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I think it's very good, but it's a little short and weak. I hope this book doesn't have eunuchs.

I don't know what the advantages are, but what about you, a time traveler at the beginning? And then inexplicably feel a sense of belonging to a foreign race and still hate humans? You are either a prostitute or a prostitute and the system gives you a person like this? Laughing to death, just a traitor

This subject matter is wrong. If you arrange this system, you are destined to fail in the blind date. I feel that there is no suspense in reading this. If you succeed, it will be difficult to continue to arrange blind dates. If you do not have a blind date, it will be difficult to improve. It is completely self-inflicted.

Can we add the content of road construction and infrastructure construction? Building roads with friendly tribes, etc. Rabbit's soul of infrastructure

Written for you who look up at the stars

Written before the story begins Hi there. Thank you for being willing to tell this story. Before I start talking about anything else, I want to say thank you first. When I wrote "The Promise Under the Starlight", I didn't really think about it that much. One night when I had insomnia, a picture suddenly appeared in my mind - on the rooftop of the hospital, a little girl looked up and counted the stars. Next to her stood an adult who looked very cold but had tenderness in his eyes. Then the story comes. About why you wrote this story To be honest, I want to write a story about "waiting". What have each of us been waiting for? Waiting for an exam result, waiting for a reply from someone you like, waiting for good news that I don't know if it will come. Lin Nian is waiting for the star, and Huiyuan is waiting for the antidote to APTX4869, for freedom after the organization's destruction, and for a future where he can live with peace of mind. But fate will not give you a good result just because you wait long enough. When I first conceived the character of Lin Nian, the setting was actually another version - she survived, the operation was successful, she grew up to become a doctor, and accidentally met Hui Yuan again in the hospital as an adult. But after writing two chapters, I realized it was wrong. It was too fake. How can there be so many happy endings in reality? So I changed it to the current version. Lin Nian couldn't wait for that star. This is not because I am cruel, but because fate is cruel. I just wrote it honestly. About Lin Nian and Hui Yuan When I was writing about Lin Nian, I kept thinking about a question: Can a six-year-old child understand the matter of "death"? Then I figured out she didn't need to understand. All she knew was that she might not be able to see the sun tomorrow, so she had to watch the stars tonight. The most distressing moment was in Chapter 7, when Lin Nian asked Huiyuan: "Sister, will you forget me?" At that moment I stopped writing for a long time. As an 18-year-old "adult" with the memory of a doctor, Haiyuan's answer is too important. If Haiyuan said "no", he would be lying to a child; but if he said "yes", it would be too cruel. Finally, I made Haiyuan silent for a long time, and then said: "You first read the stars tonight, and we will discuss this issue later." This is probably the most confusing paragraph for me to write. As for Haiyuan, she is the most contradictory character in my writing. She knew that she was also in the abyss, but she couldn't help but want to hold on to another person who was about to fall. Every time I wrote about her secretly looking up information about tetralogy of Fallot, about her calculating the time for the next check-up, about her crying alone after Lin Nian fell asleep - I felt like my heart was being grabbed by something. Two people who were sentenced to "probation" by fate warmed each other, and then waited together for the sentence that they didn't know would come. About BE ending I know that many readers have already started to prepare tissues when they see "BE Aesthetics". But I want to say that "The Promise Under the Starlight" is not the kind of novel that uses swords for the sake of swords. The knife is not the goal, emotional resonance is. What I really want to write is a story about "companionship". Even though we know that the ending is separation, every look up, every conversation, and every night spent together in the process are all real. Lin Nian once said: "The stars don't lie. As long as you wait, it will definitely come." But the ending will tell you: stars don't lie, but fate does. This is the cruelty of BE - not all efforts are in vain, but there are some things that cannot be changed by hard work from the beginning. About Starry Sky In fact, the image of "starry sky" was originally just because the story took place on the rooftop of the hospital, and you could see it when you looked up. Later, as I wrote it, it became the core metaphor of the entire story. What are stars? It's hope, it's promise, it's those beautiful things that we think will come if we just wait. But stars are also fragile - six-year-old Lin Nian is a star, and 18-year-old Hui Yuan is also a star. Stars will fall. This is the law of the universe, not who has done something wrong. I try to make the appearance of "starry sky" meaningful in every chapter. It is not a simple description of the environment, but it carries the character's mood at the moment. The starry sky when they first met on the rooftop was the meeting of two lonely souls. The starry sky on the promised night is a promise to protect each other. The last starry sky... You will know it when you see it. Note to future readers Hmm... If you have decided to continue reading, I want to tell you a few things first: Please prepare tissues in advance, no joke. All the "sweetness" before the ending are knives. Haibara's monologue in the last chapter, I cried for an hour after writing it. But I don't regret writing it, because it was her truest voice. After watching it, you may not dare to look up at the stars for a long time. But it doesn't matter. When you are ready, look up again. Lin Nian in the story said: "As long as the stars are still in the sky, nothing is truly over." I think this sentence is right. Okay, let's stop talking here. If you like this story, please let me know in the comment section. If you want to scold me, I will humbly accept it (probably). See you in the next chapter. May the stars you wait for never fall. --The fire is silent

Can you change it later? The mission given to Tang San is purely harmful to others and himself. I feel that the protagonist is no different from CS, and the mistress in you is not harmful to others. The main reason is that your writing is quite conscientious, at least he will feel guilty.

