🌱bookworm Complaint Conference🌱in the Urban Era, the Family Cultivates Immortality!

60 points Liangcao Wen, open high and go low Starting in 1958! Disadvantages 1- There is no need to spend a lot of time on testing the functions of the golden finger. No one is here to see how the golden finger is upgraded or how the protagonist tests the function of the golden finger. A straightforward explanation will be enough! 2- It's a common problem among writers in the 1960s that when they go to Hong Kong Island, they let themselves go and then collapse all of a sudden! I was speechless when I saw thousands of tons of gold being collected from the Federal Reserve! 3- Break a taboo! Direct showdown with the country! I don't know if the author has ever heard of behind-the-scenes drama, or if he's heard of "Everyone is Drunk and I'm Alone Awakening!" Pretending to be an organization and having a showdown with the country is the biggest poisonous point of this book! Because all the early efforts will be directly in vain! All family members were excluded from the rights center! Including close friends! If you think about it from another person's perspective, for such a mysterious organization, it is very capable. Even if it treats you well, you cannot completely trust it! This makes the later plot writing meaningless! All your efforts are in vain, just like a clown, others are watching your performance! How can you let readers get involved in this way, and how can it feel better? Suggestions Just finish it! The plot collapsed so much! This way of writing a brand name is so taboo!

50 points! If you really don't have any books to read, you can take a look. The backend is very confusing! 1- Selling sheep's heads and selling dog meat, there are dozens of heroines in period novels! No emotion, no foreshadowing! 2-Wenqing! Especially after returning to the city! Moreover, some of the plots are incomprehensible, self-impressing, and meaningless! 3-The only thing worth reading in this book is the plot of going to the countryside!

🌱🌱Seedlings🌱🌱 Urban cute pets, relaxed and funny style! The first three chapters are well written and worth looking forward to! I was doing some new book investing today and found some nice seedlings!

68 points! An excellent daily article about the times! Worth a look! The female author's daily articles never disappoint. Compared with the previous one, the gap is huge! Hang on to that daily routine! The career line is also written to express a sense of gain and growth, which is very good! However, there are still small flaws! The reason why this book is not among the top 70 is mainly because the career line is holding it back! The first reason is that the golden finger did not explain it clearly at first. It was only after reading later that I understood the function of the golden finger! Generally speaking, there is no problem with the golden finger setting, but it is not explained clearly at the beginning! Reason number two, hunting! Writing in the sea is okay, but hunting is a bit difficult, especially when it comes to leopards and tigers! Fortunately, the author didn't describe it too much, so it's still acceptable! The third reason is length! The full text is less than 2 million words, which is a bit short, and it's a bit unfinished to read! But if you think about it carefully, the ending is actually just right! If I write more, it will be career-oriented, but if I write more on a daily basis, I will be suspected of being a fake! All in all, this is an excellent daily novel with a good sense of immersion, and I still have endless fun reading it!

60 points A work of food and grass, a book to read in the shortage of books! If other novels are like a big tree with a thick trunk with neat branches, then this book is like a small tree that grows randomly, with no trunk visible! It's too scattered, there is no priority, and there is too little ink about the career line! It's all scattered daily life, but the key is meaningless daily life, which has no supplementary effect on the plot or world view! 1-The protagonist and his wife go to bed at night! It can't beat the illegal pure H at the top, and it can't beat the urban love story at the bottom. It takes a lot of pen and ink to describe it, and it's completely uninteresting! Occasionally write something for readers to interact with and make everyone smile! But I write it almost every day, which makes people embarrassed because the author is so self-satisfied with his description of old couples! Not interesting! 2-Career line, spend a lot of pen and ink on the affairs of men and women, but the career part of the plot is mostly mentioned in one stroke, and the protagonist's wealth and status growth are not written, nor does it give readers a sense of gain! This is the biggest failure of this book! 3-In the early stage, the protagonist always tells his family how to change! But this makes people speechless. Can't you do it first and then talk about it? I feel like the author updates the word count every day without using his brain to think about and polish the plot, and writes whatever comes to mind! 4-Name, this is a small problem that affects the reading experience! The two brothers have wives and children, and they still call them brother and brother! ? ? ? ? Can't you just write about my brother? This is not an exception, there are some names in the article that are very awkward! In summary, 1- Transfer the words about men and women to the career plot, and the quality can be improved to a new level! 2-Poor choice of career line! 3-The design of the heroine, due to the author's personal self-interest, actually collapsed. The heroine was written into the character of today's women, which is inconsistent with the stereotypes of women in that era. The heroine is not highly educated, has few exposures to things, and is not as open-minded as the protagonist! Including manners and clothing! The reason is that the author did not write about the process of thought change, but the result is just up there! 4-It's a book with a bit of a taste of the era. I skipped through it later, but it didn't feel like I still had something to say! The author still needs to read more chronicles. Chronicles are not documentary literature. The main thing is to arouse readers' emotions! Comparing the author's new book with Shan Shenwa's new book, you can clearly feel the difference!

