🌱bookworm Complaint Conference🌱in the Urban Era, the Family Cultivates Immortality!

55 points: Cold Weapon Dynasty Fighting for Hegemony, a non-traditional fairy tale! When the author wrote the first word of the text, the book was doomed to fail! Judging from the title and classification of the book, the author went off topic. Judging from the plot content, the author is trying to make a fool of himself! The author has not found the positioning and audience of this book! There are also too many malleable analysis and explanations in the content, which are all water! Incredibly, you can't find any long dialogue in the whole book. There is no confrontation of languages ​​in this book! Many chapters only say one or two sentences, and then the author analyzes the causes and consequences, the gains and losses, and delays endlessly in advancing the plot around these one or two sentences! This book is not an article about cultivating immortality at all, nor is it a cool article about cultivating immortality in the style of Golden Finger and Panel Style! The reason why the score of this book is so different is because of the author's title, classification, and the cheats and panels at the beginning. Only a few readers have been screened out step by step! What's more, readers who like cold weapons and hegemony will not come to the Xianxia category to find books! After reading the author's final remarks, I feel that he did not realize where he went wrong at all, and he was so complacent that he made some money for this book. I am speechless! It's really like selling a comb to a monk!

59 points Dreaming back to ten years ago! The atmosphere of the middle school boy echoes in 2024! The author's writing style is too retro. After reading too much, Gou Daoliu felt uncomfortable reading this book! This book is pretty imaginative and refreshing, but the writing is terrible and the author is really lacking in ability! Let's fight, the dialogue and so on are all the same routines from ten years ago! The protagonist is questioned in various ways, and then the fans are slapped in the face, and then praised again. It's so retro! The relationship problem is also huge. Xiaoxiao could have been alone with her, and the plot was natural, but the author actually made the Holy Girl of the Demon Cult the mother of the child, which really made people speechless and unacceptable in terms of plot. The only intersection between the two is that the protagonist was reversed and each obtained the body of yin and yang. How can the relationship of interests become a relationship of love? You also write about a woman who is pregnant, and then let the protagonist and her have sex with each other? It's really hard to understand! Senior sister, that's a big problem. How come there is an outstanding junior brother and senior sisters, so do all the seniors and seniors have to fall behind him? There is no development in the plot? Another one is hydrology. In the middle and later stages, it's called a water-filled golden mountain. The luck entries will be written out as soon as they meet. When you upgrade, you will also be asked to write out the elimination method, and a lot of water will come out! In short, you can read it if you are really bored. You can still read the mindless and cool articles, but it is not recommended to subscribe. The rich people ignore it, it is too watery!

65 points The writing before Ascension to the Immortal World was okay, but after Ascension to the Immortal World, it became worse and worse, especially the plot involving Taozu, which was too intellectual! The two scripts of Sealed Land and Xuanjie Lingbao Sect are pretty good, but they also have many flaws. The settings are too cumbersome, and there are many unreasonable places in the settings! Monsters are immortal, and the immortal path has no means of restraint. The monster alliance can also seize the bodies of monsters to maintain their sanity. To be honest, for 99% of immortal cultivators, joining the ghost path can lead to immortality. Monsters can also devour the same kind and grow, perfect! The weird setting is the biggest bug in this book!

70 points A work of food and grass! There aren't many surprises, and there aren't any poisonous points! The writing of this book is a bit mediocre, not exciting enough, and not deep enough! The author didn't put much effort into making it enjoyable, so it's understandable that it's not satisfying enough, but the chivalrous spirit of the fairy he wanted to write about wasn't deep enough! Not even martial arts novels are chivalrous enough! The author has not even made more than 10,000 orders with the anti-theft app, and this result speaks for itself! The writing in the first and middle stages was pretty good, but in the later part it was a bit boring and it was a pity to abandon it. When I read it, I didn't feel like I was afraid that it would be over. Instead, I was thinking about why it's not over yet. I'd love to read the next book! Compared with the previous one, the author's transformation failed in this book. He did not have enough control over the plot in the later stages of the story and made no progress!

55 points A small H article from the starting point! Taking shortcuts to make money will inevitably lead to backlash. I write based on the spirit of the great master of River Crab. My grades are not bad, and it is normal for me to be reported! You don't worry about scarcity but about inequality. Why are you not blocked? If I write, I will block review. This is human nature! The early part of this book is just a small H story, and the plot is not interesting. In the middle and later stages, he was reported to have cut off his hands and feet and lost his golden finger, which completely eliminated all the pitfalls in the development of the plot. In the later stage, it is all kinds of small replicas of matryoshka dolls, which are purely superficial, and the ending has no highlights! From the point of view of the small H novel, it is nothing. From the point of view of the plot of the novel, it is just average. The reason why the results are good is just a loophole in the starting point, which is caused by the readers' rebellious mood! After he cut off his limbs in the middle and later stages, his performance must have declined, because the readers at the beginning have been screened, and the plot that follows is not what the readers want to see! In short, just take a look and play when you are bored, no need to subscribe!

80 points. Gou Daoliu's excellent work! A hidden gem not to be missed! A masterpiece that sticks to your heart from beginning to end! Yunxiao-Fairy Spirit-World Tree! The three-level advancement path lacks too many details, which is why I personally think this book is not a classic! Sometimes many details are said to be hydrographic, but it cannot be denied that the existence of these details makes the story more full and vivid! The author can definitely try to write more details in his next book to make a breakthrough!

