Longevity Begins with Learning

This article is very slow and clumsy. Of course, the most important thing is that there is something wrong with the three views. There are two main three-view issues. First, there is the issue of human nature. There is no right or wrong in this, it just depends on the author's way of writing. Since you want to write something that you can't even protect yourself from The protagonist, don't let him lament so much nonsense in the front. This protagonist is like a whining, sentimental and nagging Lin Daiyu. The author keeps letting him think about this and criticizing this and that. It is all meaningless psychological activities. The description of the current situation of the people arouses everyone's sympathy, but there is no way to change it. In the end, he can only protect himself, and then he repeatedly says that he feels sorry for others. In the end, he can only attract scolding. Is there anything wrong with it? Be a little less angry and talk a little less nonsense, can't you? Like other people's writings, they are quite upright and at least comfortable to look at. How can they be as twisted as this protagonist? There have been several fights, too. I was worried and excited at the same time, but when I found the enemy, I immediately became worried and frightened. The author may have wanted to write about the complexity of human nature, but we only saw indecision, grinding, and nothing like a man. Second, there is the issue of worldview. The author has been constantly emphasizing that the world of immortality is monopolistic and exploitative. It can be said that the word monopoly must be mentioned at least several times in each chapter. So let's see where it is reflected specifically? It turns out to be - paying for knowledge! ! Did you read that correctly? This author describes the monopoly of knowledge in the world of immortality. That is, there is a charge for knowledge? ! In the beginning, as a mortal, if you want to learn calligraphy, you have to go to school. When the protagonist hears this, he immediately says that knowledge in this world is monopolized! There are clearly public schools and private schools. You can say that the fees are expensive, but where is the monopoly? You can't just pay to learn? Once you learn it, you can also give private lessons! Do I have to teach you for free? Can the private school teacher survive without eating and drinking from the northwest wind? Are people teaching you that your labor is not worth the fee? Is charging a monopoly on knowledge? In the world of cultivating immortals, you can buy immortal cultivating techniques with three spiritual stones. If you need to explain the courses offered in detail, you will have to pay a fee. The protagonist immediately said that this is a monopoly of knowledge and the exploitation of others! Wtf? ? Where is the monopoly on something that can be learned by spending money? ? The bookstores have a comprehensive range of immortality cultivation techniques and are relatively cheap. There are also various classes offered. Where do you have the monopoly? You say? I have been saying that the monopoly of knowledge in the world of immortality is not as good as in the previous life. I am sorry to tell you that even now, knowledge is free. The nine-year compulsory education is just to eliminate illiteracy. If you go up to the world and study other things, don't you have to spend money? ? You need to pay to study various technologies such as high school and university postgraduate entrance examinations. What gives you the illusion that modern knowledge is free? If you charge a fee, is it a monopoly? Is it just wrong? Then why do you charge for this novel? Why not make it free for everyone to see? Are you monopolizing too? This kind of nonsense shouldn't appear in the author's place, right? In the novel, after each of them sells their skills, they will make people swear that they will not allow them to be spread to outsiders. The protagonist repeatedly said that this is a monopoly, and we should cherish it! Then I would like to ask, can the novel you wrote be distributed everywhere after readers buy the entire novel? If you don't agree, does that mean you're just being self-conscious? Isn't this exactly the same thing? There is also a protagonist who meets a colleague at work and asks them technical questions. They charge a fee, and he feels indifferent and only looks at the spiritual stones. But they are not familiar with you, so why should they tell you their skills for free? The author also keeps emphasizing that knowledge is monopolized, but there is only one sentence in the whole article I read: "Anyone who doesn't let me prostitute for free is a monopoly!" That's it! Why do so many readers hate authors adding personal stuff and constantly talking about the author's own worldview? It's because many readers don't necessarily agree with the author's ideas. We just come to read the story, not the opinions of angry youths. You yourself are the beneficiary of payment for knowledge. Why do you keep criticizing other people's payment for knowledge in the article? Do you know what a real knowledge monopoly looks like? Take a look at the knowledge monopoly written in the Xiuxian article next door. Do you still want to buy the exercises? Still want to go to school? None. If you want to get anything for cultivating immortals, there are only two ways. One is to change your surname and marry into a noble family. The other is to sign a life-and-death contract and work as a dog for a wealthy family. There are no circulating resources for cultivating immortals outside. That is the real dark monopoly. What are you writing? It is a normal matter of paying for knowledge, but you are forced to write it as a monopoly on cultivating immortality, and cultivating immortality in the dark, including the process of the protagonist. If he wants to learn medicine, he can learn medicine by paying money. The boy at the beginning can receive the teachings and inheritance of his predecessors in the village. How does it reflect the monopoly of knowledge? No matter what you think when you write it, there is no sense of immersion at all. I don't know if there is a problem with the proportion of authors or a problem with the three views. Anyway, this monopoly is reflected in the payment of knowledge. I feel very speechless. Even the free prostitutes can't say such things. The protagonist always expresses a long series of strange emotions in some inexplicable places. It is because the author adds too many private goods. No wonder there are so many negative reviews.