🌱🌱The Wenxian seedlings of the era🌱🌱 are not to be missed! I have read several of the author's books, and he is very powerful among chroniclers! The most important thing is to be able to write about the flavor of that era! The sense of immersion is also very strong. This new book can be said to be full of intensity and emotional value from the very beginning! Chapter 5 made me laugh! Can't wait to share it with everyone! It's just that the opening template is a bit old-fashioned, but so far it looks like it's been handled well and it's acceptable! I have the desire to subscribe, not only because of the excitement of the opening chapter, but also because of my trust in the author's strength! This is indeed a period novel that I am looking forward to!

65 points A work of food and grass! 1. The setting of the reincarnation of the ancestor is too poisonous. The sense of substitution is gone all of a sudden. It is clear at a glance who is the master and who is the auxiliary of a memory of about 30 years and a memory of hundreds of years. This is not a sense of dislocation that can be offset by the author's words or someone else's! The author of the follow-up plot also keeps emphasizing the identity of the protagonist's ancestor in his previous life, which is really vicious 2. The ten thousand-year elixir is too unreasonable. It is obviously beyond the resources that the protagonist can control. It is an act of seeking death! The family's development of large-scale sales of ten thousand-year-old elixir obviously has risks greater than the benefits, and it is eager for quick success and instant benefits. 3. A common problem among family members is to be a nanny! The rest of the family are of no use to the protagonist, they all seem to be a burden! And it was written about the third uncle or the one who asked the protagonist for weapons and puppets as soon as he advanced! 4. The author copies and pastes too much. Whether the protagonist is overcoming a tribulation or exploring a secret realm, you will find that he always changes his name and level, and then writes a few chapters! The plot is also like a matryoshka doll, upgrade, enslave others, explore the secret realm, change the map and try it again! 5. Weapons can be upgraded to overcome tribulations. A spiritual weapon allowed the author to overcome tribulations all the way to become an immortal weapon. It was clearly said before that the most powerful weapon is the Xuantian magic weapon. The inconsistency is unreasonable! 6. The plot is not too bad, but there are constant minor flaws. In short, it is watchable and a solid work! It's just too watery. If this book is checked for plagiarism by itself and 30% of it is copied and pasted, be careful when subscribing!

55 points The sea, you are all water! After reading books for more than ten years, this is the first book I couldn't stand because it was too watery. It wasn't because the plot or setting was too toxic! That's one reason water! The author taught me a lesson! It's so watery, a single apology in the middle of the bangs was watery for dozens of chapters! It's written like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long! Some of Cheluluan's words are exactly the same as before. Maybe they are copied and pasted, written repeatedly! It's water! I skipped while watching it. Can you subscribe like this? Theft prevention is useless, skipping dozens or even hundreds of chapters will not affect the plot! There is nothing wrong with the plot itself, the supporting characters are treated with intelligence, and it is also good to be a brainless and refreshing novel. The author has made some changes to the character relationships and images of the original work, but can you understand it as a fan? The cooking skills at the beginning and the slandered enemy agents were not handled well. They are still related to cause and effect. There is no reasonable source of cooking skills. It is impossible for enemy agents to review the source of the cooking skills without checking the source. A chef who made something out of nothing cannot explain it! In short, it's so watery that I can't even stand it anymore!