68 points, focusing on short daily articles about parents! This book is a rare work in an era without commercial pursuits! These are all trivial matters in the family of some parents! If you like it, don't miss this one! As the first book written by a female channel author to switch to male channel, the subject matter is really well chosen, and it can be considered that it uses its strengths and avoids its weaknesses! However, there are also problems. The connection between the previous chapters is not good. The previous chapter has not been finished and the second chapter has started. It is a bit awkward to find the ending of the previous chapter when I got to the middle! The monkey shows the way and the part where the store was robbed was not handled well. This is probably the only bad point in the whole book! The punishment for the monkey is too light, and the reward for Maozi is too little. Just give him 10 yuan, which is an insult! The development of mountain villages was not well written, and the descendants of Baoshan went to the county town instead. In fact, it is better to write about the development of mountain villages in detail, that would be more interesting!

65 points. Panel-liquid draft! There's so much to read! There are micro innovations in the setting, the logic is self-consistent, and it is reasonable. Not bad, praise! However, the plot is too dry, and reading the book is like reading a diary! It is said that those who are good at literature and martial arts are sold to the emperor's family. The protagonist is capable of literature and martial arts but does nothing. He is a bit speechless. The author probably lives for the sake of survival, and then there is no plot to write, and in the end there is only theoretical research! There is also a big problem with the overall pacing of the article. The protagonist of the Foundation-Building Pill is already invincible, and the power system involved is also very advanced. In other books, the power that was only touched on in the later stages was moved to the Foundation-Building Pill by the author. Later, Yuanying still barely wrote it, and Huashen's brain collapsed and he could not write it cognitively. This also led to an anticlimactic ending! The world view is also very narrow, it feels a bit like being a dojo in a snail shell! For these reasons, a fine book was aborted! However, it can be seen that the author has put great care into both the details and the theory. It is probably a matter of ability and he still needs to learn*! The author has a new book but you can pay attention to it!

🌱🌱Herbaceous seedlings🌱🌱 Judging from the word count so far, the writing is pretty good and worth looking forward to! If you don't mind catching up, you can read it!

59 points! I took a sip from a bottle of Coke and found a few flies in it! Coke is still sweet, but disgusting is also necessary! This is what it feels like to read this book! You need to subscribe to this book first and then read it. If you remove some of the witty and bloody plots, it would still be a masterpiece! In the plot of Yang Jiawang, he handed it over to the police and then he killed him and ran away. After that, the protagonist was nervous for a few days and then he had to do whatever he wanted. The family didn't even talk about buying another shotgun for self-defense. My brother's family didn't even have a watchdog! In the end, the protagonist is kidnapped, and the bandits are also very powerful. A woman who was killed by the bandits and then threw her whole family into a cellar is asked to guard the protagonist! Then the protagonist persuaded the woman to let the protagonist go in a few words, and then the protagonist ran away and killed the bandits! This plot and details are not something ordinary people can come up with! Second generation conflict plot! After the brother was injured, he beat up several second-generation brothers with a bang, and then asked the second-generation brothers to pay thousands of dollars in lost wages. Even the son of the police chief couldn't cure the protagonist! He also said that the mountain people were cruel! In the end, the protagonist went to the county town and even fawned over the protagonist! If you don't dare to write about darkness, don't write about conflict. It's too intellectual. If you want to bring out these supporting characters, you can write that they hunt and get into an accident. The protagonist saves them on the way back. Everyone is happy. Isn't it better than artificial intelligence? Selling advice ruins the plot! The car rolled down the mountain, the driver was gone, and the protagonist was still unconscious. The robbers actually waited for the protagonist to wake up and killed them! Is this reasonable for you? And if you carry a huge sum of money and don't take a dog with you from the mountains, you take a chicken-feather car. The mountains are your territory! Are you doing the opposite to exploit your strengths and avoid your weaknesses? Why don't you write that they followed up in the mountains and were killed by you using various means, and then asked to find out who was behind the scenes? Writing characters and supporting characters in this way will still appear. Isn't it more reasonable than if you get into a car accident and can counterattack? The author had the old habit of confusing readers with his last book, but this book has made it even worse! After reading the book, I wanted to comment on it, but I found out that I had been banned. It's awesome! I can't complain about spending money to read a book, it's really great, give the author a thumbs up! I hope the author will carry forward the bad habits that cause readers trouble! Your novel has been rendered useless by your stinky habits! Goodbye!

50 points Nondescript stitch monster! The plot is stitched together in various ways, starting in the Siheyuan and then adding ghosts and chaos, and more importantly, the golden finger space is still available to living people! This is the first time I've seen it written like this since I started reading! Women are messy, no matter what the relationship is, women want it! The key is that when you accept a woman, you don't have to ask for it, you pull and pull, and the connection is broken. In the end, you have to write that you are forced to accept a certain woman! In terms of plot, you can only watch the early stage of "Golden Finger Catch the Spy", but the middle and later stages are a mess starting from Hong Kong. The author doesn't understand anything and just writes nonsense. The plot is not as high-end as gangsters fighting, it is too low! The name is not worthy of the name. There are still people bragging about the three best books in Siheyuan. Let alone conscience, I guess I don't even have a bad heart to say this! To make a book good or bad, it must have the most basic logic and rationality! This book is okay in general terms, but if it adds a little more depth to the plot, it will leave people speechless!