🌱bookworm Complaint Conference🌱in the Urban Era, the Family Cultivates Immortality!

59 points Harem urban novel! Not a chronicle! It belongs to an imaginary city where sheep's heads are played and dog meat is sold! I have read two books by this author. He does not write chronicles, he specializes in writing about harems! Belongs to passing level! It's just that it's not possible to fit in the era, so it's better to write entertainment articles and open up the harem! The advantage is the characterization and well-written dialogue! Lots of shortcomings!

60 points! I thought it was a great product, so I came back and subscribed for a little more! But in the end I didn't even want to see the ending! It's okay for the enemy in the front, but in the middle and later stages, it's all about raising it high and putting it down gently. In the later stage, it directly makes the protagonist lose his wits... Really, speechless! Especially in the Japanese part, the protagonist becomes a softie when faced with the leadership, the media, and the Japanese! How unreasonable! I applied for a patent twice in total. The first time I got it, I sold the product. The second time I didn't get it, and then I was blackmailed! And then the protagonist doesn't even hire a lawyer. You're so awesome! What you are writing about is a Hong Kong-funded enterprise. Wouldn't it be better to ask a lawyer to help you solve the problem in the name of the Hong Kong shareholders? When the time comes, how can leaders easily end up? The author has the ability to write books, but there is a problem with his attitude, and there is a problem of containing personal information! I want to make money but don't want to lick readers! It's normal to rush into the street!

60 points, food and grass! There are a lot of questions, but it's not too much to swallow! The first one is data! I am not sensitive to data, but when I saw the author wrote that the protagonist was short of money to treat the old man, I knew there was a big problem with the data! The protagonist had an income of more than 2,000 yuan at that time, while other people's normal income was only a few hundred yuan. The author made money💰 so worthless! The smallest unit of currency at that time was cents, with cents, gross, and finally yuan! The second and most serious problem! Feeling good! Suppress first and then release, but you suppressed but didn't release, or maybe you didn't release enough! So not only is the feeling of pleasure not enough, it also has a negative impact! The simplest example is when the protagonist is taken away at the end of the turmoil, and then the other party resorts to tricks, or even wants to silence him, the subsequent plot is indeed anticlimactic and does not release the reader's emotions! The same goes for the plot behind it! All the places that should be fun are only touched upon! The third problem is that there is no period flavor, the details are too poor, and there is no world view! If this were an original theme, the story would probably be gone! The worldview shaping is so poor! The fourth question, golden finger! It's too long-winded and complicated to say! Just the sheer size of the article after it's put on the shelves hurts subscribing readers! This is where the author makes the biggest mistake! The lower the word count is the right of a master. The worse your grades are, the less likely you are to lower the word count, not to mention a cheat like you who adds a little bit of information to the word count! What you hurt is the readers who support you the most! It doesn't matter that we are free!

80 points, a small classic among fine products I read it in one sitting, it's pretty good! It's not like I've been raising pigs for so long! The only pity is that the ending was not handled well, which lowered the quality! Before becoming a god, there were only two issues, the setting of the heroine, and the Divine Machine Mansion! The protagonist has a magic stick from the Shenji Mansion to form a pill, and he is really speechless when doing a divination. What is the logic of your divination? It's not reasonable at all! Fortunately, I didn't write too much, otherwise this book would be useless! The heroine, especially the setting that Shi Wanyu is the reincarnation of Baiguang Ancestor, is really bad! This is the worst plot before becoming a god! She was even pushed down by Shi Wanyu to give birth to a child. This is the biggest poisonous point in this book! The best part of this book is when developing the Five Elements Sect, it imitates the ideas of the Immortal Sect and transforms Donghuang! This is the best plot in this book!

60 points or so. Xiaoliangcao is a bit unfinished, but it's still a bit satisfying! 000 The author did a good job with the plot's rhythm and foreshadowing! Although the villain is somewhat mentally retarded, it does not affect the enjoyment! There is nothing toxic about what many authors write, but it makes people feel uninterested and tasteless when looking at it. It is basically a matter of rhythm and enjoyment! This can be learned from this author! This is also the second book by this author that I have read! The previous chronicle was a masterpiece! This book is not polished well enough! The story is a bit weak! Otherwise, the results will be better!

59 points can barely be counted as food and grass! The writing was pretty good in the early stages, but it started to go downhill when we got to Qixuan! The Divine Mirror Realm is boring. It's all about time, space, years, and some cognitive things created by creation! There is no plot, no sense of substitution! It's better to write a wave of demon invasion and then end it! I gave up when I saw Go to the Origin Realm. I flipped through the table of contents and didn't even want to see the finale!