40 points! 1. The tone is too high! The author's setting for the protagonist is so perfect that he can just lie down and win. Why bother? 2. Niuniu! Helping people without restraint, giving money to build a house, not only harming people, but also looking like a holy mother! 3. Money! There are too many gifts, often hundreds, which is so unreasonable! 4. Emotionally, you are both responsible and established! 5. I stopped watching later and retreated when I saw Zhao Yingnan playing sadomasochism with the protagonist! Later, Shennong said it was even more poisonous! 6. The plot of the courtyard! This is the worst plot I have ever seen written by Siheyuan! You despise Siheyuan for being petty, but you can't even write this well!

55 points A suture novel with a heart as high as the sky! A protagonist who is out of tune with the times and full of loopholes! 1. The heroine! In the beginning, the protagonist is frivolous and flirts with several women. The key is that the protagonist takes the initiative to create misunderstandings. He can explain the relationship or coincidence in one sentence, but he has to talk nonsense to create misunderstandings! Later, Xiao Huang was taken in, but she was written to death again! After Xiao Huang disappeared, he actually got Yu Li pregnant and gave birth to a daughter, and gave Yan Jiecheng a hat! You are a bit both assertive and upright, and you are yelling at and attacking others about their work style, but you say you can kill three birds with one stone, and do you really think that your opponents can't find you out about your work style? 2. Technology tree! It's impractical to go directly to the submarine! 3. The process of rising to the top of the protagonist relies on surprising words! Talk about modern economic theory when you meet with an unfamiliar leader! I stopped reading when I saw Going Abroad to France. The more I wrote, the more outrageous it became. It's so clever! The author revealed in this chapter that he despised Goldfinger and wrote it only for the purpose of signing a contract. He despised the trivial details of Siheyuan and wanted to write about the grandeur of that era. However, the Siheyuan part is the readable part of this book. Fans have inherent advantages. Goldfinger can provide readers with the rationality of the protagonist Niuxx. No need to write it. Where does the protagonist Niuxx come from? It's hard to explain to readers, and it's even harder to explain to people of that era!

55 points. A failed panel flow article! As a brainless and cool article, if it makes readers unhappy, it is a failure! In the early stage, the economic system collapsed directly. It is not even said that the author "learned" from other books. The key is that he did not even know how to copy the economics! When you practice Qi and build your foundation, you start to play with deductive reasoning and cause and effect wishes. How do you write it down later? The secret realm of Danding Pavilion is the worst failure. The protagonist offended Master Ye and ran away thousands of miles away. Changing his identity is also full of loopholes. Under such circumstances, it is written that the protagonist is forced to participate in a martial arts competition and blind date, and then is forced to participate in the secret realm. It is completely outweighing the gains. The risks outweigh the benefits. It is childish to put one's own safety under the kindness of other high-level monks! The author explains that the protagonist can run away if he can't defeat him, but is it reasonable for a golden elixir monk to run away but cannot build a foundation? It's not like he has just formed an elixir. Which monk doesn't practice some magical powers to defend against attacks and escape? Once in a secret realm, I worked as a nanny for no pay. In the end, I killed other sect geniuses and offended several sects. What was the purpose? The flow of the panel is not stable. You have to eat the meat and let others drink the soup. There are a lot of risks and only two steamed buns for the profit. The protagonist can completely change the map. If he does not participate, the author is bound to his own outline and writes the unreasonable ones! Finally, the writing of the secret realm has obviously accelerated the finishing process. All of a sudden, I was upgraded to three levels in a row, sorting out loot, analyzing skills, and alchemy water. After a few chapters, I was upgraded to three levels in a row, and finally the elixir was not finished! A bad ending is nothing more than bad grades, but if you want to make money, you have to polish the plot. If you can't write mindless and exciting articles, what else can you pursue?