All typos

Don't you even read what you wrote? Please change it.

I found that the host does not play Yu-Gi-Oh. When the heroes are on the scene, there is no way to activate the fusion magic card to fuse monsters of another race. The popular 1 and 2 can only activate one of them in one round. If you have not played Yu-Gi-Oh, you can not write this now. It is so uncomfortable.

Come on😊

After reading the introduction, the author may be a person who does not eat fireworks.

So far, it's okay. It's better than other Star Iron Douluo hybrids.

The setting is good and the writing is very good. Please update it quickly!

The turtle-haired protagonist of the successor, a fake person, a sissy pervert

There are some inconsistencies, but it looks fine from the front.

A very outrageous plot, forcibly creating conflicts. The protagonist used the system to get Tang San's first spirit ring, but Tang Hao saw it. The reason he saw it was that "Tang San's luck was changed", and he also knew that it was the protagonist who did it. Brother, Tang Hao came from Dousan, right?

What I am currently writing is a classic beast-controlling style.

Overall, it's a light-hearted beast-control novel, and it's good to read.

"After the voice is exposed, the boss takes the whole family away with his strength" character information is revealed "Shen Pingxiao"

After the fire and blood he witnessed at the age of 13, he had only one thought left - "We can never take another step slower." Otherwise you will just lose again and again. --He knew this very well. So even after their grandfather, their only remaining relative, passed away, even though he was abused, imprisoned, and restricted by those people, and was even forced to take all his younger brothers away from the country in order to survive, even though he understood that it would be the same as sending death, he did not dare to stop for a moment. Even if it's just one step. Because he wants to take back everything that belongs to "home" with his own hands. "What's the use of crying! My parents and grandpa can't come back! "... Shen Xiujin, stop crying!" That day, the third child scolded the still young sixth child with red eyes. Then look at him again. --Because even as an elder brother, Shen Liuqing is still only half a child. So those red and childish eyes, trying their best to endure the grief, actually reveal the same confusion and fear. They all looked at themselves. They all need themselves. So he hugged his brothers tightly one by one. Then I remembered that infant figure. Yes, there is no point in crying. "It's no use, brother."

Shen Pingxiao

"Shen Pingxiao..." "What's the problem, host?" "No, no. I just think the name... Is quite domineering." "Like leveling the sky?" "Yes, almost. But does it just match his villain overlord character?" "Uh..." "Okay, pretend I didn't say that." --Somewhere in the world, the dialogue occurs when the system tells its survival host information about the native world.

It's written like shit. ***, You are still a God King, God King is a piece of shit.

Green Pepper Green Pepper, don't be too general about the love story of this Dou Er. In the previous film, it was because a group of women liked the protagonist inexplicably, or trusted the protagonist unconditionally. This was a bit too outrageous and dramatic, lacking the stage from stranger to trust. However, this idea is still very novel and the ideas are very innovative. I hope it will achieve good results.

Quick update!

If you don't skimp on the details, it deserves five stars. Now it depends on the author's update speed.

There are more than a thousand chapters. You don't need to read the content. You can tell whether the book is suitable for reading just by reading the book reviews. Really, AI writing is better than this. I don't understand Mao Xian, so I wrote in random directions. I feel like it's an insult to give you one point.

The introduction is terrible and the content is very broad. Keep up the good work!

