration, and she was looking forward to lying down and retiring. However, as soon as she opened her eyes, she was transported back to the world she had conquered, and she also bumped into the male protagonist who had awakened from blackening. What's even more amazing is that she doesn't even remember who the male protagonist is, but the male protagonist already hates her so much that he kills her every time, sends him away twenty-one times, and kills more than thirty attackers in a row just to wait for her to come back. The contrast is overwhelming! Just the setting of "the amnesiac female protagonist vs. The crazy male protagonist who has been criticized for being evil, the male protagonist shouts that he wants to kill her every day, and the female protagonist has a calm look on her face like "Who are you?"" Has already made me scratch my head! On one side is the paranoia of the male protagonist who hates her to the core, and on the other is the heroine's calm but calm attitude after losing her memory. The tension at the beginning alone makes people eager to follow it. You can fully predict how exciting the sadistic, sweet, love-killing plot will be! I am already looking forward to the subsequent double-standard slap in the face of the male protagonist and the foreshadowing of the two-way rush. I feel that this wave will definitely not be a loss, and the investment will not be a loss!
He died of poison in the first chapter and had no brains.
Come and get a 3-day membership, come on, come on ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ
Come and get a 3-day membership, come on, come on
Please read it! !
During the testing period, I beg you readers to keep reading. Reading is related to whether you can be promoted and get more updates in the future. Thank you! !
Monthly passes, flowers, lots of them
More explosive, more explosive, more explosive, more explosive
Is it possible that the author also recognized it?
We still don't know the author's psychology when he wrote this book.
Quite interesting
The rating is based on Pirates fan fiction, and as far as Pirates fan fiction is concerned, it's quite interesting. Level up step by step and fight the boss, there is no stupid plot, of course it is based on the style of the pirate world. Speaking of something unrelated to the novel, the character in One Piece that I personally hate more is Oden. Blackbeard, Draco, etc. Are just plain bad. This 💩 went crazy in the country of Wano in the early stage, and did nothing for human affairs. Then he went to sea, gained a lot of strength, and became 💩. He was afraid of hands and feet, and was afraid of fighting lizards. Did he have to find a way to save the country? Oda also wants to carve on 💩 to make Wano Country, the Fur Tribe, and Yamato, the group of people who fight for him, all become a joke. 💩 Cannot become a hero, and the entire Wano Country arc has become a joke. I have never hated a character so much while watching One Piece. Because of this, I have not watched Wano Country and subsequent plots.
The book written by the author is good, but has it been maliciously reviewed?
Don't finish it, keep writing, you can make a little bit, it's quite fun after chasing it for so long.
After watching it for a while, to be honest, there are a lot of highlights. It is so easy to break through 97 and 98. Let's not talk about it. The Bright Phoenix is not as good as the Ultimate Fire. If you don't know how to write, you will evolve into the original Fatty's 10 Fire Phoenix. And Fatty feels that it is really a bit of a forced intelligence. Both your parents know that their son has become a disciple of Titled Douluo. Are you afraid that Ma Hongjun will give him money? Secondly, since Ma Hongjun already knows Shui Bing'er's identity and knew that you had a titled Douluo Master last time, how dare he still tease her? It's really a forced indoctrination. Ning Rongrong said a few words to ruin someone's appearance. How about some brains? No matter how you say it, she is still the princess of the Qibao Glazed Sect. Not to mention that people who have a master to support the original Wuhun Palace would not dare to do this. I can't stand it anymore after seeing this. Many places are just forcibly subduing the intellect without brains. It's not easy to give you a five-star writing.
It's okay to watch it without using your brain, but it feels like you've eaten a bunch of food while watching it with your brain in mind.
Guys, I've tested the waters, please collect it and read it! Please read it! Please read it! Say important things three times! ! In addition, I also ask the investment boss to take a look! ! !
The temple is deep and the rivers and lakes are far away
You need some patience to read it. The author probably wanted to write an old-school martial arts novel.
The level is unclear, the alliance is disgusting, even a champion can beat the mythical beast, just stop catching Freeze Bird, but when you get angry, you will beat Nebula, Mewtwo is a decoration, you wrote it out of interest, then damn we readers want to read a relatively good book, the logic is not smooth, the level is completely subverted, and the anger rises when reading it, why did you write it?
It's beautiful (♥∀♥) It's so beautiful. The author quickly updated me≡ω≡
This conversation with the first suicide note makes people have no desire to read it. It is too wordy, too annoying, and too nutritious. It's just nonsense. What's the point of telling the plot of the original drama again? It makes no sense, it makes no sense, why are you writing this? It's just pure and unfavorable, which makes people lose motivation to watch it.
The plot of "The Tasteless Food" is that all kinds of supporting actors come up to question and then slap in the face...
It's so beautiful)...watch the People's Daily at my mom's house
Kamen Rider and Armor Warrior shouldn't be like this
There's nothing wrong with replacing someone like the protagonist with other Douluo fans, but if he becomes a Kamen Rider or an Armored Warrior, I'm opposed to it.
It would be better if Tiexue Canming is faster, the first update in January is too slow
It's beautiful, the author's writing is strong, and I look forward to the next book being more exciting.
I said that the dy animation is so good, why is the novel data so bad? It turns out that the plot is not there yet.
It is also a god to write the character Yin Shengnan.
There are more than 400 chapters, and the plot has not been completed for two months🤗
Do you know why no one rated it?
Continuing to the second part
After writing the first part, I will write the second part after this, but don't travel through parallel worlds, and the second part is about Wuhundian Academy or something like that.
La la la la la, it's both mindless and mocking😐😐
It's a pity to throw away tasteless food
It's a pity to throw it away if it tastes tasteless. This was the thought in my mind when I was halfway through reading it. But unfortunately, I felt uncomfortable after reading it for a while. I can only say that the writing is average.
water!
The writing is really bad, and it completely underestimates what it means to be in love with the mainland. The Shrek Seven Monsters are back again. Tang San Xiaowu has been in love for many years. Can it be broken down easily? It is clear that Tang San has a perverted private desire for Xiao Wu. The protagonist interacts with Xiao Wu crazily, but Tang San has no murderous intentions at all. Haha, is this consistent with Tang San's character? To be honest, the protagonist's character design is not as good as Tang San. If you hate Tang San, you must at least be better than Tang San. Otherwise, what qualifications do you have to hate Tang San? A trash like Tang San still helps you and wants to find you a god, but what about you? The writing is really bad, and it is obvious that the author cares about obscenity.
Please update it soon. Please update it soon.
What are the heroines? What are the heroines?
I finally saw your work again, keep it up! Take good care of you! ! ! 😫😫😫😫