55 points A little something but not much In the early stage, it is good as a mindless and refreshing novel. Various plot arrangements involve all the animals in the courtyard. This is also the highlight of this book! Goldfinger, you can use it in the early stage. If you are a scholar, read more, but the reading is not systematic. Reading blindly is not good at writing! In the middle and later stages, Goldfinger has seriously deviated from the early stage. It is obvious that the protagonist no longer reads books and just socializes all day long. The key is that he can continue to give out system rewards. This is very unreasonable! The various black technologies in the early stage were only introduced at a reasonable time. But there is no rationality in the middle and late stages! Director Yang, as long as the protagonist reports something, just because it is manufactured does not mean it is successful. Doesn't the equipment need to be inspected and tested? The superior author also wrote all kinds of calculations, too petty and petty, and everything revolved around the protagonist! Around Chapter 1200, where the protagonist recognizes his bride, I can't bear to watch the prostitution for nothing. One is that the rationality of the golden finger is completely gone. Someone who has never been exposed to steelmaking directly takes out the formula and process and says that he has researched it. Where is the rationality? The second is that the protagonist's status no longer needs to be strengthened by acknowledgment of relatives. In addition to allowing the author to improve the word count, it is simply an existence that causes trouble for the protagonist! The only good thing about this book is that it educates people in a mindless way in the early stage, and the writing about climbing the technology tree in the middle and later stages is very vicious! I can't even stand the prostitution!

🌱🌱Seedlings🌱🌱 Is it a combination of Taoist talismans and traditional immortality cultivation? The author's previous traditional family cultivation of immortality was pretty good, a work of food and grass! This book feels better than that one at the beginning. If it maintains this level, it will become a masterpiece! However, for the combination of the two types, I personally feel that it is still very difficult to write well! ... Hey, I have read several books recently and they all got addicted in the early stages. They are not as good as the books with a score of more than 50 points. I have no books to read, so I will put some seedlings that I can look forward to. Those who are willing to follow up can come and take a look!

70 points, exquisite animal control products This book was a bit disappointing to be honest! It's much worse than unscientific animal control! The author obviously didn't put the effort into the previous book! The author is talented in writing books. The same plot structure is obviously more witty and humorous than others! However, both of the author's books collapsed at a later stage, especially when it comes to the concept of time and space. His logical settings are not reasonable and self-consistent, which makes me speechless! I hope the author has time to further his studies, and there is no shortage of money now! You can pursue your own breakthrough! After reading the new book "The Ascension of Beast Masters", to be honest, I have no desire to read it, because the author has not made any progress, and he no longer cares so much now that he is rich, so the quality is probably about the same as this one, and I have no appetite!

55 points A very disappointing book! The author's white-robed steward has read part of it, and the writing is pretty good. I was short of books and found this book to be really disappointing! The protagonist he portrays is a hypocrite, a bastard who wants to be a saint in front of others but also wants to control behind the scenes, a selfish person who pretends to take the world as his own responsibility! The supporting characters are all missing arms and legs, and the defects are exaggerated so much that the only normal supporting character is the female supporting character, and the others are all disabled people with missing muscles and strings! In terms of setting, once the protagonist's golden finger is opened, everything becomes mirror-like, just like telling you that a triangle △ is turned into a circle ○, and fooling the readers into thinking they are fools! Especially the clairvoyance and the supernatural power of bringing the dead back to life. The writing was extremely speechless! The world is a world of cause and effect. Things that are beneficial to the protagonist remain unchanged, and things that are disadvantageous to the protagonist are changed. The key is to gain merit. It is really a blind man trying to touch an elephant, and he will be self-righteous after just looking at the superficial things! The content also contains private goods, kneeling down and licking Buddhism!