I don't know what the author's views are! ! ! I don't know how this book passed the review process! ! ! You don't have to be a so-called Holy Mother Bitch, but you can't have a trace of compassion! ! ! You have to know that someone will read what you write! ! ! When a country is full of sophisticated egoists, it means that the country is finished! ! ! There is no future for this! ! ! So I hope the author still has a certain stance when writing a book! ! !

When you know there is danger, you just don't run away. You have to wait until your butt is burned before you run away, right? You say someone relies on your father to bully you. Without his father, he is nothing, so aren't you the same? Without a golden finger, who are you? Are you calculating? What's there to say? I want to develop safely, but I can't help but mess with everything. Do you have to visit that place of the Killer Organization? Something is wrong with selling elixirs. You don't sell any elixirs anymore. Why don't you run away? That place is so fragrant? The same goes for buying a defensive robe. Are you so greedy for cheap and not afraid of fraud? Are you trying to get someone to give it to you for free? Or are you trying to find someone else's prescription? No brains at all. There are too many logical loopholes. Are all people who travel through time brainless? Don't you know what cultivating immortality is? Don't read any novels? I really feel like you are more imbecile than the people in this world. I thought I could watch it after reading the reviews, but here it is!

I'll give it four stars. I'm afraid you'll be proud if it's full of stars. As of Chapter 77, the plot arrangement is very reasonable. It's just that this person consumed a little too much. There is no shortage of food, but people also need time to grow. Nearly 2,000 people died in one county in a short time. Even if you have accumulated money at the beginning, it won't last long under this situation. It's time to recuperate and recuperate.

It feels like those who write novels these days are all studios. Because I was just getting paid, and I knew this book wouldn't be a hit. Just write whatever you want. Immortal now. Those in Siheyuan wrote mostly blindly, without any common sense of life. In the courtyard, we ate steamed buns and dumplings the night before, and one egg per person the next morning. We couldn't talk about it all day long. Raising children in a small courtyard is like raising children now. Writing about a specific environment should have a specific life.

The wanted order for the only sect and the only killer organization in the country, would it be fine in another city? ? ? What logic. When there is a sect that you can join, you will join when there is no way out, and you will take luck in everything. In the end, you will be bullied by the people of the sect. The hot-blooded person will say that he must kill him if he is not satisfied, and then he will be wanted. This IQ? ? ?

Is this the first time I've seen someone use the words "beautiful and colorful" to describe the scene of war? This is a disease and must be cured!

Holy Mother. In Xiuxianfang City, he worked hard to earn spiritual stones to support his subordinates. The reason was that he could help him share the burden in the future. As a result, I have been raising him all the time. You said it was okay for you to raise someone with high qualifications, but why is this useless person all dependent on your investment? There is also water, which is more water than that high in the sky, strengthening one point a day. Of course, it only becomes so water after cultivating immortality. Then there is the extremely low IQ. I could barely see it during the martial arts training in front

As the title states, as a fantasy novel, in Chapter 60 of this book, the protagonist comes into contact with supernatural power for the first time in a real sense, and then he believes that there are real ghosts in the world... I don't know what to say, just like the repeated doubts in the comment area, you have traveled through time and are still stuck, but you don't believe in the possibility of supernatural existence at the beginning, and you don't think of it in the direction of the supernatural at all after collecting some clues... The protagonist knew that there might be "real kung fu" as early as the first ten chapters, but it was not until more than forty chapters that he got the entry-level secrets, and then he didn't get started until ten chapters later. Then he still felt that the world was normal, and then he encountered a ghost ten chapters later and suddenly realized that the world view had collapsed... I can only say that this book is really slow to develop, and the protagonist is really simple and honest (literally)... [Emot=default,04/]

The author is too stupid. By the 100th chapter, there is no Qi training level. It's so slow. It's already 100 chapters. How can I write 1,000 chapters for a Qi training period later?