57 points! Barely considered food and fodder! I don't even want to read the 1000th chapter! Scroll through the table of contents to get to the finale, which I had no fun writing! Wrong name! What follows is not an apocalyptic article at all! 1- Combat power, the collapse is powerful! The protagonist is like a Qi-training monk who practices immortal literature and defeats the golden elixir monk! 2- World view, some settings are illogical! Moreover, the beginning of the apocalypse has no apocalyptic atmosphere at all! 3-As for the heroine! Every female character who appears must be the protagonist! This is not a harem story... This is a story about harmony that is not allowed to be told! This way of writing is unpleasant and boring to read! The harem novel, studied by Shen Youchu, only has two female protagonists, and they are very popular! You have no foreshadowing, you pick up one after another, and your pace is fast. Not even the donkeys in the countryside are like this!

64 points Mengde syndrome patient Prime Minister fan Little boutique bar! The quality is too low in the middle and late stages! In the early stage, whether it is the rhythm, plot, excitement or character design, it is all very good! The quality of Changhe Base began to decline! The seventh level has begun to decline seriously! After time goes back, it will be dispensable! All in all, a decent game framework apocalypse article! Excellent products in the early stage, food and grass in the mid-term, and slightly toxic in the later stage! Still worth seeing!

60 points It's a mess! No follow-up plot has been written! It's a brainless and cool article, but it's a bit unpleasant to write! And the flooding is serious! The author is a bit astray! A low word count will only hurt subscribing readers! I don't know if the author doesn't know how to write the battle plot or if he deliberately wrote the word count like this. In short, the effect is negative! There are more words, but the excitement is reduced! For mindless and enjoyable articles, reducing the enjoyment is tantamount to suicide! With a little introduction to martial arts and martial arts, other authors can write hundreds or even thousands of words, but this author can write 2-3 chapters! Needless to say, there is a lot of water! In terms of characterization, some characters deserve to die, but the author asking the protagonist to help extend his life is tantamount to challenging the reader's perception! Wise men do not do this! In short, I can watch it, but that's it! The author has some ability, but his cognition and thinking are a bit distorted! If you can realize this and correct it, you can write a hit and mindless article! But it must be a pity!

60 points! The author's ability is not bad, but it's a pity that he is a bit literary! I want to write something of my own, but the integration is terrible! Too much force... The first time I use this word to evaluate a book in my memory! It's like painting a tree. The author keeps spending time on the branches and leaves, but ignores the trunk! Whether it's the plot or the setting, this book has this feeling of trying too hard! Generally speaking, this book basically ends with Nascent Soul! The back of Nascent Soul has collapsed into a mess. The reason is that the main trunk is missing. The author has been writing about branches and leaves, which is like a castle in the air, and it is vain at a glance! In the early stage, the mortal stage, too much emphasis was placed on the difficulty of cultivating immortality, creating a world with solidified classes and monopoly of knowledge! But after the protagonist cultivates immortality, the author himself breaks the world! Self-contradictory! So I used too much force in the early stage and the setting was too rigid! In the mid-term, the protagonist's halo is everywhere! Foundation-building monks are involved in the Jindan Yuanying plan, why do you think so? And why did you survive! This is the question I kept having while watching this episode! The Changsheng Sect planned the Hanhai Chen family, and Jin Dan was silenced. Why should I spare your life? You have killed many people in the Changsheng Sect before and worked for the enemies of the Changsheng Sect. They recruited you, but you refused! For Yuanying, what is the difference between the protagonist and other monks? Aren't they all going to be silenced? When the author writes about similar flowers, there are many people who want to silence him and control him! Why is it that the protagonist is not only not controlled and enslaved, but also silenced? Totally unreasonable! Forcing the protagonist's halo to continue his life! The various schemes that the protagonist is involved in all stem from greed, and the risks are greater than the benefits. This kind of writing is very poor! Previously, I was greedy for the knowledge of the Changsheng Sect, but after I actually entered the Changsheng Sect, I wrote that I didn't care anymore! Inconsistency! Later! Spiritual world! It's paradoxical, the secret of heaven and destiny has been adjusted again! It is completely inconsistent with the traditional system of cultivating immortals! Where do you get your great power from transforming into gods and refining emptiness? You are not even a Mahayana tribulation, how can you be allowed to pick peaches? What's more, there are immortals in your setting. You, an ant, can still pick peaches. How reasonable is it? Tian Yan, the setting is very awesome, but he is still regarded as a flag. The protagonist is not even as good as Tian Yan, so why should he pick peaches? Relying on the spiritual brilliance of golden fingers? In the author's setting, spiritual brilliance can only maintain one's nature and improve one's understanding! But there is no such power! This is the reason for the collapse in the later period! The protagonist is so strong that there is no basis for it! No source!

