
The Lord of Time: from the Five Elements to the Hunyuan Ten Thousand Paths
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Traveling to the world of immortality, he becomes an old man. My life is about to end, but fortunately I can exchange my life with krypton level. Retreat from the eighth level of Qi refining to the seventh level of Qi refining in exchange for ten years of life. Although my realm has retreated, I am proficient in the art and my strength has not diminished. The villain is unfilial and colludes with foreign thieves...
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Official(16)Scraped 20d ago
It gets worse in the back, but it's fine in the front. The protagonist can still fight across levels. But he gets stronger in the back. As a result, six monks of the same level are fighting. Isn't that an instant kill of the opponent? You become stronger, but your opponent becomes weaker. As a result, the battle lasts longer, you almost overturn, and someone else wants to harm you. The protagonist is not thinking about revenge, but also wants to save someone who harmed you. Even Confucius could not repay evil with kindness. In the early stage, he can kill decisively, but later he becomes a bitch. Moreover, he kills people without touching the corpse, which makes him more and more poisonous. The writing is not bad, but it seems a bit unpleasant. The first hundred chapters are excellent, but after the last 200 chapters it gets worse and worse, becoming more and more soft-hearted.
Slipping away
It doesn't feel like the previous one, and the protagonist's IQ written in the second part feels like it has dropped too much. . . I feel that it doesn't matter if I go on various adventures for my spiritual body. . But it's this bottleneck that makes people so speechless. The protagonist acts like a fool when he hears this bottleneck.
It's boring when you start charging
Originally, the plot was okay, but I couldn't understand why I left the Aoki Sect. When I fell into the water, I didn't want to read it anymore. The plot was boring, and the book arranged for the protagonist to defy the sky and the cave. It was a failure. The plot had everything, so it was boring. The protagonist's system was enough. , But the reason why the writing is not exciting is that the author's setting is too awesome. The protagonist's system is similar to increasing proficiency and longevity. As a result, the protagonist goes to get wine and practice elixirs, but he can't do the spells and formations The problem is here. Where do you get the herbs for elixir training? You don't know Dongtian. You have a proficiency bonus but you don't learn a few powerful spells. The result is that this book is written in four different ways. You said that the protagonist Gou has everything and likes to take risks. Even before the start is successful, you meet a boss in the transformation stage who is also 6. There is also a problem with women. There is no problem with women, but you forcefully add a woman to the protagonist. It seems deliberate. That Ling woman comes up and betrays the protagonist. I don't understand this setting. How can someone fall in love with the protagonist in the early stage of the later stage?
After a good meal, the wild geese flew south and I thought to others:
! ! !
I could barely keep watching the first part, but then I started to collect the harem in the middle!
After reading the comments, I found it ok at the beginning, but then I became more enlightened. After only ten comments, I roughly understood what was going on.
It would have been awesome if it had been hooked, but it would have been boring to give him some heaven-defying magic. It felt like it was just to give the protagonist various ways to commit suicide.
The book is a good book. Shuangwen's new book is worth reading. The disadvantage is that it is expensive. 30 Yuan per piece is a bit exaggerated.
No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I will accept your infinite lifespan. What are you doing in a hurry?
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Official(16)Scraped 20d ago
It gets worse in the back, but it's fine in the front. The protagonist can still fight across levels. But he gets stronger in the back. As a result, six monks of the same level are fighting. Isn't that an instant kill of the opponent? You become stronger, but your opponent becomes weaker. As a result, the battle lasts longer, you almost overturn, and someone else wants to harm you. The protagonist is not thinking about revenge, but also wants to save someone who harmed you. Even Confucius could not repay evil with kindness. In the early stage, he can kill decisively, but later he becomes a bitch. Moreover, he kills people without touching the corpse, which makes him more and more poisonous. The writing is not bad, but it seems a bit unpleasant. The first hundred chapters are excellent, but after the last 200 chapters it gets worse and worse, becoming more and more soft-hearted.
Slipping away
It doesn't feel like the previous one, and the protagonist's IQ written in the second part feels like it has dropped too much. . . I feel that it doesn't matter if I go on various adventures for my spiritual body. . But it's this bottleneck that makes people so speechless. The protagonist acts like a fool when he hears this bottleneck.
It's boring when you start charging
Originally, the plot was okay, but I couldn't understand why I left the Aoki Sect. When I fell into the water, I didn't want to read it anymore. The plot was boring, and the book arranged for the protagonist to defy the sky and the cave. It was a failure. The plot had everything, so it was boring. The protagonist's system was enough. , But the reason why the writing is not exciting is that the author's setting is too awesome. The protagonist's system is similar to increasing proficiency and longevity. As a result, the protagonist goes to get wine and practice elixirs, but he can't do the spells and formations The problem is here. Where do you get the herbs for elixir training? You don't know Dongtian. You have a proficiency bonus but you don't learn a few powerful spells. The result is that this book is written in four different ways. You said that the protagonist Gou has everything and likes to take risks. Even before the start is successful, you meet a boss in the transformation stage who is also 6. There is also a problem with women. There is no problem with women, but you forcefully add a woman to the protagonist. It seems deliberate. That Ling woman comes up and betrays the protagonist. I don't understand this setting. How can someone fall in love with the protagonist in the early stage of the later stage?
After a good meal, the wild geese flew south and I thought to others:
! ! !
I could barely keep watching the first part, but then I started to collect the harem in the middle!
After reading the comments, I found it ok at the beginning, but then I became more enlightened. After only ten comments, I roughly understood what was going on.
It would have been awesome if it had been hooked, but it would have been boring to give him some heaven-defying magic. It felt like it was just to give the protagonist various ways to commit suicide.
The book is a good book. Shuangwen's new book is worth reading. The disadvantage is that it is expensive. 30 Yuan per piece is a bit exaggerated.
No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no
I will accept your infinite lifespan. What are you doing in a hurry?
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63 points What a pity! Get some quality food! I thought it was a small masterpiece, but in the middle and later stages it was really terrible! The setting is too petty! Still old-fashioned! The story of the rebirth of the Taoist master to break the blockade! Moreover, he is set to be the only one among the three thousand Taoists, and also suppresses other monks involved in this Taoism! Excuse me, what kind of orthodoxy do you still practice? Wouldn't it be enough to directly block Taoism and prohibit the sale of heaven and earth spiritual materials? The plot setting is not self-consistent, and it's just too petty to watch! I was also drunk during the heavenly calamity. I had to overcome the calamity after breaking through in physical training, and I had to go through the calamity again after breaking through in spiritual cultivation! What are you doing? Is it reasonable? Overcoming tribulation is the evolution of life levels. What did you write it as? Moreover, it's hard for me to refine my body and soul, and it's still hard for me to break through the realm of spiritual cultivation. So where did I go when I was refining my body? Fate, luck, time, really, if these counter-intuitive things cannot be self-consistent, don't write about them. There are a lot of problems and they will affect the plot! Where does the strength of the avenue come from? Time, reincarnation and space are always the strongest! Too low! Goldfinger, this book can only be used in the early stage, and it can only be written in the early stage. If the golden finger is useless in the middle and later stages, the book will also be useless! The reason is that the author, audience and tastes do not match! Grafting failed! It is recommended that before writing a book, you should think clearly about what you want to write. If you don't have a brain, then you will have no brain. If you write a good article, you will write a good article. When you tell a story, you should tell it well. It is not to graft the story on after a brainless article! This is an act of committing suicide!




Travel through the stream of cultivating immortals. Well written. Recommendation index three stars