70 points, a masterpiece of period literature This book is obviously much better after the author revised it! Currently, books like "Island Fishing Village" became popular after being written about by rice lovers who like to drive, and there are many more similar works! This book is different from small fishing villages. The main method is farming. It describes the development of fishing villages from another angle, which can be regarded as writing something new! The characterization of the second sister-in-law in the early stages of this article is very unpleasant. In addition to the character setting, the main reason is that the relationship between the protagonist and her is not handled well! People can betray, this is human nature, but how we deal with betrayers is the depth of writing! The author didn't write this well, so the character who gets the most complaints is the second sister-in-law! Generally speaking, the early stage is average, the middle stage gradually gets better, and the later stage is still full of fun! It is easy for writers of chronicles to fall into a misunderstanding, and that is realism! Especially he likes to write about suffering. You can tell him, he says this is the truth, but don't tell him, it will be depressing! When writing a book, you must first figure out what readers want to read, not what you want to write, otherwise readers will vote with their feet to teach you how to behave! Life is full of suffering, how can we spend money to watch the drama of suffering? What we need is the warmth and passion of the times! If you read a lot of chronological literature, you will find that the ones with good grades are about warmth and passion. The sufferings are all written in Spring and Autumn style, and there will not be many pen and ink descriptions! The author obviously made this mistake in the early stage, but he corrected it after being complained about a lot in the middle and later stages! If you can understand this in the early stage, the results of this book will be better!

60 points. If a new author writes to this level, he or she has passed! I really don't have any books to read. This book can be regarded as a complete story, without too many poisonous points. The author expresses his own thoughts. As a newcomer, he really passed the test! For readers, the reading experience of this book is a bit bad. There are no major problems with the author, but there are many minor problems. There are all the mistakes that new authors are prone to make, and you can't even think of them! As a rare commodity, the protagonist goes to the black market to sell the untainted elixir and others come to buy it. Before you can refine it, the protagonist brazenly says that no one but him can refine it. Brother, what's the point of your performance? This wave has no benefits and only increases risks! When I met Niu San in the sea, what kind of friendship do you have, brother? You just follow others to kill for something that is not scarce? It's normal for the author to want to write about friendship and love, and it's understandable for the sake of plot advancement, but this approach is too rough! The author needs to work hard on promoting the plot. The protagonists of this book are all actively involved, and the reasons are very far-fetched, which makes it awkward for readers to read!

🌱🌱Seedlings🌱🌱 I discovered it through investment in a new book. After reading a few chapters, I have the desire to read on! So far, the distribution of alchemist remuneration is a bit unreasonable, but the rest is okay! The golden finger of the protagonist also has a good scent effect! But in the future, I can only write the kind of plot about asking the sky and fighting for fate! All in all, it's worth looking forward to!

60 points! It's barely a brainless piece of writing! The early writing of this book is pretty good, and it can still be read without thinking! But it doesn't work when the protagonist starts to fight for world supremacy. The protagonist is written as a puppet-like character, following other people's rhythms everywhere. How can there be any sense of satisfaction? The cool thing is that the person holding the puppet is not a puppet! This book is also one of the few that I skipped to read later, and finally looked at the table of contents. I was not even interested in reading the finale! Although the early stage is also a routine, it is a mindless and exciting article. In the middle and late stages, it is only a routine, without fun, and there is no need to read it at all! To be honest, this book was quite a failure! I've read so many books before, and no matter how much I scold you, I'll finish reading the end. There's nothing I want to scold in this book, but there's also nothing I want to read!

59 points is barely enough food! It tastes the same as chewing wax! The author defines this book as Gou Dao Wen, but what he writes is timid and timid, and he cannot finish it from beginning to end! Plot-wise, is there a plot? They are all fragmented developments, filled with a lot of meaningless alchemy and potential point calculation analysis! There is no main thread to coordinate these fragments! Delete all these fragments of plot and you will find that they have no impact on the plot of the book! It is inexplicable to suddenly go to the secret realm of Zixu. It is better to put the plot of Zixu in Taiyintian, so that it is reasonable to be forced to teleport! Zixu's formation spirit was still waiting for the protagonist to inform him about the cross-border teleportation formation, but they didn't wait until the end! When training to the realm of Grand Master, the author obviously suppressed the protagonist's realm. When it came time to change to become a Martial Saint, the protagonist's realm was greatly improved. After the emergence of divine veins, it was even more outrageous. In a few chapters, he directly reached the level of a true god! It's definitely a mess! The author's ability and attitude are really not good enough. Do I seriously doubt that there is an outline? If you can't grasp the overall rhythm, it's because of your lack of ability. If there's no plot, it's because of your poor attitude! To be honest, there is no need to read this book if there are still other books to read. It would be better to waste money on it, and I have no expectations for the new book!