62 points A typical representative of the routine template! Unlimited upgrades and map changes! It can be regarded as a qualified and brainless novel! The author gave up too many plots and stories for the sake of fast pace, just like a tree, very tall but with only a few leaves! If we could reduce some maps and add some stories, this book would be a masterpiece! It relies a bit too much on routine templates. The author has the ability to tell stories, but he obviously gave up on storytelling in the middle! For the pleasure of quickly upgrading! This kind of refreshing feeling is indeed there, but it is easy to get bored. The rhythm in the later period is okay, and it adds a little more story! It would be nice if there was a little more! In short, a typical cool template article! The work of rations! In fact, it's most suitable for novice authors! Because this book is actually just copying and pasting the skeleton of routines! Novice authors will know what routines are after just one reading!

63 points What a pity! Get some quality food! I thought it was a small masterpiece, but in the middle and later stages it was really terrible! The setting is too petty! Still old-fashioned! The story of the rebirth of the Taoist master to break the blockade! Moreover, he is set to be the only one among the three thousand Taoists, and also suppresses other monks involved in this Taoism! Excuse me, what kind of orthodoxy do you still practice? Wouldn't it be enough to directly block Taoism and prohibit the sale of heaven and earth spiritual materials? The plot setting is not self-consistent, and it's just too petty to watch! I was also drunk during the heavenly calamity. I had to overcome the calamity after breaking through in physical training, and I had to go through the calamity again after breaking through in spiritual cultivation! What are you doing? Is it reasonable? Overcoming tribulation is the evolution of life levels. What did you write it as? Moreover, it's hard for me to refine my body and soul, and it's still hard for me to break through the realm of spiritual cultivation. So where did I go when I was refining my body? Fate, luck, time, really, if these counter-intuitive things cannot be self-consistent, don't write about them. There are a lot of problems and they will affect the plot! Where does the strength of the avenue come from? Time, reincarnation and space are always the strongest! Too low! Goldfinger, this book can only be used in the early stage, and it can only be written in the early stage. If the golden finger is useless in the middle and later stages, the book will also be useless! The reason is that the author, audience and tastes do not match! Grafting failed! It is recommended that before writing a book, you should think clearly about what you want to write. If you don't have a brain, then you will have no brain. If you write a good article, you will write a good article. When you tell a story, you should tell it well. It is not to graft the story on after a brainless article! This is an act of committing suicide!

59 A decent panel flow! No surprises and not much fun! It's still unfinished! If you are short of books, you can use them to fill your stomach! The main reason is that it's not fun enough! The panel flow is not afraid of being brainless, but it is afraid that it is not enough fun! The protagonist's panel is relatively useless! This is why it's not cool enough, Goldfinger is a bit useless! Another reason! It sucks! It's really not as good as the eunuch's!

65 points The story is good, but it lacks excitement! But it's worth reading even though the book is out of stock! Belongs to a category where flaws are not concealed! 1. Cheat, spend your life to learn* skills, a cool cheat type! However, the author did not write a good article! This comes from the arrogance of newcomers! I didn't like the Shuangwen routine, but in the end I fell into a more clichéd routine! This is also the reason why this book has a low rating! 2. The storyline of this book is intertwined. This is the advantage of this book! But after lacking the excitement of some routines, these stories lacked sediment! There is a logical confusion! And there will also be conflicts in settings! The reason for this feeling is golden fingers! He has it but doesn't use it, artificially restricting him, and even setting an upper limit for the cheat finger in the later stage, but the protagonist still uses the cheat finger from time to time. This is in conflict with the setting! 3. The final boss, Buddhism! This is actually the second reason why this book's rating is not high! Because the author doesn't understand it, he says there are big bugs in the setting of Buddhism! The plot that continues under this kind of bug is that the story behind the mirror is unrealistic, and the sense of immersion will not be strong! 4. Generally speaking, it is worth watching, but it is not necessary to watch it specifically! But for the author's next book, if he can learn the Shuangwen routine well and embed the storyline into the Shuangwen routine, then the next book will be worth looking forward to! True love cannot be retained, and routines always win people's hearts. Routines are never synonymous with vulgarity. Only those who cannot write routines well will fall into vulgarity! I hope the author will not be biased against routines and learn* how to write good routines!