The secret method of the clone of the guardian of the Chaos Monument in the original work must not be passed on, and even if it existed before immortality, it would not be able to give birth to a clone. Of course, my personal guess is that it should be after immortality, otherwise so many immortals/venerables/lords of the universe in the human race would have been destroyed long ago! Because this clone is so nonsense! At least dozens of main bodies can have 60% combat power. Of course, it is uncertain whether it will reach 60% after breaking through the Lord of the Universe. It may even be useless. It may only be 30% or even 10%, but as long as it is useful? That human race has been wiped out long ago! Similar to the clear fifth-level universe lord of human race Chaos/Darkness/Peng Gong's original work, Huangjian's main body plus three clones, Chaos main body plus two clones, what about the other masters of the universe? Is there a clone? I haven't read the original novel, and the anime hasn't been updated, so there should be some who have it! At least there are a lot of people trying to seize the body! What do you think? Can the fifth-level Lord of the Universe beat the third-level Lord of the Universe with 10% of his combat power? That Kandri is at least a high-level venerable or even an ordinary overlord, plus the starting 52 clones have 60% of their combat power. The top overlords dare not mess with him, otherwise the main body will not come out and the clones will self-destruct. What can the top overlords do? After all, Jiujian had invited him to go to a new secret realm with him! Therefore, it is impossible to pass on and breed a clone! It consumes a lot of resources, but the key is that it cannot help the main body understand the rules! At most, we can learn secret techniques/create secret techniques and fight together!

A new book is here again!

I changed my vest again and wrote a new article! The results of the previous articles were not very good, but the articles about the end of the world and the desert island cubs will find time to resume and update in the future. This new article was recently written by the young author who couldn't find what I wanted to read, so he cooked it himself. I hope all the cuties who like it will support me! By the way, I would like to recommend some of the finished old books: "The Precious Guide is Too Enthusiastic, and the Sentinels Fall One after Another", "The Top Guide and Her Crazy Sentinels", "Dressed as Super to Soothe Females, Big Bosses Compete for Favors". The writing style and plot may be unsatisfactory. Interested little cuties can choose what they like.

The protagonist in the latest chapters is a bit crazy, right?

It's quite interesting. How does it feel to suddenly grow a face? Haha, please update.

The writing is actually good, but how do you plan to write now that your combat power is so high? The combat power of the First Saint is the same as crushing mortals. Now, more than seventy chapters in, the protagonist can already beat Yuanying. Even if he uses his best cards to transform into gods, he may overturn. So how do you plan to write it in the future? Later, when the demon sect comes, the protagonist will have to change his mind. Can it be made longer?

Author, hurry up and continue to update and update.

Author, hurry up and continue to update, update and update

Let me put it bluntly, as far as the protagonist's talent is concerned, any academy will accept it?

Thoughts after reading

The writing is really good and very picturesque. I look forward to seeing Li Wenzhong in the future.

The author's literary talent is very good, I highly recommend it.

It looks good. Update soon. Hurry up. Don't be lazy.

It's terrifying to think about it carefully, and it's so meticulous that you can't understand it even if you think about it.

The 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor's soul bone was so lonely that his physique did not improve, his soul power did not increase, and his skills were not used. Later, he absorbed a 600-year-old soul ring and almost killed himself.

I think it's pretty cool, please give it a thumbs up to the author

The logic is confusing and inexplicable

I want to hit someone out of nowhere, everything is out of nowhere

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Like to read, love to read, update more, support you.

I subscribe to basically every single one, but to be honest, seeing as you are now unable to update one in 3 days, this is really a waste. . If it doesn't work, let's make a statement. Eunuchs will be eunuchs.

The pig's foot teacher took away a phoenix? 6000 Genes? Overlord's secret method? If you look at it this way, it's definitely not a human race! Unless the original human race! At most, they are a subordinate group of humans! The original human race only had three top overlords! A celestial eclipse/ancestral tree/star field! These three people all have special opportunities. Either they can seize thousands of times their genes, or they can encounter some treasure that has the ability to clone themselves and then give birth to clones! Tian Eclipse seems to be a person who seizes the body and has clones. The specific ones are not clear! He has a clone guarding the Xueluo world! The other two are not from Virtual Universe, so I don't know!

The author makes a comment. If you search for some female protagonists who have romantic relationships in the original work, you should pay attention to patching them. The angel god Qian Renxue at the end of Dou Yi has feelings for Tang San, Bi Ziji has a relationship with Ditian in Dou Er, and the eldest sister has a crush on Beibei, as well as the female teachers in Shrek Academy who already have romantic partners. If there is a heroine in these writings, I hope they can be patched up without being too spirited or bullheaded.

There are many secondary characters in it, and what are the choices of the protagonist? ? ? ?

Are you serious? Changsheng was exposed666

Why should I buy it? I have a membership

Please read

I'm on pk. If the data is good, I will get more recommendation opportunities. Please read to the last chapter. Lu Qi is here to thank everyone! Ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

Looks good, looks a bit like the sighing undead

Chapter 10! ! ! ! How about playing? It was also recommended by someone, so I came over to take a look, there are 10 chapters! Everyone's quick update

It still has that familiar smell and looks good

The old man's fantasy before being raped by a spirited girl

The writing is very nice, but isn't your combat power upgraded a bit too quickly? Wouldn't all subsequent worlds be directly pushed aside unless a larger world is introduced?