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It starts off poorly, the protagonist's IQ is not high, the setting is OOC, the headquarters rating is the level of danger, not the level of terror, and you are just a ghost, and there is nothing in the text to show that even when the level of terror is very high, he still has the confidence to suppress two digits of ghosts at a time, you are really awesome.
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This type of story where the protagonist opens a shop and sells things basically means his combat power has collapsed. Eunuch, author, can you continue writing?
In Chapter 38, I can't watch the paid chapters simply through advertisements. It feels cumbersome.
Chapter 55 is really unbearable, I'll leave the rest of the story to those who are destined!
Where did that guy called passerby come from?
It's very beautiful and worth watching. I really like this style of heroine!
The subject matter is good, it was okay in the early stage, but I didn't read it in the later stage.
Why did you suddenly withdraw your chapter?
You should know some entertainment knowledge before writing a book! Just to be able to write more, I first gave the stage name Dongzi and then changed the name. Is it because you can't get your real name? You can count the number of people who have changed their names over and over again. Who didn't change things before becoming famous? Have you thought clearly about your song selection? Whether a song is popular or not depends on the times. A song that will become popular in the future will not become popular just by releasing it in advance. Xiaogang's dusk understands. My heart is too soft, please understand,
Why do authors who write in this genre either have a harem or are on the way to it?
stupid
Your heroine is very stupid Where is the caution of the mercenaries in the previous life? . .
It's so rare for the protagonist to be born in Nanning, Guangxi 😂
Nanning locals support the wave and suggest that every girl should post a picture. AI can also be used, or you can find it online, which will give you a more immersive feeling.
The parents are short-tempered and very verbose! But it would be great to make a period drama! It would be too boring to read as a novel
Too many kills, not suitable for me
Not bad
The fighting strength has already collapsed 69 against 97? Douyi? I don't have anything, I just rely on my martial soul to realize it. Let me ask you if you are going against the will or not? The only thing that comes to mind is that this book has the setting of Dou Si Still want to kill Di Tian? Too taken for granted The only advantage is that it's cool Can I finish the text on one side quickly?
Tomato AI invades QQ, and its facial expressions, eyes, movements, and tone of voice are all spirally interspersed with fancy metaphors, like what is like, and "It's not... It's not... It's..." 😐😐😐😐
It's such a big lump, it looks so messy, it's a bit like preparing a big one and then making a loud noise.
Why is the protagonist three corpses instead of the main character?
Really good-looking and cool. There is evil in human nature, and the heroine is kind but also knows not to meddle in other people's business. The most important thing is that the author is the heroine's mother
What is the author's setting for the male protagonist? Uh, why doesn't it feel like a time traveler? Isn't it the setting of a time traveler?
Since you don't accept it, why do you write so much ambiguity? Moreover, Zhengsheng clearly knows that pork will soar, so why take so many big orders? It is equivalent to losing money by making a ham sausage. Besides, Zhengsheng should know that the world is already dominated by the Internet, so isn't it good to build your own brand? Give profits to consumers instead of being a processing factory with unstable orders. Whether it is for quality control, cost, or safety, which one does not build its own factory? The processing factory method, I don't know when it happened.
nice
When I saw the female protagonist crying, I also cried. The male protagonist's character is curious and a bit perverted. Ordinary people travel through time and meet everyone, and the characters in large letters feel very real. Nothing goes as planned. It was even more difficult in ancient times. People with money and power had the final say. Life is simple, people's hearts are complicated
The more I write, the more I lose, always betting against capital. In reality, if you dare to do this, aren't you seeking death?
This book seemed a bit boring and frustrating in the early stages.
Why did it suddenly turn into a prehistoric world? A lot of dead people suddenly appeared again, and everything was wrong.
I am going to remove the book from the bookshelf and stop reading it.
It was normal at the beginning. If the protagonist sells three items, he can draw a prize (the price of the items has been set at this time). Later, the protagonist actually started an auction (shouldn't you be thinking about how to sell more items to accumulate the number of draws?) Can I understand that this is to suppress the combat power? After all, the number of draws is based on the number of items sold. If you hold an auction, the price of the item will be doubled directly (later, when people come to buy things privately, you will sell them directly at the auction price). I don't know what the protagonist wants so many gold soul coins for (there is no shortage of resources if there are hooks). There is also the Poké Ball, which the protagonist also said before that he doesn't know. Whatever you can get out will come later. When people come to buy Poké Balls, you buy them yourself first and then open them up (aren't you taking people for granted? Selling second-hand goods for the first-hand price?) If there are mythical beasts, keep them for yourself. Those ordinary or rubbish elves are just sold to others. To be honest, the protagonist looks a bit ugly. I don't like the protagonist's style.
So pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Testing the waters has begun. I hope I can go on safely with everyone this time.
And if there are any soft-hearted bloggers out there, look at me, qwq once had a record of posting 40,000 likes! If the text is deleted, it will be placed in vb@璟 Falling Wood
Great work, update soon. If you like it, I want to follow up.
praise
Very nice. Highly recommended. Very nice. Highly recommended.
Basically every chapter has to mention what it was like in the past life. If I don't mention it, wouldn't I be able to write it?
Update update update update update...
The first few Zhutian** novels written at the beginning are pretty good, and they are better than Yi Shui's "Saving the Heroine"
It's okay, the logic is quite clear, awesome
The first few pictures are okay, but after watching a few more pictures, they are too toxic.
Can the author please tell us when they will be together👀
You can read it as a pornographic article
But the protagonist is purely new Although now the protagonists in film and television fan fiction are somewhat involved in But this is the real purebred Zaz
It's not a good start, so I don't know what will happen next.
The characterization of the protagonist is annoying, and everyone in the police station is also stupid. When it comes to seniority, the protagonist has no background and should be ignored. So smooth.
Highly Recommend Highly Recommend Highly Recommend Highly Recommend
It's pretty good. The protagonist, a soldier, has a very good thinking. He protects his family and the country. But every one of these disciples has cheats.
Does the protagonist have to go to Nanhan to develop?
I'm really convinced! This book has a funny plot, a group portrait and CP, a serious and group atmosphere, and a relaxed and daily life. It is an excellent niche novel that combines academic style, group portrait style, fighting style, writing style and CP stew style. Why has no one read it? ! Why is that! !
It's quite good. I finished watching it and I like Baicao very much.
Samsung. Not good, not bad. Some places are outrageous.
Bad review! Just write about devouring the indigenous protagonist of the fanfic! Is the heroine still a foreigner? I'm really impressed. What do you think of arranging a foreigner in China? I can't stand it anymore!
Everything written by the author is good to read, and this is the one I like to read the most.
It looks good, very good, the TV series is very good
When I saw a person pretending to be a cultivator, cold-heartedly threatening people to collect antiques and turn them into fakes, I knew it was time for everyone to withdraw, so as not to embarrass themselves.
The back part of Demon God is full of extras. The author said it himself. As for what it is about, everyone knows it.
No, how can you sustain yourself to death by raising a book? I finally remembered to read it back and forth, but I didn't read a few chapters and went straight to the extra chapter. What is this about? You might as well just cut it and let the book friends have something to think about. It's so disgusting that it's so messed up. So the online literature environment is really bad now. If you spend money to subscribe and read something like this, it's not to blame for the rampant piracy. Don't be stubborn, others, this book will be over when it reaches the chapter about the devil, and then there will be the content of another book.