55 points. If you are bored, you can take a look! The cheat settings are too low! An immortal being chased by a god-incarnation monk and given consciousness is the biggest mistake! Goldfinger's standard is too low! I don't know what the author is thinking! And logically, neither cheats nor pay-for-get things make sense! 1/ In the early stage, the main plot was only promoted after Chapter 100. It was too slow! 2/ After seeing the second chapter, I have to complain! The protagonist's first talent is too strong! Compared with the protagonist's efforts, the rewards have doubled! 3/The author has not found his own audience, the panel flow, the lack of the middle suppresses the growth of the protagonist, and the latter makes the panel more concrete, and the quality is so low, it is really a flaw! 4/ It's not poisonous, not disgusting, but there are so many flaws that it's doomed to fail as a book! 5/The ending is right when you transform into a god, which is just the right time to end it, because Goldfinger is already useless when he transforms into a god! Anyway, if you're really bored, you can take a look! There is no need to read if you have a book!

63 points A work of food and grass! I haven't read a novel in 2 months, and I haven't read a fairy tale in 8 months! This book is generally good. It uses mature templates and is quite satisfactory. There are no major problems! A few minor issues don't matter either! The overall world view and system settings were adhered to until the end! No crash! I saw a book review that said it was a mess, and I clearly object to this statement! It's time to finish! It would even be better to do it in advance! This book is a fast-paced novel. It has some ideas, but not much, and not too many poisonous points, but they are all slightly poisonous. Old readers can be immune to them all! The pace is fast, and it's okay if it's a bit refreshing. The reason why it's just food is because the pace is too fast and lacks characterization and supplementation, but there are pros and cons! If you are not capable, slowing down will make you worse! In short, you can take a look at Shuhuang! There is no need to bite the bullet if you have a book to read!

60 points, maybe! That's it, it's okay to read when I'm short of books, but I have other things to do! This book is broken when it is broken! No pity! In this book, I saw that I took my daughter-in-law to the city to meet my bride! My wife was so miserable in her previous life, so it's not a good idea to make such an arrangement in this life! And the protagonist doesn't need this kind of relationship anymore, right? Changing the map is actually not a good idea! I haven't read online articles in almost two months! One reason is that there is no book to read, and another reason is that this book is not attractive! After a few days of not watching it, I no longer have the desire to watch it!

65 points. A masterpiece of Siheyuan style novels from the era! Chronology now has a fixed template, and this one by the author is actually very typical! Others are strangers to the protagonist who is reborn from suffering in his past life. The protagonist in this book, Siheyuan Silly Pillar, naturally has a sense of substitution and is also popular! The subsequent plot is the same as other period novels, promotion and wealth, revenge when there is a grudge, and revenge when there is a grudge! The plot and logic are both okay, no big problems! Disadvantages: 1-The way of writing is too out of the ordinary. You must follow the author's thinking, otherwise you won't be able to connect with the context! 2-Emotional issues! It's really not good for the heroine and Lou Xiao'e to have both! The plot of this book is only suitable for a single female protagonist! 3-Career line! Floating on the water, not grounded! It's all about half-finishing one job and then switching to another! They also use Hong Kong Island's Lou Xiao'e's relationship to create a ceiling for the protagonist. This way of writing is very unpleasant! As a reborn person, there should not be a situation where your career is limited by your emotions and overseas relationships!

68 points A masterpiece of historical literature Non-toxic and safe to eat! Don't miss it if you like chronicles! As the author's first book, to be able to write at this level is to say that he was born to eat this bowl of rice! This book was recommended by the author of Fishing and Hunting in the Northwest during the new book period. At that time, it had more than 100,000 words and felt like 🌱🌱Xiancao Seedlings🌱🌱! Later, I saw that the author said that the results were not good, and many readers complained in the comment area, so I killed it in advance! After seeing the latest chapter, I can only say that it lived up to the early reviews of the fairy grass! Later authors are getting better and better! However, it should still be affected to a certain extent. It obviously feels like the timeline has sped up and the dialogue has decreased. This is the reason that affects the quality! In the early stage, because it was the first time for the author to write a book, he didn't grasp the rhythm well, and the hook was loose, but he didn't satisfy the readers before their patience ran out, so it's normal for him to be criticized! Especially for readers who are following up, this reading experience is even worse! However, there is nothing poisonous about this book, and it deserves praise!

🌱🌱80 points seedlings🌱🌱 After reading the first chapter, it reminded me of a book! "Global Movie King", a healing classic entertainment article! This book is a bit healing! Issue the knife in the first chapter! 😡😡😡 The first paragraph of the article is very well written and very healing! Such a good healing article, I recommend it to everyone. I never hide good things, so let's get the knife together! I can't be knifed alone! 😡😡😡😡😡😡