Tai Taoist Master

Of course, I very much hope that this is a place for everyone to discuss the plot instead of venting emotions. If you have questions, you can ask questions, you can express your opinions, and suggestions are better, but please keep your mind calm. Thank you very much!

I hope the author won't make the protagonist's combat power too outrageous. I don't like cross-border combat. What I like to see is the big bully the small. The protagonist bullies the foundation with the golden elixir instead of challenging the golden elixir when building the foundation. I think this is stupid. When you are at a low level, you should do everything possible and don't conflict with people at a high level. Even if you force the protagonist to conflict with him, don't let the protagonist confront him head-on. You can use other methods, such as the Yin Dead Man. No matter how you write about your low-level victory over high-level people, some people will find it false and illogical. But if the big one bullies the small ones, no one will question it. That would be nice, right?

The various plots in the early stage are too detailed. Although it cannot be said to be watery, if the early stage is too detailed, it will become more and more difficult to write in the future! After reading online novels over the years, I found that this is basically a rule. The more plots are written in the early stage and the more detailed the plots are, the more likely they will become eunuchs in the middle stage! Otherwise, the plot routines in the middle and late middle school are the same template, but the map is changed, and then the plot is basically reused. For example, "I am immortal in the world of cultivating immortals" feels very good, and the early plot is very detailed. Now it is in the middle stage of writing, and updates are frequently interrupted. I guess the author is about to cut it. I feel like there is a weird circle among people who write online articles. The longer the author takes to prepare a new book, the more amazing his early writing is, and he is often a eunuch! On the contrary, some authors are inspired to start a new book directly, and then there are constant bugs. After repeated settings and corrections, they can basically complete the book.

I will listen to you and change the name of the protagonist if it reaches 800 before it is put on the shelves. You can't blame me if it's not full, it's fate

People who read it, be mentally prepared. Chapter 250 is very depressing and less exciting. The protagonist is either being exploited or on the road to being exploited. I haven't read it since. In fact, I don't know how I persisted.

But it was too watery, and I only started practicing Qi in Chapter 70 or 80. The most important thing is that the protagonist Goldfinger is also a pirate, and his upgrade speed is not as fast as the magic method. He even died once when he broke through with Goldfinger! The combat prowess of the people around him is also exaggerated. In the beginning, he was just an outer sect Qi training disciple. After dying once, he can inexplicably kill Ji Zhu in an instant. The protagonist is not good. Ji Zhu defeated the eighth level of Qi training and even said, "Is this what it feels like to defeat the enemy?"

He doesn't look happy at all. He only started practicing Qi after Chapter 70

Thank you for your hard work. While raising chickens, you also find time to write novels.

It's too much for the protagonist! There is no development at all, it is always forced, it is too depressing, this section is too rubbish, it is not as good as the previous section of Demon Gate, there is still development in that section

It's pretty good, but the pace has been a bit slow lately!