Meat-clad Master Will Hang Up
by Black Sky
About This Novel
The waves rise into the darkness, and the steampunk ship made of extraordinary steel roars for a long voyage. When the whale falls into the deep sea, the siren calls out to the extraordinary sailors who hunt mermaids with its beautiful songs. The mysterious time hunters who follow ancient codes are looking for their prey. A born "hero", burdened with destiny, has already embarked on a journey to create history. The ancient "sealed objects" are eager to pry open the sealed door, and they want to release the newly derived "extraordinary memes". The "Super Genetic Warrior" that combines steam science with the supernatural has ushered in the dawn. The young dragon who had just cracked the egg saw the dragon-slaying warrior and used a knife to cut out his mother's heart. The natural disaster creatures are sharpening their knives, they are going to make their debut in this extraordinary era. The wave of the times has swept forward violently, bringing with it a dark and mysterious fog... Indescribable terror is brewing... The abyss stares... And in a certain ruins city, a young man who was determined to become a meat-dressed priest was hanging up. ... Welcome to the extraordinary age of steampunk! ... Group: 992369938
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Official(95)Scraped 11d ago
Working together with Wu Zetian at the execution ground😁I know everything about the job😂
Come on, come on, I just said oh, exorcise the devil
Dislike (comment is personal bias)
The beginning of the article does not conform to the thinking logic of a master like me. A mature extraordinary profession must have the means to complement this profession. It has always been emphasized that mages are very fragile. Is it interesting? Putting too much emphasis on it will make people very annoying. If you are upset, there will be no need to read it.
One word, send!
Earlier, I saw the protagonist saying how rare it is to be a pharmacy expert. There are only a few in the world. How amazing! What a 🐮B! What kind of treatment will you get after you become an expert? On average, 10 ingredients will produce at least 9 potions. Anything more will be rewarded, and anything less will have to be paid out of your own pocket. Exactly 9 potions will be in vain. This is a rare expert in the world. Instead of spending time on research and development, he goes directly to the assembly line to drive screws? This world really relies on archeology for research and development, with experts acting as the production line. Even if the author doesn't understand the status of the world's top experts, Baidu should know at a glance which of the world's top experts will be assigned to the assembly line production, and one day the performance will not meet the standards and he will have to pay out of his own pocket? The protagonist still thinks that the treatment is normal, and thinks that he can still make money because of the system. He even came up with a trick to cheat and practice 105 potions with 100 materials, so that he can make more money. This is equivalent to giving me 1,000 kilograms of iron to make 90 10-jin swords. The extra iron is considered as reward. The protagonist also feels that he can make 105 10-jin swords and can get 15 as reward. It is a huge profit.
Come on
Is it remote enough? The updates in these places are too slow, so I'll be careful to drag you here and bury you.
It's pretty good, but a bit verbose.
bug
There are too many bugs. In Chapter 142, the Balrog only had 20% of his strength and ran faster than the protagonist. Then in the last picture, he said that he couldn't outrun the protagonist and that he couldn't outrun the protagonist at his full strength.
Looking forward to the next book
Every system can bloom, so come on, author!
A good book is written like this
Wordy, confusing words and sentences, abnormal punctuation, unclear sentences, and unclear narrative
The author is scared.
Although the protagonist of this book is not a virgin, it is not as dark as the protagonists of the previous books, and my youth is over.
Defects are too large
It can be seen that a lot of effort was put into setting the framework. But it spreads too quickly and often talks about settings in large sections. Not conducive to coherent narrative The writing is too stiff, seriously affecting the reading experience Frequent excessive exertion and long, erratic sentences The style of writing is mixed with fairy tales and magic, with occasional dramas It is recommended to adjust the use of sentence fragments, punctuation and connectives. In addition, the vocabulary library can be enriched more Gods, demons, horrors, etc. Are a bit too frequent. Not three-dimensional enough
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Official(95)Scraped 11d ago
Working together with Wu Zetian at the execution ground😁I know everything about the job😂
Come on, come on, I just said oh, exorcise the devil
Dislike (comment is personal bias)
The beginning of the article does not conform to the thinking logic of a master like me. A mature extraordinary profession must have the means to complement this profession. It has always been emphasized that mages are very fragile. Is it interesting? Putting too much emphasis on it will make people very annoying. If you are upset, there will be no need to read it.
One word, send!
Earlier, I saw the protagonist saying how rare it is to be a pharmacy expert. There are only a few in the world. How amazing! What a 🐮B! What kind of treatment will you get after you become an expert? On average, 10 ingredients will produce at least 9 potions. Anything more will be rewarded, and anything less will have to be paid out of your own pocket. Exactly 9 potions will be in vain. This is a rare expert in the world. Instead of spending time on research and development, he goes directly to the assembly line to drive screws? This world really relies on archeology for research and development, with experts acting as the production line. Even if the author doesn't understand the status of the world's top experts, Baidu should know at a glance which of the world's top experts will be assigned to the assembly line production, and one day the performance will not meet the standards and he will have to pay out of his own pocket? The protagonist still thinks that the treatment is normal, and thinks that he can still make money because of the system. He even came up with a trick to cheat and practice 105 potions with 100 materials, so that he can make more money. This is equivalent to giving me 1,000 kilograms of iron to make 90 10-jin swords. The extra iron is considered as reward. The protagonist also feels that he can make 105 10-jin swords and can get 15 as reward. It is a huge profit.
Come on
Is it remote enough? The updates in these places are too slow, so I'll be careful to drag you here and bury you.
It's pretty good, but a bit verbose.
bug
There are too many bugs. In Chapter 142, the Balrog only had 20% of his strength and ran faster than the protagonist. Then in the last picture, he said that he couldn't outrun the protagonist and that he couldn't outrun the protagonist at his full strength.
Looking forward to the next book
Every system can bloom, so come on, author!
A good book is written like this
Wordy, confusing words and sentences, abnormal punctuation, unclear sentences, and unclear narrative
The author is scared.
Although the protagonist of this book is not a virgin, it is not as dark as the protagonists of the previous books, and my youth is over.
Defects are too large
It can be seen that a lot of effort was put into setting the framework. But it spreads too quickly and often talks about settings in large sections. Not conducive to coherent narrative The writing is too stiff, seriously affecting the reading experience Frequent excessive exertion and long, erratic sentences The style of writing is mixed with fairy tales and magic, with occasional dramas It is recommended to adjust the use of sentence fragments, punctuation and connectives. In addition, the vocabulary library can be enriched more Gods, demons, horrors, etc. Are a bit too frequent. Not three-dimensional enough
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The framework structure of the whole book is concise and concise, with huge room for development. There should be more interesting settings in the future, so I am looking forward to it!
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A new book by an old author Tightness: ★★★★
There is a scary thing called a progress bar. When I saw that I had read 90+% of the book, I panicked. I haven't felt this way for a long time.
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